Hello there! This is the feedback thread for my one-shot "A Very Special Christmas." It's about the first Christmas after Lord Voldemort's defeat. I would like to thank you in advance for leaving your comments, and thank you for reading the story.

I am looking for all types of comments so please don't be shy! I look forward to it.

You can read the story here.

~Lauren

Yes! First! lol

Anyway, awesome story. Very well written, and passionate (hehe) and beautiful. The plot was really cool too! Dang, I didn't do a wedding thing... oh well. Remember my vote.

Witherwaaangs

Good job! The proposals were a little cheezy, but it was still good. Good luck in the contest!

Thanks for the feedback.

Yeah I know the proposals were cheesy, I'm not used to writing that sort of thing and without any experience or friends to turn to or advice, I went with the stuff you see on the old movies.

Thanks for saying that it's good, that means a lot to me. I think I rushed into engagment with this story, but it's a one-shot so what can you do?

Thanks again!

~Lauren