This is my first Fan Fiction called 'A new Start'. Here's the link for it:

http://www.veritaserum.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=19569

Thankyou!!

Hey ! Your fanfic is pretty good. It has a lot of potential.You could really take this somewhere. Do you have any idea of how far into Harry,Ginny,Ron,and Hermione's life ? Like are you going to go into weddings and kids and such? Well, anyways, your fanfic is pretty good ! Post again soon !

~Ronluver7

Hey it's me again! Great chapters.I cant picture Hermione as an auror . Ron I could, but hey someones got to help George with the joke shop.Harry would make the perfect auror. Plus with Kingsly as minister you can't go wrong. Post again soon! I'll read this fanfic until it's done.

~Ronluver7

P.S. I just read the next two chapters. That's great that Fleur is going to hve a baby ! But what's happended to Hermione. I hope she is alright. Please post agaian soon. The suspense might kill me.

OMG i love your fic you have to keep writing. post soon.

your fic is amazing! im so glad your keeping up with jk rowlings plot line that she talked about after the book! its perfect. dont stop writing! also, could you add the feedback link at the end of the chapters b/c i wasnt sure where to find it at first. thanks and keep it up!

This is you first Fan Fic and this is my first response ever I have enjoyed most all of the Fan Fic's I have read . I Really like this one you write well and your narrative is cohesive and it flows beautifully. Please keep going

lucwheel

Keep on going!!! I'm loving it :D

your fic is amazing!!! you write really well and are extrmemely talented. your fics really entertaining. i was so scared for hermione, but im glad they caught the carrows now. keep writing youre really excellent!!!

Keep on writing ! It's getting suspensful ! Please post again soon. I beg of you !

~Ronluver7

haha, you're finally getting feedback. I know what you mean because I've just started a fanfic and hardly anyone is leaving anything. I encourage you to read it. I like it! it's great and has a plot! I love it. Your writing is awesome. Update soon, and can you PM me when you post again? thanks!

Great New Chapter Keep it up - I've got it bookmarked. Come on we need t know what happens next :D

Hey!
Cheers for the feedback!

There's 2 new chapters up now, chapter 10 has been one of my faves so far

Keep posting!

~Amy

that was a really great chapter! i love your writing a lot. seriously, everything youve written so far is wonderful! im glad they found hermione and she is safe thats so good! and ron purposed! im happy for the two of them, for some reason though i picture harry and ginny getting engaged and married before they did. oh well. i cant wait to see what happens next!

So when is the wedding going to be? Just kiddding. Hermione is back ! I'm so glad. That was a great way for her to wake up. Is Harry going to propose to Ginny soon too? Well please keep on writing. This fanfic rocks!!!

~Ronluver7

Brilliant, and I think the spur of the moment proposal is exactly what Ron would do

you're a really good writer, and you're good at updating quickly. its much appreciated, i hate waiting all the time. anyway, i really like this chapter. it shows how much ron and hermione have liked each other and how long its been going on!! so cute!

thats awesome! i love it! so cute too. I really want to see some Harry/Ginny relationship thought. Great suspense! PM me when you update! The link is in my signature.

That was a great last chapter. Hermione is back from the hospital! Yeahhhh!! That was funny about the invitations. Great fanfic!!! Please update soon!!!

~Ronluver7

im glad hermiones back from the hospital. now she and ron can plan the wedding! are you going to have them wait awhile to marry or get married quickly? the last line from hermione about making sure there are no extra wedding invitations was funny!!! i cant wait until you update!

Another new Chapter up people! Thanks for the feedback so far!

~Amy

im glad you put a little harry and ginny stuff in there. i really like them together and hope you'll be including more later. i wonder who the owls are from...

I loved the sweet Ginny and Harry moment. Very cute!!! I'm guessing the letters are from Proffesser Mcgonagall telling them that they might be able to go back to school. Or possibly letters from the ministry offering them jobs. HMmmmmmm. Well please post again soon so the suspense doesn't kill me!!!

~Ronluver7

Brilliant - you have a real talent for this. Although it most likely will be Hogwarts or the Ministry I wonder because of Mrs Weasleys letter - hmmmmmm

I'll be checking for your next installment

That was really really really really really really really really really good! I liked everything about ur fic! Well, except the part about Hestia Jones being headmistress. I just don't think that she would become headmistress... wouldn't she just keep on working at the ministry? Besides that, I loved ur fic!

will be waiting for next part

Read my fic Do You right here and give it feedback here

Haha I'm not too chuffed bout Hestia being headmistress myself!

But i needed someone well known and i suppose she was a better choice than Mundungus Fletcher!

Thanks for the feedback!

~Amy

i like this chapter. harry got two job offers...wow! it does make sense though. i really hope he chooses the auror, hes wanted to do that longer. what an awkward conversation for harry when he talked about ginny. it was interesting though. i wonder when harry will propose to ginny...

Another new Chapter up! Please read and give me feedback!

Cheers!

~Amy

wow hermione went through a lot. that was interesting to find out about how she escaped and everthing. it was a really good chapter!!

I just read the whole fic and subscribed to it!

I loved it!

It has great writing, great describing of the situations and places and I love the fact that it sticks to the last book! It shows an amazing continuation from where we were left, so it´s really easy for me to just imagine what's going on.

I really like how you're developing the story and I'll make sure to stay sticked to it because not only you update frequently, but you keep the action coming, and for an obsessed fan like me, that's something really apreciated.

It's a great fic. I don't have a favorite part. I love how you've run it all. It would probably be Ron's proposal, but still, every bit of it is awesome. I sincerely love it!

Keep up the good work!

Your new reader,
~Kat.

Chapter 16 is up! It's not as good as I liked to have hoped, but it's leading into something quite big!

~Amy

wow.... i really liked this chapter. probably more than the other ones... I MEAN IT!!!

keep on writing this, its really good!

waiting for next chapter- Ginevra Molly Weasley

Chapter 17 up!

Thanks for liking it everybody! I didn't think my fan fic would go down as well as it has - I'm only 15 so my writing skills aren't great!

More chapters will be up soon!

Thanks again, and please keep feedback-ing!

~Amy

Keep going its fantastic! My mouth fell open in shock of Ginny's answer! I can't wait to read the reunion with the Dursleys and why she did it

thanks for a great story ! i'm 15 too and I can't imagine even thinking of a story, even thouh I love to write I do poems and other stuff I might TRY to write a new fanfic in the next week :D

*Proud to be a Geordie!* I take it your from Newcastle Ant and Dec!! Legends

Anyway I'll keep checking back whenever I can!!

Wow! Those two chapters were great! I can't wait until you update again! The fact of you being so fast is one of the things I like the most about this fanfic, you never leave us hanging! I love your story, the ideas are very creative, and it's really easy to identify the characters with the hapenings. You are one very smart 15 year old! And with a great writing as well!

I loved the last two! That thing about the rings was really nice: the girls picked the ones they liked! How sweet!

I have to say I didn't really like the owl's name... Hahaha! Only because Teddy's middle name is Remus too! But then, well, I thought it could be a way of Harry's to keep Remus close to him, so that's kind of sweet.

Ginny's answer! What was that??? I thought she was going to be extremelly happy!!! What's Harry going to do now? And at Privet Drive! I can't wait for your next post!

Keep up the good work! I loved them!

~Kat.

P/S May I suggest something? If it isn't so difficult for you, could you please post each chapter on a separate post? Or could you please put the title in bold letters? It's just easier to find them like that.... Thanks!

EDIT: I just read the new chapter! Amazing! I'm posting my feedback here because I'm not allowed to double post...
I loved it! It gave me some peace of mind! Now that I know that Hermione is going to try and do something I feel sooo much better! I'll try to leave some more comments on this chapter later on when everyone has got a chance to read it! Thanks for posting so soon! I love it!

Thoses were all really good chapters.LOL, Harry and Ron bought the same engagement ring!! But why did Ginny say no? She probabley freaked out. Well I really liked it!!! Please post again really soon!!!

~Ronluver7~

poor harry. i cant believe ginny didnt say yes right away how sad. im glad his aunt and uncle are nice to him now. i like how you gave dudley a physical transformation to go along with his emotional one. its good harry got his broom back too. now we just have to wait and see what ginnys real answer will be. good job!

poor harry... so you're only 15? wow, great writing for your age! maybe when im 15 i'll write as well as you, but thats not gonna happrn for a few years..

omg, thats a really odd dream. sorry ive never left feedback, im normally on and off so quickly i never have the chance. but i love your writing its so good. i really love the couple cliffys like there not big ones but they are good. im really looking forward to your next chappy

good chapter! i hope harry and ginny work things out. its weird that shes questioning how she feels about harry, i didnt expect that. thats funny that harry gave kreacher the room just to avoid having some of the blacks things.

I just read the new chapter! I really liked it! (I know I said I was going to try and post something about last chapter, but there's no need now! I'm so totally absorbed by this new chapter, that I can't help but write about this new one! I liked it so much more than last one!)

I was feeling so sorry for Harry, I was about to jump into your story and comfort him! Hahaa!But now I'm feeling sooo much better! You rescued him!

I was one of those "Ginny is great" kind of people, but after she thinking about Dean... Blah! I don't like her as much now! But don't worry, I still like her, not as much as before, but still do. I guess she's only human... Hahaha!

Ginny's got to make it up to Harry! She has to! He is such a nice guy! He shouldn't be feeling so upset, specially after all he's gone through. Still he's so kind that he feels he should talk to her, instead of feeling angry at how mean she was... I just love that guy!

I can't wait to read your next chapter! I've become one of your devoted readers!

Keep it up! You're a great writer!

~Kat.

I hope Ginny doesn't fall for Dean instead of Harry. That would'nt be good. There was a bit of a cliffy at the end of that chapter. You're making me anxious to read more!!! Please post again soon!!!

~Ronluver7

I liked this last chapter...it didnt have a lot of action, but we got some good information. i wonder what harry is going to do. obviously, go to see ginny, but itll be interesting to see what he will say to her. cant wait to read what happens!!

You won't have to wait long, because 21 is up and ready for reading!

Cheers!

~Amy

oh what a cute chapter!!! im glad harry and ginny got back together. you did a really excellent job writing. i like how harry got her on his broom...it just seemed right to me. everything was PERFECT! excellent job!

First of all, thank you so so much for putting the titles in bold letters! That's some huge help! Thank you!

Now, moving into the story... Amazing!
The Kingsley part was kind of weird, but that is some great way to put Hermione right into the Magical Creatures Office! Nicely done! But the best part about that whole chapter was your description of the lifting of the fidelius charm! Awesome! I could almost picture the complexity of the charm and Kingsle performing it! Seriously, great job!

And Chapter 21... It was so sweet what Harry did! I found it very much of a gentleman to ask Ginny to keep the ring even if she didn't want to marry him. He's wonderful! Ginny was very dumb, but good thing she understood her mistake before it was too late! I didn't really want my favorite couple breaking up because of something like that!

I love your writing! Thank you so much for posting so soon!

Great story! Keep it up!

~Kat.

I'm so glad that Harry and Ginny are getting married. Two weddings out of the Weasley household at once, boy Mrs. Weasley might burst. Your next couple of chapter should be very interesting. Those were really good chapters. I love the way that you write in all the characters feelings. It is just nice.

~Ronluver7

Chapter 22 is up. Sorry, it's a lot more boring than the other chapters, but I needed to fill in some space between events so it wasn't all crammed together. I'll try to get another couple of chapters up by tomorrow night, but I might not have time depending on coursework I have.

Please feedback!

~Amy

this was a good chapter. typical of harry to know nothing about his wedding haha. although, they did just get married but i still see him knowing nothing about wedding plans.

That was a good chapter. Good point about Harry not knowing a single thing about his wedding! This chapter wasn't boring! I like the way that you allow Ron to act towards Harry and Ginny's relationship. Very cool.

~Ronluver7

Just like ronluver7 said, it was really nice to see Ron's reaction towards Harry and Ginny's engagement. He was happy and it was because he grew up, and is living a happy moment himself too.

You portrayed Harry's character really good: him wanting to keep things to himself even after everything he's lived with his two best friends.

It wasn't boring at all! I really liked it! I really want to know what's going to happen next, with the meeting and everything! Nice going!