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UnmarkedEvil
Hello all -
this is a fanfic about Belatrix Black (ie. Lestrange) and her years at Hogwarts. It will discribe the adventures she and her friends had, and entail exactly why she chose to be evil, what drove her to near insanity.
After seeing the new HP movie (Order of the Pheonix) I hav a growing obsession with her - she is a seemingly complexe character, who I would love to know more about. I hope you guys do to.
I will set up a feedback link asap. Please, I'm not sure if anyone is interested in this fic, so PLEASE take the time to either comment, and/or fill out the Poll. Much appreciated.


Bellatrix Black: The Teenage Years Of A Death Eater
UnmarkedEvil
Hi, I've updated. thanks tongue.gif

Bellatrix Black: The Teenage Years
UnmarkedEvil
NEW UPDATE .. !
UnmarkedEvil
new update
steppy40
Okay, so I am definitely a Bellatrix fan. Helena Bonham Carter did an amazing portrayal of her, and that is the reason I grew so fond of the Death Eaters. Your story is definitely an interesting concept. However, it was very hard to read. There were so many spelling errors and grammatical mistakes that I had to stop reading it. For example, "Gryffindoors," "Luscious," and "Rudolf." I believe you mean Rodolphus Lestrange. Your story could definitely be a great one with many readers if you utilize a beta. I really enjoyed how you tied in her fellow Death Eaters and how they were friends back at Hogwarts. You are also developing Narcissa and Lucius' relationship and I definitely loved reading that! You definitely have some great ideas and I hope that you continue writing!

Kristin
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