This is the feedback thread for 'Concocted Love', which you can read by clicking here. Please post!

I read your fic. I think it is pretty good. I would like to see you write more though. Keep it up, there are not that many harry/hermione fics so it would be nice to have a good one. Nice Job!

Thanks! I'll try updating as much as I can, thanks for being patient! It's because I'm trying to work also on my other fan fic, A Trickle Of Rain (link in my signature). Keep reading!

Just so you know, as I said it's not completely a Harry/Hermione fic, there's a little bit of Ron/Hermione in it too... You'll see! It'll be either Ron or Harry...

Thanks,

Witherwings

This is really good so far!! I've never thougt about what it would be like to have drunk a loive potion... Both of your fanfics are relly great! please update soon!
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Woo hoo!! you updated already!!! I wonder what Madam Pomfrey is gonna do...? hehe. This is really great! keep writing!!!
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Woah... Hermione kissed Harry!!! no way!!! poor Ron, I bet he'll find out...

It is good, nice uses of phrases and words.
But you GOT to write more.
Not just simple one liners.
I used to have short replies also, but then people gave me some advice.
Like, the gave me the idea of using Wordpad to make it longer and it worked!
So I will pass my advice on to you, so I do hope you use it.

Cheers,

Elizabeth11

Thanks for reading! Lots of suspense, I see... Well, thanks for the advice and the comments! I'll be updating in a minute again. I really appreciate reading your comments!

Thanks,

Witherwings

Hey!! I don't usually read any R/Hr/H triangle stuff, and don't even look at H/Hr stuff, but this is good and you should keep writing!!! Good Job!

Woah! she still likes him!! Oh no... this might end badly!! This is a really great story! keep it up!!
hey elizabeth11, what's Wordpad?

Yeah, what's Wordpad?

Snargaluffpod, you're my most, uh... enthousiastic reader! Thanks for reading, your comments make me laugh (your last one in my other fanfic... )

I'll update soon!

Yay!! I love happy endings! I'm soooo happy Hermy and Harry didn't end up together... I hate H/Hr fics... its so not right
You sure went out with a bang and a kiss... so congradulations on finishing your fanfic! it was really wonderful!

i just read your fic!! i liked it, it was really interesting: hermione and harry had a little bit of feelings for each other at one point. you definitely made it interesting. i really like the ending it was so cute!!! write more fics i will definitely read them!!

Thanks, everyone, for your comments! Just so you know, for those who mentionned it, I do have other fanfics, and I might start another one soon. Another one? Yep, haha. The links are in my signature, and for those who can't see it for some... odd... reason, here:
A Trickle of Rain
A Blonde Of Fury
Somni'amor
One Last Time

Well, read my other fanfics, get people to read them too, and post feedback.

Thanks,

Witherwings<3

Well, just like I said in "A Trickle of Rain", I am now reading your other fanfics. I just finished this one and I must say it was very very good!

Something unexpected to see Harry helping out George making a love potion, specially if it was for Hermione, but that's a different kind of plot, and totally enjoyable what happened to the poor girl. Seriously! Not only she was bewitched, but also left with the guilt of trying to figure out her feelings!!! Very creative!

I really liked it! Specially the ending! It was very romantic!

And one last thing... Did Ron drop the letter on purpose? Because I didn't quite understand that part...

But it was a very good fic! Still, my favorite of yours is "A Trickle of Rain", but that's another thread... Hahaha!

Keep writing! You have great ideas when it comes to plots and most certainly, I'll keep reading your fics! I'm moving on to "One Last Time".

Great work!

Thanks, everyone, for the feedback! I really do need more, though... lol

Well, I'll be writing my other fics, A Blonde Of Fury and Somni'amor. Tell your buddies about my fanfics!

Witherwings

Awesome practically awesome and v funny i wud like more of this

Well thanks, I'm glad it's funny too. It's great you left feedback and liked it. Hope you get to read my other fics too.

Thank you!

Witherwings

Ooooh, I LOVE this fan-fic!!! It's SO SWEET! By chance you advised us, because if you wouldn't, I'd be a bit (a lot) mad! But it's wonderful ... just like that.
Cheers!

Okay, thanks! I nearly forgot this one existed. thanks for reviewing and reading!

-WW-

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