Wow, that was really awesome! You managed to put like twenty-seven things in here, AND they were all funny, or romantic, or really entertaining in some way, AND it wasn't rushed! Which, if I ever try to do that, it comes out really, really rushed. So good job.

Well, the cat's out of the bag now... I thought Mrs. Weasley was going to absolutely die when she found out... and then when they weren't engaged...

But now they are engaged!! Woo-hoo!! At first I was worried that maybe he only did that to please his mum, but he really seemed in love... And he is so excited to be having a baby! Good for him! I'm sure he'll make a great dad...

I loved the part where Percy pulled a face at Mrs. Weasley. That was probably my favorite! It's good to see a different side of Percy... good to know that he's a human... sometimes...

I don't know how long you'll be taking this fic (hopefully for a long way to come!), but it might be helpful to go behind JKR's door at her site... there is a family tree you might want to check out!

Great job, as always! A very lovely chapter... post soon!

Hugs,
Anna

I dont know why you didn't like it It's very good. It showed that everyone has changed and that Mrs. weasley can surprise us! Hope to see some more Chapters soon (thats for my love of this fic).

Regards
TWOTW

P.S. Argyle have slipped to 11th, but we're still in a few points off the playoffs. GL vs Arsenal

Okay, first time posting on your feedback, but this story is really great!! I'm loving how your doing everything in the story. I've had to go back and re-read it a couple of times because I couldn't figure some things out. I like how it started out and how its come til' now. I really like your last post. Especially, when George said his mum ruined the proposing to Alicia for him, and the pregnancy and everything. At first I thought Mrs. Weasley was going to explode when she found out that Alicia was pregnant and they weren't engaged. Well, I'll be waiting for your next post!!! Expect feedback from me!!!

<3 darktime93 a.k.a. Giggles

Aw.. Why didn't you like that chapter? I thought it was very sweet. I really smiled at Mrs. Weasley's reaction, and I thought it was pretty funny when George said how she ruined it for him when she was saying they were engaged when he was about to propose. And good job on putting in the name! I thought this was a really cute chapter, and keep on posting!

-Ginevra Molly Weasley

hi again...did i ever tell you you are an amazing writer...well if i didn't i am telling now how you put everything in words it's just awesome...you are a Jk Rowling in the making...mark my words.

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ronluver7:
Yeah, they're engaged and having little laddie named Fred sweet. The reason I say it isn't one of my favourites is because I never planned for that to happen, and the whole thing seemed to be a bit rushed in my opinion, but I'm glad you like it! I was going to make Mrs Weasley go off it at first, but then I thought of how she'd want George to be happy after what happened with Fred ... and a family argument is the last thing they all need before a big wedding! And I'm not saying much about the foreshadowing ... I hadn't actually thought of that, it was mostly aimed at Fred, but you may have got me thinking ... might be a while yet though! Ha I completely forgot about Charlie getting a trial at the Chudley Cannons so I just had to shove it in somewhere - that's part of the reason why I hate this chapter, cos everything just seems hoyed together in any old way! Thanks for your post!

Kaitlyn:
Hehe school never stops me either!! I'm glad people liked it - I thought it was a bit too rushed in order to get the 'sweet' part over, but I'm pleased you think it is! The only reason I made Mr Weasley and Percy leave for work was cos I thought there was too many people there and I would probably forget about them all, but yes, they would have wanted to be there! And the new Percy - yes, we all need a bit of reminding that Percy is also human, and in my opinion, witnessing Fred's death had an affect on him, and I suppose a bit of Fred's personality has rubbed off on him - I always thought tht was the case after reading DH. I actually forgot myself about how long gone Alicia was, so I threw in how long she'd been pregnant! Like I say, the whole thing wasn't actually planned to happen in this chapter - it was all meant to be wedding arrangements - so I'm gload you liked the proposal and Alciia telling him she wanted to call the lad Fred. Thanks for your feedback!

hp lover<3:
Thanks for loving the chapter! Yeah I was quite undecided about it like you say, but the reason is above ... can't be bothered to write it again! Even if JKR hadn't said that their first son was to be called Fred, I still would have done it anyway cos I think that would have been something George would be likely to do, but I'm still happy you like the continuation from DH! I think Mrs Weasley would be more interested in her future grandson than giving her son wrong, so there you go! When Alicia let that out, I just intended for her to worm her way out of it, but instead I thought that I might as well allow her to tell all! Which she did ... and George was over the moon about it! Glad you think they make good couple too! Cheers for posting!

amv_hearts_hp:
Actually, the pulling of 27 things in one chapter was what I didn't like about it, as I said above. I thought it may end up too rushed, but I'm pleased you didn't think so! And by the way, for the way you write, I don;t think anything in your fic could come out too rushed since it's all so well-written! Anyway ... a lot of people thought Mrs Weasley would be seriously p'ed off when she found out, and as I said above, that was my initial intention, but I changed it! No no, the proposal wasn't just to get on the right side of his mam, I don't think that's like George to do that! I haven't thought about George's fatherhood properly yet, but you're right, he will maek a good daddy Hehe I couldn't help putting in that bit about Percy pulling the face, I wanted to show he had changed, and most likely down to the fact that he'd witnessed his brother's death. Hmm ... I've already had a good look at the family tree, and I saw the programme too, but I might not be abiding by that ... I've already gone against it with the Victoire/Aimee thing, and I also imagined Hermione and Ron to have more kids, so I probably will be changing some things. Thanks for the hint anyway though! Cheers for the feedback!

The Writing on the Wall:
If you want to know why I didn't like it, see the posts below! I'm bit sick of writing ot now Yes, I'm very lazy!! Yep, everyone has changed, including Mrs Weasley, Percy etc.! Thank you for expressing your love for my fic!!! I don't know when my next chapter will be up, I've been suffering from a bit of writer's block lately, and I haven't had much time either with all my GCSE preparations blah blah blah ... Thanks for the feedback!

darktime93:
I'm getting so many new readers lately! It's great! Really happy that you like it, and I'm sorry you didn't understand a few parts; I tend to forget some things I've written so some of it might seem dodgy! Thanks for reading it all the way through too - I know it can often be tedious reading fics that are 4/5 pages long from scratch, so I appreciate the time you've taken to read it! LOL why does everyone thing Mrs Weasley is going to explode?! She isn't a stick of dynamite ... well she wasn't last time I checked anyway I loom forward to your feedback for the future, and thanks again for reading and posting!

Ginevra Molly Weasley:
If you want to know the reason, have a look up, I've written it too many times already thanks for picking up on the line about George saying she'd ruined it - no one else has mentioned it yet, so thanks for noticing! Glad you like the name too only fitting! Thanks for liking this chapter, even when I didn't! Cheers for your feedback!

The Master of Death:
Can't remember you saying that ... but that is such a high compliment, thank you very much! I really love getting praise like that, it makes all my writing seem worthwhile aww and I'm a JKR in thr making!? Well compliments don't come higher than that in the world of writing! Thanks a lot!

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Well, I've been suffering a bit of writer's block, but hopefully I'll be le to post by the end of the week. Thank you everybody for all your feedback and taking the time to read it! Much appreciated!

One last request -

Please check out my one shot for the January contest - the link is in my signature. The votes are getting quite close, and I'd appreciate more views, but even if you don't vote, please leave feedback as I haven't been getting much of that

Cheers!

~Amy <33

[size=7]DON'T STOP WRITING (typing anyway)!!![size=1] It always gives me antisepation when I think about this story! I know you're probably loaded up with homework, but I love this Story!

Wow! Mrs. Weasley is going to be planning a lot of weddings now; good thing she enjoys it so much. I like that Luna is going to be a bridesmaid; I definitely picture her altering the dress to make it stand out. That was also nice of Hermione to ask Alicia to be one too, I'm sure she really liked that. Mrs. Weasley is finally realizing how much she takes over , at least she says something now. I like that they're inviting teachers to the wedding. That's unusual, but they're so close with them it only seems fitting. That's interesting that Harry kind of decided to invite the Dursley's, I'm curious whether they decide to show up or not. I'm glad you included quidditch in that chapter. Harry enjoyed it so much while at school it's nice that he can occasionally play outside of it. You presented the perfect opportunity with the women talking of dress colors .

Nice chapters, keep 'em coming. How we all love quidditch and hate hearing about dresses, what a typical person I am. ANyway, great chapter and hope another comes soon.

P.S. 2008, yay

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FastfanHPg:
I have no plans to stop writing for this!! I just had a bit of writer's block, but that's over now, hence the new chapter I'm really glad you like it, but yes, I do have a hell of a lot of coursework to do, and it's really starting to get in top of me! My mocks will be over at the end of this week though so I might have a bit more time. We'll see. Cheers!

hp lover<3:
Yeah Mrs Weasley sure does love weddings, doesn't she!? Haha you really know what Luna's like don't you? Your guess is really good And Alicia being a bridesmaid, I wanted to show how close the entire Weasley family is to each other and that Hermione and Alicia are both becoming part of the family ... soppy And Mrs Weasley is finally admitting she's in the wrong - hard to believe, eh?! And I think that after seeing how close Harry, Ron and Hermione have become to the teachers, it would only be natural for them to be invited - I think they actually have a friendship more than a student-teacher relationship now. And I wasn't sure whether Harry would want the Dursleys there, so I let Mrs Weasley interpret that herself I'm still unsure yet of whether they'll go, but I suppose it'll all fit in when I write the next chapter! I wasn't planning on including quidditch, but I needed a distraction for the dresses, and it just came in the form of quidditch! Thanks for the feedback!

The Writing on the Wall:
Haha, even though I'm a lass, I must admit that I'd rather play quidditch than hear about dresses. I hate dresses Glad you liked it, and I'm working on the next chapter at the minute so keep your eyes peeled for tonight/tomorrow night thanks for posting!
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I forgot to post on this thread for my usual new-chapter-alert, so here it is now instead!

New chapter! It's 2008 words again but to get it at this, I needed to make the ending quick, so it's quite rubbish at the end! Anyway, the next chapter is one week until the wedding, so we're getting ever closer to the big day!

Thanks for feedback everyone!

~Amy <3

Interesting post!! I think that Mrs. Weasley loves taking over and controlling everything in your story. LOL!!! Well, I felt happy when you put the little part about Quidditch in there. It made it seem like old times. LOL!!! Well, post ASAP!!! Expect feedback from me!!!

<3 Giggles

Okay, I'm still looking forward to when you knowingly, purposefully make a chapter 2009 words long, and suddenly I find myself in a different chair, in a different room, and it's 2009...

At this point, Mrs. Weasley is slightly irritating... although, with her little break-down about how happy she is to have children getting married, she certainly redeemed herself in my eyes a little bit. She is a very nice woman... a little controlling, though...

I liked that they all played Quidditch. Just like old times!

It also seems like everyone is growing into this enormous, loving family... which is how it should be, of course. I liked that Alicia is going to be a bridesmaid... how sweet.

I don't have much time for as long a review as you deserve... but as always, great job! I am looking forward to new chapters... and Mr. Weasley's and Percy's reactions to all the news... Please post soon!

Hugs,
Anna

Geez, another 2008 word chapter? How do you manage to do that? I really liked this chapter, with the quidditch part and all. I'm glad that they still get out there and play. I actually liked the ending, I thought it was kind of funny the way that Alicia said he sounded like Dumbledore. I thought that it was really interesting the way that Harry wanted to invite the Dursleys. I'm getting more and more excited for the wedding chapter to come! Hermione said one month! That means it's coming up fast! Yay!!! I loved the way that Mrs. Weasely simply waved her wand and all the wedding invatations were all put into envelopes.At first I thought she would have all the boys start writing them out by hand but her way was much simpler. I can't wait for your next chapter so post soon!

~Ronluver7

Oh yeah! School can be disturbing towards my virtual life! Hahaha!

It is so much fun when guys take off when wedding arrangements are being discussed! Specially how you made Bill be the one to "rescue" them, he knows about having Mrs. Weasley around!

Aw, Mrs. Weasley is so excited! Everything you write about her is so sweet!

It was a very nice gesture of Hermione's to ask Alicia to be her bridesmaid! I liked her even more there! And teasing Ron! Hahaha! She's come a long way!

It's amazing how everything is set up for the wedding, now we just have to wait for the time when it actually happens to find out what they agreed on! I wanted to know what color were going to wear the bridesmaids, but I guess that's something I won't get to know until later!

It was a nice chapter, and I'm sorry to learn that you've got a bit of a writer's block! This is such a great story! You've come a long way with it! And I can't wait for the big day! Just one chapter away! Yay!

Thanks for a lovely chapter! Keep writing (when you unblock... *sobs*)!!!

Oh, and nice one with the word count!

I have some questions.
What happenend to Kreacher?
How is Kreacher's child, Pepper?
What's going on in aurora training?
Will Harry ever go to Hogwarts to talk to the students?
If Harry does, (pay super attention because I would do it like this, but this is to help you) could he talk to the first years and say, "Oh, in my first year I learned about the ....."
and he talks to each year about what he did when he was in that year?
Will George make a fake ear to replace the one he lost the previous year?
When will George and Alcia get married?

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darktime93:
Haha, glad I got across the point that Mrs Weasley is v-e-r-y controlling, especially when it comes to weddings! Thanks for liking the quidditch part I realised that I hadn't had Harry on a broom for a while, and I hadn't so much as mentioned him playing quidditch, so I thought I might as well include it in this one while the opportunity arose! I'll try and post ASAP but I he loads of mock exams at the minute and I haven't got a lot of time! Thanks for posting!

amv_hearts_hp:
Ha that would be cool to jump into a different year, just by creating a chapter 2009 words long ... must try that Again, I'm pleased you can see how controlling Mrs Weasley is, though it's not as if it isn't half obvious She doesn't really do it on purpose, just excitement gets the better of her most of the time! As I said, the quidditch wasn't planned, but it did just fall into place, so I just had to put it in! The Weasleys hve always been a large, close family, and I wanted to build on that and show that they're all together and are getting to know each other even more etc., and I just thought that since they were growing closer, it was only fitting that Alicia got to be a bridesmaid Sorry, but Mr Weasley's and Percy's reactions won't be in but I have a very good excuse for that - the next chapter will be a week until the wedding!! I wanted to speed things up a bit, cos I know how much everyone's looking forward to the wedding! Thanks for your feedback!!

ronluver7:
Lol, I don't know exactly how I do it!! It just sometimes happens to be about 2010 words so I take a couple out I like to be different And as I said to the others, I'm glad you liked the quidditch, cos I just realised when I fitted it in that I'd hardly mentioned it! Aw thanks for saying you liked the ending, cos I really thought it was bad! I thought of Dumbledore when I wrote the 'love' line so I thought it would be good if George said it, cos it's just like his character to say something like that!! I actually wasn't sure whether to have the Dursleys there or not, so I just included an invitation. Like I said in an earlier post to hp lover<3 , I'm still undecided about whether they should be there or not! Yip, it's coming in fast, and like I said above, the next chapter is only a week before the wedding I was actually going to have them all go round to hand-deliver the letters, but I though, nah, and just made Mrs Weasley send them with a wave of the wand! Thanks for posting!

Kaitlyn:
Urgh don't talk to me about school right now it's really getting stressful with exams and I just feel like tearing my hair out!!! Anyway ... fic ... yes. I've never actually been around lads when weddings are the subject of conversation, but I imagine that's what it would go like, and obviously Bill, who's been there before, knows exactly how they all feel! Haha I think that's the first piece of positive feedback about Mrs Weasley I've received! Everyone else reckons she's controlling, which I agree with 100 per cent, but it's a nice change to get that I couldn't really think of another bridesmaid for Hermione, which is sad really, cos she doesn't have many friends, but it fitted in nicely to make Alicia the bridesmaid since they're all becoming a family! Woo I'm glad you mentioned Hermione teasng Ron I liked that part, if I may say so myself! Want to know something? Hardly anything is planned out in my head about the wedding!! I'm going to wait until I write the whole chapter til I make decisions about colours etc., so I know only as much as you do ... well maybe a little bit more I'm really glad you like my fic, but I'm afraid I've been slightly re-blocked and I just have so much homework and revision and ... okay, must stray away from the subject of school again. Cheers for your feedback!

FastfanHPg:
Ahh, questions ... right. Well first of all, it's Peppy, not Pepper and Kreacher is alive and well at Hogwarts, as is Peppy. I was actually going to be including them in the wedding chapter, so you don't have to wait long for that. Well since the auror training is such a long, ongoing thing, I haven't mentioned it as much, so there'll be random bits scattered into the story, but it's going well for Harry. He's only just left school, so it might take a while for him to go back to Hogwarts yet! Just be patient, cos it isn't going to all come at once, I want to spread the fic out. And that's a good idea about what he could say, I'll bear it in mind, though I'm not promising anything! George won't make a new ear ... I just don't think it's necessary, and anyway, it's a nice reminder of what he sacraficed to help save the wizarding world/ When will they get married, you ask ... when I make them get married - which is, I don't know when! I'll just have to see what happens as it progresses.

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Thanks for all your great feedback!! I'm sorry I haven't posted in a couple of days, but like I say, I have so much homework and exam prep so I don't know when I'll next be updating. I think I'll probably post a chapter on my other fic before this one cos I'm halfway through a new one for my other fic.

Cheers!

~Amy <3

Can you please continue?You are the best kid writer I have ever seen.

Here's feedback again for my favorite writer and favorite fan fiction. awesome chapter. i liked the bit about firestar. my! i would like to fly it.and how come Ron and Charlie was Handicapped against Bill, George and Harry. Urgh! what an idiot that katie is. I am glad to see a whole new chapter and i will want more

HOW MUCH LONGER DO I HAVE TO WAIT!!!!!

Look, I'm glad you're eager, but I have hd SO MUCH work to do recently! It's not easy to keep 2 fics going on top of GCSE exam preparations! I'm going as fast as I can, but I'm not sure when the next chapter will be.

~Amy

I'm trying to wait, but right now I need something to look forward to and it's almost been a week! Sorry........ I just love this fic so much and I'm trying to keep my mind off this, so PLEASE, Please, please, hurry. Be Happy! (Random yes I know)

Ticck.... Tock......... Tick.........Tock.

This is getting soooooo exciting :shutup:that I've got butterflies in my stomach . It's a good thing that George and Alicia told Mrs. Weasley. George must like the name of the baby, Fred. George has been feeling quite lonely since Fred died. He will have a companion with him .
I'm almost done with the fourth page. Keep on posting. I'm dying to read this fanfic and get to the wedding and when Fred gets born . I'm giving you a big thumbs up .

Hey again. I finished all four pages . It's still very exciting. I hope you post again soon. I'm dying to see the next few chapters of ~The New Start~. I can't believe that Faye, Luna, and Alicia are going to be the bridesmaid. I feel like my butterflies will explode . I hope the wedding will go well, and that Harry passes his Auror training.

The way that you're posting is giving people the excitement.
Keep on posting Another thumbs up .

P.S.: I'll try reading you other fanfic to see how it looks.

It's so close to being a full week and I've been tring to get my mind of this story, but I can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I check out some other stories but my mind seems to wander here! What's up with that?!?!?!?!

ariannamontez:
Aye, don't worry, I'm continuing! I'm flattered you think I'm ther best 'kid' writer ever means a lot!! Cheers!

The Master of Death:
Aww thanks for saying I'm your favourite writer and have the best fiction! It's so kind of you to say I would also love to fly the firestar ... I've always wanted to fly a broomstick, and since this is the fastest one (cos I say it is ) it would be twice as good to fly it!! And the teams - I just chose them at random, I'm not sure how I came up with them! Glad you want more, cos I'll be posting the new chapter as soon as I'm done with this feedback!! Thanks for posting!

Roman_tic:
Wow, thanks for reading the whole thing!! It must have taken you a while with it being so long, so I appreciate it! I hope your butterflies don't explode. That could hurt you. I wouldn't want my reviewers to get hurt Thanks for saying it gives excitement, but maybe a little too much for some people ... three guesses who thanks for leaving feedback!

FastfanHPg:
*Sigh* like I said, I appreciate how eager you are, and it really makes my fics seem worthwhile, but please don't demand chapters all the time, cos it puts me under pressure to finish them, and with the one I've posted, I'm sure I could have done a lot better with it if I'd given myself more time.


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I'll post the new chapter now! Please leave feedback!!

Oh and by the way, this one is dedicated to Anna, as I have done what you were waiting for - a chapter with 2009 words, and that's exactly what this one has!! Enjoy!!

~Amy <3

Well, I am just laughing my behind off that you wrote one with 2009 words... I'm so flattered! You pretty much made my day... funny how stuff like that makes me so happy... Although I was a bit disappointed when I didn't zoom into the future... hahaha.

So on to the actual chapter... I thought Hermione's parents were absolutely hilarious. They remind me a bit of my own. In a loving, good-parent way, of course. And then Harry and Sara's reactions were priceless. Tee hee. I bet Hermione was mortified.

And then how Hermione sort of took care of Ron was sweet. She seemed a bit peeved, but she could see that he was tired, so she gave in 'cause she loved him so much... aww... she'll make a great wife.

So now it's on to the wedding countdown... dum, dum, dah-dum... how exciting! I can't wait!! It's nice that Neville is going to be best man... he he, almost fell out of his chair...

Good luck with exams and whatnot, it sounds like you've got a lot on your plate... we just finished midterms, so thank goodness I can stop studying! Well, for now... Teachers never stop piling it on, huh??

Great job, as always! Kudos!

Hugs,
Anna

Nice post!!! Man, everytime I read a chapter it seems, your writing gets greater and greater. Ohh...I can't wait for the wedding. I hope nothing unexpected happens . I kinda doubt there will, but I've got a feeling something may happen. Well, Post ASAP!! Expect feedback from me!!!

<3 Giggles

That was a great chapter. My favorite part was when Hermione's parents were pestering her about sharing a room with Ron. I thought that that was hilarious. I also enjoyed the part when you mentioned that Nevellie was Harry's best man. The whole falling out of his seat thing was so typical. Wedding chappies coming up! I'm getting excited, but you can't skip what happens at Grimauld place, that would all be too much fun to miss out on. Great 2009 word chapter. Post soon!

~Ronluver7

Congratulations on winning VTM's January contest. I really enjoyed your one-shot, and think it very well deserved .

Oh my gosh! The wedding is so close, I didn't realize it was only a week away. How exciting! I can't wait for Ginny and everyone to come home. I must say I LOVE Hermione's parents. I started laughing so hard when Hermione glared at Harry to lie to her parents about the sleeping arrangements. It was just so funny, and her mom kept trying to say something about how she felt about the situation. That was just a great scene, because it's one of the awkward parent moments that teens always go through with their parents. I also liked the last bit of the chappie when Ron falls asleep, and Hermione just isn't surprised at all.

Sorry again. I have low paitince and I don't really have anything else to do. I'm a fast reader and I always end up having extra time. Friday I started reading The Unknown Potter and I must say it's quite good. From now on when I post I'll make sure (at least I hope) to always do it in the feedback area and I'll try to think about things from your perspective. If I find a wat to delete my accidental posts I will, but right now I don't have the faintest idea.

Great New Chapter Can't wait for the weddin' now. Oooohh, embarressing parents, annoying friends and love, oh its all coming together. How far into the lives are you going, or do you not know yet? Can't wait for the next chapter

Hello all!!!

I'm not replying to feedback just yet, I don't have oodles of time, but just to let you all know that I have changed my name! Don't worry ... I'm still Amy, but my screen name has now changed ... obviously

I'll reply to feedback later tonight, but cheers for what I have so far!!

~Amy <3

Great new chapter and I'll try to stop pestering you about the chapters.

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amv_hearts_hp:
Yep, specially for you! Lol, I must admit, I was counting on that chapter to take me to the future, and I was equally disappointed And life goes on ... but in 2008 HA glad you liked the part about Hermione's parents! Linda is the concerned mother who doesn't want her daughter pregnant before she's even married, and John's just a laid-back kind of bloke ... they were based on my own parents I think I would act like Sara and Harry if I was watching my mate getting 'the talk' off her mother ... it would be hilarious! I had Ron in that radgee sort of mood because I think it was DeSs who said that Ron was a bit unlike his usual character, then when Hermione was a bit annoyed, I brought back a little bit of the old Hermione ... but I prefer both the new ones now Eeeh I'm busy writing the chapter before the day of the wedding if that makes sense ... basically, the wedding day is in 2 chapters!!! I couldn't think of anyone to be best man for Harry, but I thought that since Neville has helped Harry so many times in the past it was only fitting ... then I just had to add that typical Neville moment of falling off his chair! Cheers for wishing me luck on my exams but it didn't work ... only got a C in German and a B in French damn. Ah well. Thanks for posting!

darktime93:
Aw thanks for saying my writing keeps getting better! Wait ... does that mean it was rubbish to start with? only joking! I've hardly got anything planned for the wedding yet ... a couple of ideas, but maybe a surprise will strike me soon thanks for posting!

ronluver7:
Pleased you liked the chapter - and Hermione's parents' views on the sleeping arrangements - I couldn't resist putting it in, and like I say, they were based on my parents! Neville is best man - and it's pretty obvious he would fall off his seat when he found out ... unless he was standing up, in which case he would fall off the ground I was actually going to go straight to the wedding after this next chapter, but since you requested it, I've decided to slip a little bit at the end It's only a little bit, but it's better than nowt. Cheers for your feedback! Oh and by the way, I'm not sure if I've told you already, but i LOVE your avatar! I've never seen it before, but it's really cool

hp lover<3:
Thanks very much for offering your congrats! It's much appreciated, and I'm glad you think I deserve it! Yep, just a week til the wedding! Well ... after this chapter, it is the weddding! Hehe I'm reet excited to write it!! Ginny and co. will be here soon, don't worry about them! And Hermione's parents ... I had to have a bit of fun with those characters! The opportunity was there, so I had to write that bit! Her parents are so like my own - the relaxed dad and the uptight mam - and we all know what it's like for parents to go on like that! Like you say, all teenagers go through it, so why shouldn't Hermione?! Even if she is 18! Actually, she'd be 19 now ... damn, forgot to include a birthday party thanks for posting!!

FastfanHPg:
Haha, like I say, I love how enthusiastic you are about reading my fic, but thanks for cutting down on the posts I appreciate it, and thanks for posting to say that! Cheers for reading the chapter as well!

The Writing on the Wall:
Nobody can wait for the wedding! In every post there seems to be a mention of how (not) far away the wedding is - I'm not complaining, by the way, I love it!! I might just wait a few weeks until I post to keep you all hanging I don't really know how far into their lives I'm going - I really want to do about them having kids and stuff, but I don't think I'll be going by what information JKR gave us - heck, Ron and Hermione are having more kids than just 2! Thanks for posting!

DeSs:
Short, but positive! Glad you liked it, and you shouldn;t have to wait too long for the wedding - I don't know when I'll next post after this next chapter though!! Cheers!

CHAPTER 70 IS UP!! Enjoy, and leave feedback!!

~Amy <3

Okay, I absolutly loved the ending. That or the middle where the trio are chopping vegtables, I can't decide which part is my favorite. I'm so glad that you did that chapter. It was nice to know what happened in the middle of it all. The wedding is next! Whooooo! I'm pumped up and ready for the next chapter. I thought that it was nice so many people showed up for dinner. That was sweet. I enjoyed Sara's reaction to Kreacher, I thought that it was pretty funny. I can't wait for the next chapter...squeee!


~Ronluver7

P.S. Thanks, I hadn't seen the avatar before either. I just happened to stumble across it and liked it. Thanks!

What?...Oh the new chapter is up.... YAY! I'm so glad I deceided to check my e-mail otherwise I would not have known. I'll read and tell you what I think as soon as I can (and I hope I do that before I fall asleep tonight).

Yay! Kreacher's back! I like the chapter, it is just building up anticesapation! Okay.... I had to make sure for a second that I was in feedback. I don't want you mad at me for posting on your stories so I've been trying to be more careful.

hey. i liked the two new chapters. as good as usual or better but there is a few points i will like to mark which i am sure i wouldn't have noticed if i didn't read the chapters 3 times. its just that I doubt Ginny would ever have the guts to tell Mrs Weasley to cook and the other thing is Ron knows what a kettle is. In GOF he, Harry and Hermione uses it in the Quidditch World Cup and i beg you to forgive me if i am wrong but it is highly unlikely Mrs Weasley makes Harry and Hermione to help with the 'chores' while Ginny and George has some rest. but it is really good and i liked the new chapters really much especially i am really fond of your description of Luna's character. proves again and again that you are an excellent writer.
Master Of Death
Ps: waiting patiently for the next chapter

w00t, new chapter. Great as always. Like the Luna stuff. I know i have haven;t posted for ages, but ive been busy for AGES, grrr. Argyle doing badly. Umm, well done again, so cya.

P.S. MORE THAN 2 KIDS, YAY

Excellent chapter!! Sorry about my last comment, LOL. What I meant to say was that when I started reading the first chapter of this story, I thought it was great, and then I meant to say it has been getting greater and greater after every chapter. I thought this particular chapter was funny, because Harry, Hermione, and Ron had to cook. I also, wonder why Mrs. Weasley was so enlightened after she came into the kitchen to see how the trio were doing on cutting the vegetables. Well, again excellent post. Post ASAP!!! Expect feedback from me!!!

<3 Giggles

I loved that chapter, it just made me really excited for the wedding! That's great that Ginny and everyone else is back now. It's about time since the wedding is only a week away. My favorite part in this chapter was when Harry was joking with Ron and told him that Hermione's parents knew about the sleeping arrangements. That part was just fantastic. Ron's reaction was perfect. That was nice of Kreacher to see if Harry, Ginny, Ron and Hermione needed help with the wedding. He even bowed to Sara. Even though you said it was with slight stiffness. I'm glad you included that though, because old habits die hard. I also liked when Ron was apprehensive about going upstairs with Hermione. At least he's really concerned about what her parents think, and is trying to be a good son-in-law. I can't wait for the next chapter

Oh yay! The next one is the wedding! The one everyone has been expecting! Aw! I can't wait to see what you came up with!

It's been such a long time since I last posted here that I feel the need to congratulate you on winning the January Contest! It was a great fic, and I left you some feedback on its thread just to let you know. Seriously: Great Job!

Now, on to the story:
Oh yes, I'm a huge Mrs. Weasley fan... She's the perfect substitute mother for Harry and that's why I love her. I bet Lily would be really happy to know that Molly's always trying to take care of him. She's just so sweet and you portray her in such ways that make me think that she definitely would have done that given the opportunity! This chapter wasn't the exception. It was funny when she made them start dinner while she went to greet the guests, and them took them away from it. She's so charming!

I loved how enthusiastic Ginny was of seeing Harry again! At first I thought she wasn't being mushy enough, but your Ginny is exactly the same as JKR's, she's not as mushy as I want her to be either! And in this chapter she was so happy that it only made sense! I loved her!

Harry's joke on Ron was great! Their friendship would only go to those lengths! Hahaha! Nice one!

And poor Sara meeting Kreacher! That was really funny! It's different to have a muggle amongst them, and I bet Harry can finally get to see what he was like when he started school at Hogwarts! She must be someone he can relate to, because even though Hermione is muggle-born, she was always on top of things!

I liked this chapter, it was sweet, there was so much to it! And now! The much anticipated one! Yay! I can't wait! I know it will take lots of work, because of what you said in your reply (see, I avoided school-related topics completely! Hahaha!) and my only wish is good luck with everything you have to do for school! (Sorry, couldn't help myself!) I know it will come out great, just like every single one of your story so far!

Thanks for a great chapter! I loved it!

Feedback for feedback!

ronluver7:
It makes me feel like I've done a good job when you can't decide what part you liked best, so I'm happy with that! I'm glad you liked that part, because like I said, that part was written specially for you! And I'm pleased you liked the big dinner guest list ... I was afraid there were too many people there, but I really wanted to include that long list! I liked Sara's reaction too - I thought that would be exactly how a muggle would react at seeing a house elf for the first time thanks for posting!!

FastfanHPg:
Glad you like it! And woooo Kreacher's back! I like building up the anticipation, but there won't be much more of that seeing as next chapter is the wedding thanks for your post!

The Master of Death:
It's nice to know my chapters keep getting better but about Ginny telling Mrs Weasley to cook - I think she would, because I remembered in OotP when she was getting huffy for not being allowed to listen to the Order meeting with Harry dn everyone, so I think she would sometimes talk to her mum like that. But damn ... I forgot about in GoF!! I hate getting little things like that wrong thanks for telling me though, and thanks for giving me your opinion too! I do like getting constructive criticism! I quite agree with you on that last point though - I doubt she'd get Harry and Hermione to cook when they're guests, but I wanted them in the kitchen so Harry could play the 'joke' on Ron Aww thanks for saying I'm an excellent writer

The Writing on the Wall:
Glad you like the Luna stuff! I love writing about her because she is such a vague and fun character! Don't worry about not posting ... I can relate to having lot to do, I've been the same! Oh yes, definately more than 2 kids! R/Hr is my favourite fic, so I must be true to that! And you think Argyle are doing badly?? The Toon lost 4-1 to Villa yesterday ... now that's bad, especially after being 1-0 up at half time! Well, I'm getting now, so I'll shut up. Cheers for posting!

darktime93:
Aw I was only having a joke about your last comment but it's still nice that you've again said my chapters are getting better! Thanks for that! Yep, the trio were back to their old chores when they used to go over for Christmas and the Summer! I don't think they'll ever get shot of the old cooking chore sorry, there wasn't supposed to be anything in that about Mrs Weasley being so happy when she came into the kitchen - I just wanted to show that she was in a better mood after talking to all the guests! Thanks for posting!

hp lover<3:
You aren't the only one excited about the wedding! I'm busy writing it at the minute and I'm excited myself Haha glad you liked the ongoing gag about the sleeping arrangements - I nearly made Ron chuck a carrot or something at Harry's head, but I actually forgot to put that in but I'm glad it was decent enough anyway! I'd been planning on making Kreacher just turn up at the wedding, but I included it in this part because I wanted to put in Sara's reaction And like you say, old habits die hard, and I can't see Kreacher willingly making a proper bow to a muggle - it took him long enough to get used to Hermione, after all! I'm glad you caught on about Ron wanting to be a good son-in-law - he's waited long enough for Hermione, and now he has her, he won't want to mess it up with her parents! Cheers for your feedback!

Kaitlyn:
Woo long post!! Get in! I can't wait to see what I come up with either I have hardly any of it planned, but I'm working on it now! Thanks for congratulating me! I think I replied to yours feedback too ... can't remember, but I'll check once I've finished writing this! Really glad you liked it though, cheers! Yeah, Mrs Weasley is just like a mother to Harry; he's never had one, so it's good to be able to write about someone who can be liek that for him! I had to bring back the old personality of her though - the one where she makes them do all the work! I contemplated making Ginny be all over Harry when she came in, but like you, I thought of JKR's version of her, and I thought she'd probably not act all girly with Harry, so thanks for saying that! LOL glad you also liked the joke Harry played on Ron - like I said above, I was going to have Ron hoy a carrot at Harry when Mrs Weasley walked in, but I didn't remember I never actually thought of Sara being a way for Harry to remind himself of when he first started Hogwarts and he didn't have a clue about magic, but you have a point! It is quite similar to when he first found out about him being a wizard (except Sara isn't a witch!) and Sara's reaction was just wht I thought any muggle would do (myself included!) Aww thanks for wiching me luck! Yep, back onto school well my real exams don't start properly until May, but the mocks are just as bad! Thank yooou!!

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I'm glad you're all eager for the next chapter, but I don't know when it will be, because it's quite big so I want it prefect!

Plus, I'm not sure whether to have it in 2 parts, or just make one long chapter! I dunno ... let me know your view on that and I'll get it up as soon as possible!

Thanks for everyone who read, and bigger thanks for those who posted!

~Amy <3

That chapter was written speacially for me?! Wow, thanks! I think you should do the wedding chapter as one long one so that none of us readers die from the suspense of having to wait about a week before the next one comes out, just my opinion, cause some people like the suspense! Post Soon!

~Ronluver7

Thanks ronluver7!!! I probably will end up writing it as a long chapter, but that means you'll have to wait longer for it

I know I should be working on this fic, but I've just written my first songfic, so please check it out!! The link for it is in my signature, it's called Gone With The Sin.

Thanks!!

~Amy <3

I'm just at chapter 13 now, but I can't contain myself!

It's brilliant!!! I'm absolutely stunned at your writing abilities!

See if Rowling will buy the story from you

Back to chapter 13 then


P.S. Greetings fellow Geordie! (I wasn't born in Newcastle, but my parents were and they're quite intent on me using Geordie mannerisms when I'm surprised or angry! Hah!)


Edit: *Does a happy dance*

Just finished reading it now, looking forward to the next chapter/s

I was thinking it would be a Valentines Day post for the wedding, but it was not to be Never Mind. Please can someone shut me up. I've been to hyper because of this fic, buzzzz, see, its driving me MAD. POST soon, I'm going crazy. Have you gone on half term yet by the way? Hoping for a post soon!!!

Feedback for feedback!

Professor Nutbutter:
Thanks for reviewing, even though you haven't finished it yet! I'd love for JKR to buy it from me, but out of all those stories out there, why would she buy mine? I'm so flattered you said that though FELLOW GEORDIE!!! Woooo! I'mnot surprised your mam and dad make you use Geordie, becasue it's the best accent in Englan - no joke, that's what the results were in a survey!! Ahh, how I love the Geordie nation Oh, thanks for finishing my fic!! Must have taken a while

The Writing on the Wall:
Aww sorry, no Valentine post! Please don't start sending me PMs and stuff demanding chapters - I already have one person who does that, and to tell you the truth, it upsets me a little! And yes, I broke up for half term on Friday, but with all the work I have, I don't know if that means I'll be posting a lot! Thanks for posting anyway

Weeeeell part of the wedding is up! If you want a reason as to why I haven't posted the entire thing, have a look on the fic thread because I can't be bothered to write it all again. I'm tired and I'm away to bed since it's 2am

Thanks everyone, and please leave me lotsa feedback since I've posted the chapter (or part of it)!!

~Amy <333

Okay! The wedding is about to begin! Yes! Okay so my favorotie part of that chapter would have to be all of the thoughts that were swirling around in everyones heads. Like Ron being worried that he would forget the vows and Harry dreaming about Ginny! I loved those parts. Hermione's dress sounds very un Hermioneish. I can't wait to read just how badly Ron's eyes pop out of his head. That should be great. Harry also might pass out. I loved Mrs. Weasley and Mrs. Grangers reactions to their daughters standing in their wedding dresses, thats the perfect way to put it. Iam so excited to hear their vows then they will be with each other forever! Yay! Post soon!

~Ronluver7

P.S. I don't really think that it's nessacary to post pictures cause we can use our imaginations if you describe the dress in enough detail, which you did perfectly!

To my a story is sort of like a hill (I know I'm getting but read on) and most of the story just builds up wanting and wanting something to happen and at the very top something does. Right now your story is so close to the top just one more step that we really want to make, but can't. I want to keep on reading, but I can't fort her is nothing there. Oh! A thought just occurred to me... no it won't work. It was a thought that Winky and Peppy and Kreacher would be at the wedding, but you said in earlier chapters that Kreacher was needed at Hogwarts. It would be nice for Winky and Kreacher to get married seeing as the already had a child. Again off topic and JUST CAN'T WAIT for the new chapter!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. I should be a little tired, but not a lot because of our GAINT time differences. 2 am for you is 8 pm for me. Now I say bye!

Sorry, I'm too excited (bounces off the celing). Brilliant chapter, I'm guessing you used September 1997 because that would have been the first one aftr the battle. Great descriptive languuage for the dresses (makes me sound like a teache, but its true) and I like the way kept Lunaa in a boundary and didn't let her go overboard, I thought it was perfect
K, cya

Oh Yeah, 3-0 to the Argyle against Barnsley, Super Super Jamie Mackie.

Edit: Oh Yeah, FastFanHPg, we have the kids to look forward too

Edit 2: Trust you to use a big scoreline for Newcastle, guess everyone loves home