Hey there!

Please leave your feedback for my fic, ‘Their Happy Ending’ here. I’ll be happy if you say it’s good. And if you think it sucks, it’s fair, but please tell why. Thanks to all who takes the time to read and then go here afterwards!

- Vicki

Wow! This is a really great start, and I can't wait for the next installment! I like how it's different to the other L/J fics - they're mostly about getting together, so I like how yours is slightly different. I love how Lily and James shared their first kiss just after the quidditch match, just like Harry and Ginny!

Keep it coming, I'll be checking regularly for new chapters!

Please read my Fiction as well - the link is in my signature, if you don't mind!

~Amy

Vickie! No way in heck! You're writing another one? How do you do it?
So very original, I absolutely love it. James and Lily were together and had a perfect relationship. James is everything she'd ever hope for, the sweetest person. Then he treats her like a little girl? I'd hate that too! But it ends in a huge row and screaming "I HATE YOU!" Not so great.... They're both sad and miss each other. But worse comes to worse is when it's their last year and they won't see each other ever again, but unlikely actually. Who's that blond chick? Typical rebound because James still loves Lily...
Love it. Post soon!

Oh my gosh! Happy-potter, you just keep coming back with more great fics for us to read. Keep posting. I really like the way it started differently from a lot of other cliche fics. Keep writing.

i love this story, i feel so bad for lily and james, keep writing its amazing

i love the story so far and cant wait for you to post another chapter. i really enjoy lily and james fan fics and like it when they start differently.keep writing its turning out fantastic

Ooh, yikes. This is not good. I do not like this blonde... Gar. Their fight must have been awful... poor Lily! Poor James! But he was flirting with some other girl... which makes me mad

Hey, just wondering, how long is this fic? Is it a few chapters, or like more?

Can't wait to read more! I ♥ it!

-Jasmine

Hey all!

Amy--: Thanks! I guess I like writing something which isn’t seen too much of before. And really, I’ve not seen a single ‘get-back-together’-fic here on VTM so when the idea came to me, I had to continue it, and here we are Ahh, this kiss. Yea, I was inspired and liked the idea. Normally I don’t read Harry/Ginny etc. fics, but I’ll take another look as soon as I can find the time Thanks for the feedback!
JSB 073: Yes way! I am writing another one. (And I have another one coming! ) But I don’t know how I do it. The idea sort of came to me one day as I was listening to music and I thought it was too good to leave. I’m glad you love it. Even though James was an idiot. But as we’re only seeing Lily’s perspective, I shouldn’t leave too much in that. She’s not perfect either Haha, the blond girl… Yea, I won’t say who it is, but she’s important to the plot line. You guess. I’ll leave a few clues. Thanks for the nice words and the feedback!
alohomora: Ahh, another fic, yes (But really, call me Vicki ) I don’t know why I can keep it going, they sort of come to my mind and then i just have to write… Yes, it’s a bit different isn’t it? We haven’t seen a break up on this site yet, have we? But really, I’m glad you mention that with the cliché… Personally I’ve stopped reading most L/J fic because they’re all the same. That’s one more of the reasons why this is not about how they’re getting together, but back together instead Thanks for the feedback!
mrsgrint1912: I’m glad you like the story. I feel bad for Lily and James too Thanks for the feedback.
PrisonerOfAzkaban: Ha, I’m glad you like the story, personally I like the fic that’s different from the crowd. It’s no fun reading the same story written by two different persons. I’m most of the time looking for fics to write we haven’t seen before. That why I came up with this Thanks for your nice words
No.1_HarryPotterFan: First when I read, I thought you hated the story, ahah then I realised it was just the situation. Thanks! Yes, I imagine their fight a lot worse than all of Ron and Hermione’s which is baaaad… James flirting? If you go back and read, he wasn’t flirting, even thought it could like he was But I completely understand you! I understand you’re wondering about the length, I don’t imagine this fic as long, but more like a short story. I’m not sure how long yet, but I hope I have you a feeling Thanks for the feedback!
Everyone: Thanks too all of you who took the time to read my newest fic and leave feedback. I was really surprised so many reviews I’ve gotten. I thought everyone would hate it… Ah, well. I’m right in this moment working on my second chatter, so you might keep your eyes open !

- Vicki

Wow, really hard-hitting writing, it made me feel directly in Lily's shoes. It was excellent keep it up

*--Robyn

Sweet another awesome fanfic waiting to be written. Great beginning. I love the detail you into Lily's emtions toward James. Also how you sumed up the past year was really good. Its so sad that all her friends died . Anyway can't to read more of the story!!!

Hello all!

Unique_Individual : Wow, thanks! It was actually the intention in the first chapter to make Lily’s feelings very clearly. I guess I succeeded Thanks for the compliments!
iluvviktorkrum :Uh thanks. I was focusing hard on Lily’s feelings here in the first chapter as I wanted my readers to understand how hard it is to Lily without James and how hard it was. Yea, sad her friends died. I mostly did it because then Lily would be even more alone, but they wouldn’t have been important to the plot. Sooo…
Everyone: Yep, next chapter’s up! go read it!

- Vicki

Yey, new chapter!! Aww the Longbottoms! Ths so sweet that they're getting married, but one thing is really still getting to me ... Who the heck is this blonde lass?! I really want to know - I thought at first she might have been a cousin of James' or something, but I think I've ditched that thought now - still, I really want to know!! Please post again soon, I think this is going to be a really good Fiction!!

Thanks for keeping me entertained

~Amy

Yay! They're getting married! It's awesome! BUT James is also going to be there which is a bit of an issue... is that where they get together? And who is that blonde? Argh I guess I have to wait... please post soon! Oh, BTW, I loved that chapter!

-Jasmine

Good chapter. Sirius and James running into lily at remus' Award!! anyway soo many conflicts are starting to uprise its crazy awesome. oo by the way i just want to get straight lily is mad at james beacuse he pulled a prank on her right?

Post soon

<Emily>

Wow. She's a complete wreck. And when she went to see Remus, oh my dear gosh. I did not see that coming. I can't beleive Sirius and James just came over. They all went quiet adn were staring at each other. And Lily, she was on the verge of tears. Then she was leaving, James actually tried to talk to her, but she was on her way and started running as if her life depended on it. Everything is going down, but the brightside. Alice is getting married with Lily as the maid of honor. Woo-hoo!
Love it. Post soon.

Hello!

Amy--: Yea, the wedding. Great, isn’t it? I totally understand why you don’t like the blond, and I see why you want to know who she is… But it’s only me who knows, my beta doesn’t even! I’m mean, I know. Hmm… I wouldn’t put that thought away, she could be anyone (my beta have given me some pretty wild guesses) so keep guessing! Thanks for the feedback, I’m glad I can entertain you
No.1_HarryPotterFan: Good you’re so excited about the wedding. But, yes, James will be there too. I won’t say what happens, but it could be possible… Ahh, the ‘blonde-question’ again… I know who she is, but no one else does! Haha. And I’m not telling yet. You just have to read, but if you’re good you can guess it! I’m glad you liked the chapter and are not too mad about the time it took for me to have the chapter up.
iluvviktorkrum: So awkward, right? That’s the worst part about breaking up… to see each other again. Ow, how many conflicts are you spotting. Really I don’t see that many. Yet. Hm… Lily is not mad because of a joke… she’s mad because he didn’t treat her with the respect she deserves. Hope it’d clear that out just a bit.
JSB 073: Haha. I surprised you? Really, I thought that was so obvious that they had to run into each other. I mean… it’s at Remus’… I know it seams sad right now, but originally I had made that chapter even sadder, but it didn’t work. Sad she didn’t stay just to exchange a few words with James. Maybe she’d feel slightly better then. Yea, the wedding… it’ll be fun. Weddings are fun, but with James? We’ll see…
Everyone: Yep! The next chapter is up, and I’m really happy with it. Hope you like it. I would have had it up sooner, but I’ve been busy.

- Vicki

Tht was a really beautiful chapter! I loved it, especially how James seemed to be thinking about how lovely Lily wouldve looked in it!! I was praying all throught the second half of that chapter that a) either James would spot Lily or Lily wouldn't be able to contain herself and she would just throw herself at him haha. I suppose this dress is for the mystery blonde? I really want to know who she is!!! Any chance of a hint

Keep writing!

~Amy

Oh really nice chapter I loved reading it! Alice's dress sounds so amazing and Lily's too. I just felt so sorry for her when James entered the shop and she really wanted to go and hug him! And James was picturing Lily in the dress. *Sigh* they still love eachother..
And who was the dress James bought for? The blonde girl on Kings Cross Station? Who is she? A girlfriend or some relative? Arg I need to know!

Post soon

I am so surprised that I haven't left any feedback for this fic! You are doing a really excellent job. I always love your writing, it's very descriptive and polished. It is so easy to imagine how Lily and James must be feeling right now! My heart was just breaking for Lily. I hope that maybe they talk things out at the wedding.

The dress descriptions sound so pretty! And I really loved when James walked in and was talking about how Lily would look so nice in it. But why was he picking up a tux and a dress? Is he taking some girl to the wedding? The blonde one? But I think the blonde girl is just a relative or friend or something.

And I'm glad that they didn't just break up because James cheated on Lily. It is very refreshing to see something a little bit different!

Great job and keep writing! I am really looking forward to the wedding. I'll try to leave as much feedback as this fic deserves! And please keep going with your Christmas story, I really liked that one.

Good job!

Hugs,
Anna

First, the dresses sound beautiful. Good thing it wasn't a green theme or Lily would absolutely gordeous with it matching her eyes perfectly.
And wow. James walked in and he's pretty stupid for not noticing someone in my opinion, but he did see the dress and remembered Lily. And they both tared up. An aww moment if I can say anything of it. But who did he get the dress for? Hmm?
Love it. Post soon.

Hullo!

Amy--: Ow, thanks! The part where James thought of Lily was also my favourite part, kind of what this chapter was about I can see why you wanted them to meet but that’ll come when it’s that part’s time Yep, the dress is for the blonde, but did you honestly think I’d give you a hint? Hmm… Some people have already guess some pretty good guesses Have your own!
Regitze: Thank you! I was actually afraid Alice’s dress would be too simple but glad you liked it Lily is going through a tough period and it’s not helping to see James. And yea, of course they love each other. Haha. Do you seriously think I’ll tell you who the dress is for? Well, your guesses are good but I won’t say it’s any of those or that it isn’t
amv_hearts_hp: Ah, better late then never, right? Thank you for your nice words of my writing. I try to make it as easy as possible to picture the situations, and what else do you do that than describing? Uh, I hope your heart is okay and that the story wasn’t too hard I’m glad you like the latest chapter, I’m slightly proud of it and had so much fun reading it But who the blonde is… Your guesses are good, but I won’t say either of them as it’d ruin the surprise. Yea, I didn’t want to make James a bad person, as I believe he is a good person and good persons are not cheating on their girlfriends. Lily has her faults too. And it takes two persons to ruin a relationship… I’ll keep writing, but it’s hard as I’m very busy at the moment, but I’ll try
JSB 073: The dresses… well, I didn’t want to give Lily a green one, because I always try to write the unexpected. Actually, when reading my fics, expect the unexpected! You think James is stupid? It could be a big shop, and when you’re not looking you don’t see as much as if you were But it’s good he thought of Lily, right? And they both remembered each other, sweet, right?
Everyone: Well, thanks for the amazing feedback. It’s really great to hear from so many of you. I’m currently working and writing a thousand essays at school, so I’m rather busy. I’ll try to find time in the weekend where I have a couple of days off! Keep reading and reviewing

- Vicki

Haha. Party party.
Lily seems to see James everywhere, but it wasn't him.
That creep who came up to Lily, yeah - freaky. But Arch was sweet and saved her. =]]
Love it. Post soon.

Hey, hey!

JSB 073: Haha, it’s a shame Lily is so paranoid. Maybe if she wasn’t she’d have enjoyed the whole evening slightly more. Too bad she wasn’t ready to find a new guy; Arch would have been sweet And the other creep (as you so nicely describe him), was just there to make Arch talk to Lily and the other way around.
Everyone: Okay, I have the next chapter up. Personally it’s my favourite so far. It should be fun to read so go do that!

- Vicki

Haha I agree it was fun to read!! Sorry I didn't feedback on your last chapter, I didn't know you'd posted one :S but I loved both of them!! Get in, Lily is - as you put it - in the arms of James! Everybody rejoice!!!I was waiting for this moment as soon as I'd read the first chapter!!

And the blond - I thought it might be relative of James - I was guessing sister but the blond hair was a bit of a stopper to that theory! I actually like her now!! She seems canny enough and I think her and Lily might become good friends, and I'm glad she played a part (however minor) in getting her to 'dance' with James.

I can't wait for the next chapter, it should be really fun, and I'm expecting tears from Lily

Have a great new year!!

~Amy <3

Oh my god NOO do not end the chapter like that! I soo want to read the next part!



Anyways I think this chapter was the best so far! I liked how James kept glancing at Lily throughout the ceremony, and Lily trying to ignore him without exactly succeeding. I had a feeling that Eleanor might be a relative to James but I wasn't sure, but here's the proof! I think she was very nice and I liked her personality. She just blurted things out without really thinking but you could tell that she really cared.
The dance with Remus was very cute because I think it showed just how nice their friendship was. I really liked how Sirius was acting! He was pushing Lily to talk to James without being rude or insensitive, and I think the 'stunt' Sirius and Eleanor pulled off by swapping partners was perfect! And Lily's worst nightmare is becoming real - she is once again in the arms of James Potter! Dun dun dun!!!

Please post soon!

Wedding sounds wonderful. Speaking of weddings, I haven't been to one in ages. =[[ Don't read me typing up random stuff. Blah blah blah.
A bit slap happy right now, sorry. I'm really hyper. It's the middle of the night. But how are you?
Anyways, to your story, Sirius and Remus are there for Lily and that's good. And the whole dancing with Sirius and leads her to her worst nightmare, as you stated, was a good touch to bring them together. They both can't move on and I like what Sirius says, move back. It's the only way as I see it. And I think it as a fabulous idea for happiness and love.
Love it. Post soon.

Fun to read: yes. Fun for Lily: umm... no.

Poor, poor Lily. And I feel bad for James, too. I feel bad for both of them- they are so cut up about the fight and they can't face each other, even though it's so obvious that they are still in love. I wonder what they are going to say to each other?! Aaah! Please post soon, I need to find out.

The wedding was great, though. I loved how James kept looking at Lily throughout the wedding ceremony. Lily wasn't exactly ignoring him too well... it is so obvious that they love each other. I think they need to know that's it's okay to fight- because with people that you love, you fight and then you fix it and you keep going. You make it work because you love them.

I just knew that the blond girl couldn't be James' new girlfriend or anything. He just couldn't do that. She reminds me of myself a little bit- I can't keep my mouth shut to save my life.

Post soon!! Good job, as always!!

Hugs,
Anna

Hello all!

Amy--: Sad you didn’t see that chapter before, but then you got two chapters at once… almost You were waiting for this moment? And you knew Eleanor was a relative? You’re good! Well, Eleanor is a very sweet girl. You can compare her to Tonks (just without the changing hair colour of course)… She and Sirius are evil souls, planning stuff like that… Tears? Hundreds of them! haha. Thanks for the feedback
Regitze: Haha. That was my first cliffhanger of this story! I’m actually disappointed at myself for not making one before I’m glad this was the favourite chapter of you so far. I kind of like it myself. Yeah, James noticed the dress. On of course the girl in it. He misses her. You guessed Eleanor too? Well, it wouldn’t have been my guess if I’d red this story. I’m glad you like her! She’s one of my favourites (kind like Tonks, I think, and I looooove her). Lily has some nice friends? They’re not just friends with her because she was with James, but because they’re friends. Sirius… ah, he really sweet isn’t he? We’ve not seen the last of him in his quest of getting James and Lily back together Uh, I’m glad you liked the ‘stung’. Personally I was a bit afraid it might come off a bit queasy. Thanks for the feedback
JSB 073: I love weddings too! Oh, shame it’s a long time since you last were to one. My aunt got married this summer nice little wedding outdoor… anyways… haha. You’re hyper? I love hyper persons! I am often too. People think I’m annoying when I am. I don’t understand them… haha. Well, Remus and Sirius are also Lily’s friends. It’s the good thing. That they’re friends even though she and James broke up. Sirius is pretty smart; move back! Why not? Thanks very much for your hyper comments
amv_hearts_hp: Naah, not fun for Lily. I’m just mean. You’re a smart one aren’t you? These are some of the thought I’ve had about this. To get over it and go back together Trust me, they have a lot to say to each other! You’ll see. I’m glad you liked the wedding and James’ glances. He just couldn’t keep his eyes off her Ah, again you’re smart! Yes, it is okay to fight. Especially when your names are Lily and James. Not the world’s best history, huh? But people do fight. And they do forgive each other Thanks for your feedback

- Vicki

Okay. I think that chapter just made me a little depressed. Or maybe it's the book I've been reading? Either way, I'm a bit on the depressed side...
James and Lily LOVE each other. They were DANCING and basically HAPPY together... so what was with all of that? They were speaking of how much they missed each other... they even KISSED. How much better can it get? Only worse? Of course that's what Vicki does... She's lying not only to James about her feelings, but herself. She's ignoring her heart, something a girl should never do, and running away. Making everything worse. Can thigns possibly get worse? Oh, of course they can since Vicki is the author... =p
Love it.. Post soon!

Jessica

I basically agree with everything Jessica said!

Lily is lying to James, she's lying to herself and she isn't listening to the truth. She and James are perfect for each other, but why isn't she seeing it?! She is! But she isn't abiding by it! And why? Because I have NO idea!

Is there something else to why Lily would refuse James?! Please tell me she's just being an idiot, I think it would be terrible if she had found someone else! But then you would have told us in the earlier chapters wouldn't you ... well, maybe you wouldn't

Please post soon! James doesn't deserve what you're doing to him!

~Amy <3

Guess what?? Ditto to Amy and Jessica.

I guess Lily is just afraid... which sucks for her, because practically the suckiest thing to be is afraid of love. And then to have to LIE to herself and James to escape her fear?? Well, I'm glad I'm not Lily.

My mom is dragging me to bed... but great chapter! Fix it!! Please. Help Lily see the error of her ways!!

Hugs,
Anna

I just finished reading your fanfic the whole way through. Lily's emotions are so muddled and confusing. I feel really bad for her. James and Lily have got to get back together though. I do hope that Lily is able to think it over and realize that she is meant to be with James. I don't really think that Lily would have lied straight to James's face because she honestly isn't that type of person. I feel really bad for both of them. What Lily said made James cry and what James said made Lily cry. I hope that they can settle their dissaggeements. You are doing a really great job portraying the characters by the way.

~Ronluver7

Hey!

JSB 073: Okay. So all in all, you’re not happy with me. Haha. Yes, of course everything can happen when I’m the author. I love to torment others… No, just kidding. I’m sorry you’re that mad at me, I’ll try to fix it. Yes, Lily is a very stubborn girl. That’s why she will not realise that she can’t live without James. She won’t be the one to bend over just because her heart is broken. I’m sorry I (and your book) made you so depressed. As said, I’ll try to fix it. Trust me! Thanks for the feedback, Jessica!
Amy--: So since your agreeing with Jessica, you’re mad at me too? Fair enough. You ask why Lily is not seeing that she and James belong together. Well, just as James said. She doesn’t listen to her heart, not when her brain is telling different. She’s a stubborn girl, and not the one to just bend over. No, Lily is not refusing James because of something I’ve not let you know. No, James doesn’t deserve it, I’ll promis you too that I’ll try to fix it all Thanks for the feedback, Amy!
amv_hearts_hp: Ahh, one more who’s mad at me. I’m sorry you feel that way too, and I promise you too that I will try to fix it so both Lily and James will get better. Yea, Lily is afraid. She likes to know what’s happening around her and to know where she have people. The problem is that she doesn’t. Which is sad. Sorry you had to be dragged to bed, but thanks for the feedback, Anna.
ronluver7: Why, hello new reader! So nice to have one more to follow up. Haha. Yea, Lily is one big mess ad have been ever since the first chapter. It really hurts her not being with James. Shame she doesn’t realise it herself. She might need some help No, if you realised it, Lily looked down as she lied. She wasn’t able to lie straight to James’ face. Hmm, the problem is that they don’t have a disagreement anymore. They both miss each other and have said sorry. Lily’s problem is that she’s afraid. James just wants her back, so shortly it’s Lily who’s being the idiot Thanks, I try to portrait the persons as I imagine they would have been as young. Thanks for the feedback
Everyone: Well, you should think the next chapter would be easy to write, but it isn’t. I know what’s about to happen, but I can’t get it down on paper. I hope you all have patience with me and looking forward to next update. Thanks to all my readers and another thanks to those who leaves feedback

- Vicki

hey!!!!!!!!!!!
i sooooooooooooo luv this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i have read the last chapter twice coz i luved it soooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
post again sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


p.s. sorry i just really like this fic!!! and when im exited i get a little mad (well madder than usual !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HONEYDUKES_GIRLZ: Hey, I’m glad I could get you all worked up. Sometimes I get very crazy too, so it’s okay. I’m surprised you even wanted to read it twice. Hmm. Thanks for your nice comments.
Everyone: Well, the second last chapter is up. Hope you all enjoy it! Thanks to all who bothers to leave feedback. It really makes it all worth it

- Vicki

Wow!!!! I can tell why you like that chapter

I'll start from the beginning ... Sirius was so right! The way he yelled at her and everything was a bit harsh, but she did deserve it! I really felt sorry for James, cos she was lying through her teeth at him and he didn't deserve that, so I was happy when Sirius gave her a piece of his mind! The stuff he said were really meaningful too:



It's great how he didn't just say 'You broke his heart!' but he went on and on to maek Lily realise exactly wh she'd done. Nicely written!

I love how she went to James' even though it was so late, and it's completely the opposite of what she usually does, since she's such a non-rule-breaker so this really gve an impact on how much she loves James! And I know this isn'tthe main story, but I loved how you decorated James' room! How it was all Gryffindor and quidditch, that was nice! And I also liked that you waited before saying James was actually in the room, cos you described him well too, I could really see how upset he was!

And the parchment that was such a lovely idea! How did you think of it?! It was nice that you had a poem on there too, and the fact that they each keep one half of it was so sweet!

But anyway, I'm so glad they're together!! Well done on another great chapter!! But it's the last one next I don't want it to end! Oh, and please don't make Lily and James die in it! I want to see this fic end on a happy note!!

Post soon!

~Amy <3

And Vickie fixes everything!!! Oh my gosh, you're amazingly nice. You put them together after much suffering.
Sirius was screaming at Lily like crazy, but she deserved it. She needed a news flash and she got it. Then made a huge decision to face James. I loved that poem that James 'wrote'. It was cute and ift perfectly. And they're happy and in love once more.
Love it. Post soon!

WOOO!!! finally together. i have been holding my breath until they were going to FInally kissed! (of course its hypthical) anyway i liked the whole sirius yelling at her scene it realy marked her soul when she heard all of that. She really needed to snap out of her little i dont love potter trans. glad she did that was really started to get on my nerves. Great one! post soon

<Emily>

Yeah!! I am so excited!!

As other people have said, Sirius was a bit harsh to Lily... I felt terrible, because she was obviously in a tight spot and she didn't deserve all the blame- although he was rightly angry. I can just imagine him saying the things he said, and I could definitely picture James as Sirius described him. Poor James...

And I was really excited when Lily got up to go to James' house... I knew the moment was inching closer... Of course the description of James was rather heartbreaking. But then Lily made everything better. Yay!

The parchment idea was excellent; very sweet and romantic. At first I didn't like it very much to be honest, but I've definitely warmed up to it and now I love it! It fit very well, and it was a nice spin. I loved how they quoted it... gave me the warm fuzzies...

Wow... as always, it was excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter... but I don't want it to end!

Great job though!

Hugs,
Anna

Hey !!

Amy--: Yes, Sirius was harsh, but he was just concerned about James, and he’s honest. No wonder you feel bad for James, Lily was hard on him, luckily Sirius was there. I’m so glad you liked what Sirius told to Lily. And I just felt lie making a long line to Sirius, making Lily realise her mistakes. Yes, an act like that was a bit out of character, and yes it was to show how important this was to her. I’m glad you liked my description of his room. A closer look at his closet is in the last chapter Hmm. To be honest I’ve no idea how I came up with the idea of the parchment… It just sort of came to my mind. I’m sorry it has to end, and no, to be a bit different, the last chapter is not about them dying Thanks for the nice words.
JSB 073: Of course I do! I couldn’t torture you more, could I? Ah, Sirius crazy? He just cares about James. And yes, Lily definitely deserved it. Haha. Yeah, I love the song very much but actually first really started to listen to it when I wrote the chapter. So yes, they’re happy again, together. Thanks for the feedback
iluvviktorkrum: You’d been holding your breath? Sorry, if I was too long about it. Sirius had a few good points, huh? And it hit Lily hard. Good she came to realise her mistakes. But the problem wasn’t that she hated James, she just felt hurt and not as if being treated like she should be. Glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback
amv_hearts_hp: You don’t think Lily deserved all of it? Hm, maybe Sirius was a bit too harsh, but as long as Lily realised what she’d done and what to do. I’m glad you liked when Lily went to the Potters, but I’m sorry if I made James too sad. I’m glad you came to like the parchment thing in the end. Err, just one question; I gave you ‘warm fuzzies’? haha, I must be good I’m sorry. The story has to end, and I’m sad about it too. Thanks for the feedback
Everyone: Yep! The last chapter is up. Go read it!

- Vicki

Happy happy. Joy joy. And I mean literally too.
Everything went well and everyone knows they're back together. They're all happy. Frank and Alice and Sirius and of course James and Lily!
Truly is their Happy Ending. - title!!
I didn't even know you were almost done with this little fic, and now it's over. It was so different, but it was great. I loved it all. Great job Vickie!!!
Loved it.

Hey!

JSB 073: Thanks for your last review, Jessica. You’re one of those I thank the most as you’ve been with me and this story from the very start, and for that I con only thank. Yes, everything was happy, everyone was happy. You didn’t know this was the last chapter? Because I think I wrote it in the seventh chapter that it was. Never mind. I’m sad I couldn’t make it go longer as I love writing this one as it’s been different. You know, not in Hogwarts, no head boy and girl and no Quidditch. Not like everything we’re used to. Thanks for you very nice words.

- Vicki

Well on the one hand, I'm sad that it's ended cos that was a really good fic and I've really enjoyed reading it; same goes for all your other fics!

On the other hand, I'm glad it ended there cos it really was, as the title said, their happy ending! I'm soooo happy you didn't end it with their deaths! It was nice to stop there, and for anyone who hadn't read Harry Potter already, it would have been a lovely ending, but alas, we have all read Harry Potter, and we all know wht happens to them in the next couple of years but the point I am trying to make is that you didn't end it with them dying, so hugs to you!!

And not only did Lily and James get their happy ending, but Frank and Alice did too. Again, we know what happens to them before long, but it really does add a nice touch when you don't mention it in your fic!!

Haha another great discription ... James' wardrobe!! I could have guessed that was what it would be like inside - cluttered, messy, and full of random **** but I like how he kept the skirt and top he had from Lily; it just shows how much he loved her, and didn't give up on her! Aawww

I LOVED the part when Sirius came in!! It was so funny how he just jumped to the wrong conclusion when he saw Lily at her own home - it's a good thing James turned up before Sirius arrived! The stuff he was saying, 'you're a mean mean woman!' really made me laugh cos she was completely innocent now that she was back with James! Then when Lily told James they couldn't have that much fun for another few months:



Ha that was probably the funniest part!!

All in all, you should be proud of that fic; it was very well written, as are all your fics, and it's just a shame it ended now! And by the way, that's the first fic I've read from the time it started til it finished - all the other fics I'm reading were already started by the time I started reading them!! So you should feel special

Very well done Vicki!!

~Amy <3

Wow... you just finished that up perfectly, didn't you??

It was so very, very sweet... I actually liked that she left before James woke up, it just fit better. I loved that Lily ran into James' mum, who just continued on... he he. Even though there wasn't much about James' mum as a character in this story, that totally made me love her!

The rest of the chapter was just so, so sweet. They are so in love!! I liked how James surprised her by coming over, and she thought it was someone else... but nope, it turned out to be James. And then she made them breakfast... I absolutely loved when Sirius came and was still angry at her, but she had made up with James! It was too funny! Or, "fun in the day..." He he. It was good to see some humor thrown in there. And throughout the chapter, the two of them are just so incredibly happy.

It really was a "happy ending." It was nice that the whole thing just ended up happy, just how it should have been.

I loved it... I hope you keep up with your others.

Hugs,
Anna

Oh it's over? It's such a nice story and it has a very nice ending to it. I liked how everything just fell into place, and it was very great to read. Alice and Frank heard about Lily being with James.. A bit awkward but funny nevertheless, and Alice is Lily's good friend soo..
I think it was so fun when Sirius started shouting at Lily and then suddenly James just appeared in the doorway and he was silenced. So hilarious.

Great great story

Hey!

Amy--: Well, I’m sad it’s over too. I loved to write on this, but then I have a few other things to write on instead Yes, I did not want it to end sad. I thought living happily ever after (which I know that don’t), would be a nice change. And really, I’ve not written on this for long enough time to make a possible dead-ending great enough. I don’t think I could succeed in making the emotions real as I’d been able to if I knew this Lily and James better. If you think I’m rambling now it’s okay, I have a hard time understanding my self too Yes, everyone was happy, I think which I had not planned, but sort of fitted into the story. I’m so glad you liked James’ closet! I lover describing it and found it funnier to reread it. Yes, he did not have the heart to give or send her skirt and top back, I would have been cruel and heartbreaking if he did, I think. I tend to believe that Sirius in the moment he ad been thrown out of Lily’s house hoped that he had hit s spot as he did, and therefore had been wrong if Lily was home. It was my favourite line of all times I think. I wrote it as seeing some episode of Friends where Chandler say something very much alike. I loved it so much I had to make Sirius say it. And when he does, it sounds as Chandler inside my head I live the ‘fun in the day/night’ part too. I hoped people would be able to catch what I was talking about. I feel proud I could have you the whole way, you’ve been a faithful reader. Thanks, Amy!
amv_hearts_hp: Really, Lily waking up and waiting for James to just meeting him in the morning just seamed wrong to me. I only though of that only thing she could do. And I think you’ve misunderstood Eleanor; she’s James cousin, mentioned very briefly in the first chapter and Lily finely meets her at the wedding. Exactly that part you mention where James surprised Lily; I thought of parting the chapter there and write it in two, but I decided against it as you see, thinking there were no need for cliffhangers. Hehe. I love Sirius too. Through the whole story he’s just seamed like a character who wants the best for all of them, and that’s James and Lily being together. So of course he was mad, he’d expected he could do some help, which he actually did. I’m glad I could make you smile with my ‘fun in the day/night’ part there. I liked it was well. Yes, a Lily/James happy ending. I thought it was the best way to end it as the whole fic have been so sad that happy endings were needed. Thanks for you feedback most of the way through, Anna!
Regitze: I’m afraid it is over. But at least I ended it happily, eh? That’s not something we read every day in Lily/James stories. Haha, I’d have been very embarrassed if I stood in front of Alice and Frank, explaining where I did spend my last night. Sirius is kind of sweet, ain’t he? He just really, really cares for James and Lily. They’re best with each other. I’m glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback!
Everyone: Well. Thanks to all for the support I’ve gotten al the way through. Thanks to readers, also them who did not leave feedback. And a huge thanks to my beta. I know I’ve said all this before, but Again; Thanks.

- Vicki

Just read it all, and It was brilliant, you are a great writer. I only post feedback on the good ones and here I am. I just have to say it was good and hope you keep writing in the future

Oh My God! It is absolutely marvelous :D!!! Bare så du ved det er mig Vicki, så skriver jeg lige lidt til dig på dansk, hehe, to fra den samme by i Danmark, det er vel nok en sensation :P! Well, what can I possibly say that has not already been told? Perhaps that you made my eyes go warm and wet! You are so amazing!!! Why don't you try and give this piece to Søren Smith, I am sure he would absolutely adore it! I admire you so much. What you can do with your imagination is 100% cool! You are really an amazing fan-fiction writer, I must say! And as you told me, you wanted to keep it original, and it sure is! I must say that I love it :rolleyes:

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The Writing on the Wall: Thank you so much! It's always so nice to hear that someone like the work you've spent hours making as good as possible. But yes, I do kiip writing. I've tried to cut down and put more attention at school but I can't Thanks yet again.
Lulu-lolo: Ahh! Louise. Welcome to the forums, finally, eh? You have no idea how much it means to me that someone I actually know from reallife instead of VTM actually wants to spend time reading what I write. So nice! As I said to you, I don't know about SS, I might consiider it. Might. And while I remember, HAHA! I made your eyes wet! But it was the least I could do really, I worked a lot to try and make the scenes so emotional. Really. Hehe, if you knew what was going on in my head when it comes to fanfiction you'd probably not believe it. Original mind through and through But thanks again, it's really made me happy and smiling. Blushing a bit too. Haha. See you soon! And thanks yet again!

- Vicki

Wow! that was great! good job! the feelings were so well described! i almost cried at the sad parts and i was grinning ear to ear at the happy parts! this was a great story! Your rating 1=best 10=terrible. You have recieved a... 2! Great job!
~Squish