Please leave your reviews of my fanfic here. I would love to hear what you think! I will be focusing mainly on a new character and others involved include Harry, Draco, and professor Snape, etc. It can be accessed here.

Aww man this is a very nice story! I'm really looking forward to you posting again! Please post soon!

Amazing! This fic is amazing!!! i love it, and i love the little Lily Potter/Stephine. it is utterly adorable and i can't wait for more. it is sweet and i love the connection between Harry and Stephine. and DD's tear was very sad and i love McGonagall.
I love it all, obviously, lol!

oh and it may help to get more readers if you delete about half of the "*~*~*~*~*" because it breaks the page and makes it hard to read!
Post more soon please,

*BR*

Thank you for your comments. I wasn't sure if I should keep writing...but i'm really enjoying it. I went and deleted the *~*'s. Hope it makes it easier to read!

hey,

I just looked and I saw I didn't leave feedback to the first chapter yet, sorry. but I really like it. I'm not really in to this kind of story "Harry and twin" but this one is really good. everyday I learn new things and today (actually two days ago) I learned how good you are in writing stories so keep writing and I'll read it. (and I'll try not to forget leaving feedback again, sorry)

Greets Rox

hey,

I have to post double but whatever. I loved this chapter and I really hope you'll post soon again. I love to read this just before I go to sleep, it's just so good I don't want to stop reading. I pity Stephanie but she's a Potter and they're strong so she'll survive (I hope)

Greets Rox
P.S.: this time I didn't forget to post feedback

Thank you for your comments. I will continue to try posting at least every other day, but it's midterms..so we'll see what happens. I have a good grasp on where this story is going..and I am excited to be adding Harry into the plot more in the coming chapters. This is my first attempt at a fanfic and I am really enjoying it and am ecstatic that others are enjoying it as well. Thanks!

First off, i was not going all misty eyed at the end of this chapter. nope not one bit!
j/k i was close to balling, there were tears. It is a amazing fic and i love the pendants, that was so cool, and McGonagall's talk with her is so cute! i love it all, and i thought the Malfoy brand was a great idea and this chapter was just so good, and i love DD in these chapters, and Harry rubbing his arm and not wanting to eat anything.
Awesome job and we all are loving, (me Atleast) and enjoying this fic!
Can't wait for chapter 4!

*BR*

Heya steppy40

Ok I must first say sorry for the late feedback, but I had to read all the chapters seeing as I missed the first chapter so Sorry.

Now onto my feedback: I like this fic already it is something else but it stll follows the same line as most fics. I like it and I can't to read more. Post soon Plz

Again Sorry and I am LOVING is

dewet

heya again

the dewet at the end of the feedback is my brothers name he read this fic and I am his sister that is why he posted on my name sorry for the mistake

dewet and NIKITA

Heyy! Awesome story you have going. I love how it's original and how it deals with pain and being scared. It is definitely unilke any other fiction I have read on here. I am excited for you to put up the next chapter so keep up the great work!

Lauren

I must say yet again, that I really like this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Simply brilliant!

Amazing work, Steppy! i love it! sorry i did not comment on last chapter (bad me!) but i must say they were wonderful! and i love Hermione and Steph's communication! it was sweet and amazing and i love the little things like Hermione waving, and the ending my goodness! that was horribly wonderful!
More please !!!

*BR*

Thank you all for your comments. I truly appreciate hearing what you guys think. I swear this thing is taking on a life of its own! I started out with what I knew was going to happen at three certain points in the story (and have only reached one of those) and now it's crazy how ideas just keep coming. I am struggling with this next chapter, you may understand why when you read it, but I'll try to get it up by the end of the week. Thanks again for reading!

~Kristin

Ahh, that is so sad and sweet, and sad! poor Steph! i wonder what is going on with her! and Ron and Harry are so sweet with Hermione at the end, and i love the prophet paper, oh that is great! i really like McGonagall's worrying and Harry not for sure what to believe and i want to know more about what Siruis is going to do!
Great work! can't wait for more!

*BR*

Once again, what a great chapter! This is a very good story. Poor Stephanie must be so shocked and scared after what happened at the Quidditch World Cup. Oh I want Harry to get to know her true identity so much! But it seems to be impossible at the moment

Post the next chapter soon!

this is DEFINATELY one of my favourite stories! I usually don't like the stories where they make a new girl/boy a main character and change the story but for some reason, i absolutely LOVE this one ! it's a great story and you should definately keep up the posting every day !!!

Heya

This is dewet leaving you feedback:

I really like this fic it is really good I can't wait to read more. Keep the good work up

Post soon

dewet on my sisters profile

Ahhh, i love Hermione coming to the meeting and poor numb Steph! its so sad yet beautiful in its own way and i love the little things like when all of them - but Snape and Kingsley - crying as she talked! and the hug between Hermione and Steph was adorable! plus how in the beginning she didn't want them to touch her and she couldn't look at them!
and Snape being the owl - if i may call it that - between Sirius and Steph is great and i love the letter!
Great work! and i don't know if i can wait till sunday....

*BR*

P.S. hope you don't mind me calling her "Steph" i get lazy

Thank you so much for your responses. It is getting really good. And yes, I like to put in little things such as the snape/owl thing. It's fun to make fun of characters like that!

Buckbeak: I truly appreciate all of your comments. It's great to hear what portions everyone is enjoying! I have been busy writing and the next chapter is almost done, but I still have to perfect it. And, I call her Steph too. Such a cute nickname! I just hope I'm keeping people on their toes and guessing what'll happen next!

Thanks again everyone!

~Kristin

Heyy, I just finished chapter 8 and i love it still. You are really good at protraying emotions, both hapiness in other chapters, and extreme sadness in this one. I am really enjoying your work. I love the letter from Sirius. Anyone keep up the great work and Best Wishes

-Lauren

wow .. it's amazing! the story is just great ... i want to read the next chapter now ! x

I love this fic. That's it I simply LOVE IT! It's so brilliant, and I can't wait to read the next chapter so please post soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next, and I think it's very nice that you chose Ginny, to be the other one knowing Stephanie's identity. Please, please, please post soon!

Ahh that was so sweet and sad! i hate the malfoy man so much now it was so sweet how McGonagall went to the burrow to get the pendant to Hermione! and Ginny leaning support. it was so wonderful, and i love the ending for this chapter! it is awesome and left me on the edge of my seat (and i nearly fell off too). i love it all!
Great work, and i can't wait for more!

*BR*

wow !!!!! this story is amazing! stephanie is so brave its unbelievable! -- post the next one now!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for all of your kind comments. If I posted all the chapters I have written, there would be nothing to wait for! ~Kristin

Arg, I have to say it once again! I love this fanfic! I think it is my favourite ever so far I loved how you combined JK's Graveyard part with your own, and it seemed very natural. Very good written, and I really admire Stephanie's courage!
But what will Harry do, now he finally knows about Stephanie?

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

OMG! that was awesome, i am so speechless i really do not know what to write, because i have no criticism and i can't say i love any one thing because i loved it all! except i do love the parts with Harry trying to protect Steph! it was so sweet and the connection between them was awesome as was Steph protecting Harry and de-wanding (is that a word? lol) Voldie was awesome! loved it, loved it, loved it!
and yeah 11 tomorrow *starts bouncing up and down*

*BR*

Heyy! Chapters 9 and 10 were really awesome, excellent work! I can't wait for Chapter 11 because I want to see what Voldemort and the Death Eaters do to her. Please post it tomorrow!

-Lauren

Regitze: Thank you so much. Your comments mean so much to me. It's great that you are enjoying my story so much. I have big plans for Steph..I can't wait to see how she develops.

Buckbeak Rules: I'm glad you're excited! If you ever do have any criticism, just let me know!

Lauren: Thanks! It will definitely be up tomorrow!

Oh my god what a disgusting place she has been taken to I would be so scared, and I'd freak over the cockroaches! And Harry has finally heard the whole truth about Stephanie. I wonder what he will do to Draco once he gets well. Can he ignore that Draco mistreated Stephanie so much?

Wow that was a emotional roller coaster ride! i loved it thou, the way you did things was wonderful and i could not image anything better! it was a great chapter, all of it. i love the little things and the big things. and Snape giving advice was wonderful, as was all of it!
Waiting for tomorrows installment...

*BR*

How could you do that to me? I really wanted to know what the other 2 curses are! Well anyway, excellent story writing, you have a real thing for it. I really hope you tell us soon though what the curses are! I can't wait for 3 Harry Years! Argh, post soon haha.

Happy Halloween!

-Lauren

Thank you very much! And I will be hinting about the curses, but you won't know the full force of them until later on! Anyway, I have been writing more quickly than I thought so the next installment will be up on Friday.

Kristin

Once again a really great chapter!
I feel so sorry for Stephanie, and I can't wait to hear about those curses, but I understand why you want to keep that information for the time being.
And what is Voldemort playing at, trying to get her to kill her own brother! Obviously he hasn't clearly registered that she is as much a Potter as Harry, and that she doesn't want to help him.. But maybe the curses will make her help him?!
And that diary entry Stephanie wrote was just heartbreaking..

Can't wait to read the next chapter, love your story!

Again, thank you so much for your feedback! It is great to know what you guys like about it. ~Kristin

Steppy! You are making this story so interesting! It's really cool how Steph and Neville understand each other and Neville opens up to her. I also enjoyed reading how Steph's lessons went. I agree with your end comment, I am also enjoying reading how Stephanie changes during her time with the Death Eaters. I am so curious to know what Steph has to do that will cause her "excruciating pain" later on. I can't wait for 3 years! Well Draco got what he deserved at least. Now I think that's all I have to say on that chapter so please post soon!

-Lauren

Hey!

Great chapters once again! I understand how hard it must be for Stephanie at the moment, when Voldemort continues to say that he is the only one who truly cares for her. Thank God for the diaries! And yes, it is disturbing that she enjoys torturing Draco, but I agree with Neville saying, that it is also natural..
And it's really strange reading about a somewhat 'nice' Voldemort. I mean, as nice as he could be, even though I think we all know, that he is only pretending, and using Steph.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Post soon

I'm glad to hear the story is still interesting. I've been thinking I've been getting too much into the emotional aspect of it, but it's needed to understand what Stephanie is going through. Plus she's a girl! I've been having difficulty deciding how exactly I want her to develop and what she is going to do, but I think i've figured it out. We'll see!

Voldemort is definitely using Stephanie. He can't be cruel to her and expect her to work with him...he really is fairly intelligent.

Anyway, thanks for your comments. I'm really excited for the next few chapters and I hope you'll enjoy them! I admit the Death Eaters (Lucius, Draco, Bellatrix) are my favorite characters (besides Neville) from the HP books, so I am excited to really get into the meat of that part of the story!

Thanks for reading and your great comments!

~Kristin

oh my goodness you must think i stopped reading, but i didn't! i promise i didn't, but i was gone for most of the weekend!
All these chapters were amazing and there is so much i want to say, but i have completely forgotten it! but it was all amazing, it really was!
Oh one point that you may want to know. in 14 the first time she uses the Cruico Curse on Draco, you put "want" not "wand". haha simple mistake, but i thought you'd like to know
oh and Neville and Steph are so sweet and it made me go "Ahhh" and Ron is amazing!
Can't wait for more!

*BR*

Thank you, thank you for your correction! I am really picky about things like that. I read my chapters 3 or 4 times before I post them and I edit relentlessly! I can't believe I missed that! Thanks again, and I'm glad you are enjoying the new chapters!

~Kristin

HARRY IS BECOMING THE MOST STTUPIDST PERSON IN THIS STOR HOW COULD HE DO THAT HOW COLUD HE JUST BLUT OUT THE FACT THAY BEEN TALKING VOLDY MIGHT KILL HER NOW HES SO STUPID MALFOY WILL GO TO HIS FATHER AND TELL HIM,HE TELLS VOLDY,VOLDY GOS TO STEPINE AND KILLS HER FOR BETRAL DONT LET HIM KILL HER PLEASE SEND THE ORDER OR ARORES SOMTHING DO NOT KILL HER OR I WILL REFUSE TO READ DONT DO IT STEPPY

I would like to say how happy I am that you have become so fond of Stephanie. Thank you for your concern for her safety! However, I would like to reply to your comment about Harry's stupidity. I wouldn't say that he is stupid, what he did was completely understandable. He is frustrated and angry, especially with Draco's being so blunt and open about what Stephanie is going through. He lost his temper. I'd say he's a typical 15 year old boy. Whether or not Stephanie lives, I cannot say. The next chapter will be posted on Tuesday. I do hope you do continue to read my story.

Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate it, I really do!
~Kristin

Oh my god Harry what are you doing?! Not cool! Now Draco is going to tell his father and you're all in deep ****
But I do understand why he did it. Malfoy being so evil and constantly reminding Harry about Steph - and apparently also Cedric. Just annoying to hear someone like Malfoy abuse your sister all the time! Arg!

But what's going to happen now?! I'm sure Harry will feel horrible about what he has done..

Post soon!

Stupid Harry, but understandable. i would have done the excat same thing! and Snape coming just in time was awesome, and i love the two little notes, they were very cute. I really liked this chapter, it showed many emotions and it was just plain sweet. i love Ron holding Hermione and Neville holding Ginny's hands.
Great work, and i saw nothing that needed to be fixed this time! Very good!

Waiting for Thursday or Friday to come...
*BR*

Phew. I didn't want to leave feedback until I found out what happened to Steph. Thank goodness she survived. You always manage to give her a second chance, even when it seems as though all is lost. There have been many chapters in which I thought she would die, but she always pulls through. I was reading a couple of other previous comments, and I agree that what Harry did was understandable, we are all human after all, and I'm sure anybody else would've made the same mistake.

Your interpretation of the break-out was excellent! I never actually thought of how the Death Eaters escaped, but your version makes complete and total sense. I love Steph's insecurity of whether or not she can perform the Dark Mark.

I know this may sound weird or creepy haha, but my favourite part of this chapter was when Steph was being totured by Lucius and Voldemort because the detail of the writing makes you able to really picture what was happening. I find that with all of the parts that are about pain and torture.

I also love the fact that everyone is concerned for Steph. She always felt like she didn't deserve anyone's love, yet here are all these people who are concerned and crying for her well-being.

Well, I think that's all I have to say. You are an amazing writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

-Lauren

I am so happy that you are continuing to enjoy the story (and really happy there were no edits to be made! ).

And I've always wondered about the breakout as well. What always disappointed me in the HP books was the lack of information regarding things that didn't involve Harry. That's one reason why I set the story up as I did..not only do you get Steph/Death Eater points of view..but also other characters as well. It's quite fun to develop them into how I see their personalities!

I must admit that the two easiest parts of this story to write are the ones where torture is involved and Steph's feelings. The weird thing is they are also the most difficult because I am not such a dark person, but I do enjoy writing about it. I'm glad that you enjoy reading those parts.

Thank you for all of your continued feedback, I really appreciate it!

~Kristin

Heya

Ok this is really a great fic and I am sorry for the late feedback but seeing as my sister keeps the pc for herself I can't leave feedback.

So this is turning into one of the best fics there is and for that CONGRATULATIONS

Can't wait to read ore

dewet

Once again just great! This is great great great writing! I'm very fond of this story. I don't know what else to say it's simply brilliant.

Can't wait to read the next part.

dewet: thank you, and good luck fighting with your sister over the computer!

Regitze: thank you.

Wow, poor little girl! Bella is so evil! omg, the poor mom has to be feeling horrible and poor Steph! i like the little things like Snape doing all he can for Steph, its so cute! poor Neville as well and the letter/note he wrote Steph, oh my that AWESOME!!!
Love it all and can't wait for more,

*BR*