alright tell me what you think here. please be honest?!!!!!!!!!!
I get really depressed and not upto writing when people don't responed!!!




love my peeps
Aly

I'LL REPLY!!!

That was really good. A bit hard to understand but it was noce. Too short in my opinion though. I hope you update it soon.


Keep Writting,

Potters Princess

I think this fic could be really good, but you will have to make your posts longer for people to want to give you reviews. Be glad I'm reviewing right now! But don't feel bad... My only criticism is that you sort of have run-on sentences. You should try to use commas a bit more. Besides that, I think you have a pretty good start, but you should explain more about Ginny and this girl's friendship. And tell us her name... That's all!

-Ginevra Molly Weasley

well I'm a bit late but it's quite awesome and you should keep writing!!!!

What happens and next who is this girl all questions that we need answered!!

and people are going to give you advice! don't look at it as a bad thing they just want to help you write an awesome story

please post soon (really soon)

<3 Jill

I really like the concept and I'm not criticising you or anything, but I think it could have been a lot longer than that. Apart from that I think you should keep writing.

Namra