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TaraLynn
Hey, everyone. Please post your feedback for my one-shot So Angry I Could Marry Him here. You all are awesome, and I can't wait to hear what you have to say!
fany_monkey
that was bloody amazing! hahahaha i loved it! you have me laughing and smiling like a dork! great one shot! seriously that was great! hahahahah it's so lily for her to slap him then say yes! :biggrin.gif

great job! i mean it!
snargaluffpod
Wow. That was so perfect. It's just like Lily, I mean, who else would smack a guy before she says yes?! ha ha. The ending was so sweet. It's just a little weird though, that they got married when they were 17? But I guess they just loved eachother that much! wub.gif
This is a really great fanfic. I love one-shots.
JSB 073
Aw. That was cute. She was so ticked off and even when she was asked a question, her hand e slams against his face. I laughed at that. But then she broke out in a grin and they're engaged. They kiss, i love you's... aw. cute. Loved it. Well done.

Just wondering, you're Falling for You story was deleted, I really liked it. So if you have time, can you repost it? Thanks.
Kelso2010
Holy wow that was awesome!! I really loved it!! I loved the anger and emotion you put into it!! When she slapped him I laughed.. sadly I would have done the same thing!! That was actually an awesome way to propose!! Keep up the good work!! Can't wait 'til you update your other stories!!

-Kelsea
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Omigosh! She slapped him, then said yes... aye, aye, aye! Well, that's J/L for ya!

But seriously, I thought it was a very good story. You're a really good author!

-Jasmine
marauderxforever
aw!! it was so cute, it felt as if i was going to melt into a puddle wub.gif
haha, but again, it was serious, but still made me smile, i love that she slapped him before saying yes, it was so like lily(:
GhettoTwerd
That was so cute and adorable!!! I totally loved it! Keep writing! You are really good. biggrin.gif It was a good one-shot.
rebel_megz
It was awesome. I, like everyone else, love the fact that she slapped him before agreeing. It's the typical James and Lily that I imagined. I just have a teeny question - why was he in so much danger, why would he get killed? Maybe I'm missing out on something huge, which sounds rather like me...
HarryPotterNut
Very good. I loved it where she slapped him! That is exactly what I would of done if I was Lily. Keep writing!
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