It says in the rules to make one, so here it is!

First to review! I liked that, and it was good that you highlighted their strengths and weaknesses, because that followed on well from one of JKR's themes throughout the book, which was love.

And that did play a major part in your fic - it was the fact that Harry loved his mother for what she did that drove Harry to perform the Cruciatus curse, and in doing so, got the Felix Felicis.

I also liked how Harry didn't kill Draco - even though he said it was because Drao would no longer be in any pain, we all know that Harry isn't a killer (Not directly, anyway).

Great fic, and I won't vote until I've read more entries!!

~Amy <3

Thanks whoever voted for me. It means a lot seen as this is the first time I have ever entered!

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It means a lot, this is my first try, so thank you.

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The writing is good, flows well, straightforward.

I liked the conversation between Harry and Draco, but I didn't like the ending. Harry wouldn't be cruel like that.

Muggles who happened on a man frozen stiff in the middle of Stonehenge would not think he was insane. They would call an ambulance and try to help him.

And why did Harry force Draco to drink Butterbeer and then tell him to go to sleep? Butterbeer doesn't make one sleep.

I also don't think you set up the scenario clearly enough. It is not clear why there is only one bottle of Felix Felicis left, nor why Harry and Draco are the ones to find it.

Interesting fic. I think one of the things I liked best about your interpretation is that you chose to bring out a side of Harry that is different from popular belief or from JKR's orininal score. As an author it takes a good amount of imagination and creativity to think outside of the box and not jump on the bandwagon to write the same old situations with popular characters.

Well done

Feedback for Feedback:

SwissMiss: I know places weren't very clear, I ain't that good at one-shots so I've given it a try. Thanks for not just going 'That was stupid, it mad no sense,' and saying how I can improve. It's good to get feedback, it makes me feel warm.

nevillesgirl: Well, I kind of veered of from where I thought it was going to go and so the title changed with it. 'Darkness of a Kind Heart' sums it up. Thaks for saying I was creative, because that's always the department I've been lacking in

Thank You, if you want more stuff written by me, links are in my sig

I know that the contest is already over, but I decided to read your one-shot and leave feedback anyway. I really enjoyed reading this fic. The conversation between Draco and Harry was great. I was glad Harry didn't kill Draco in the end. That would have been beneath him. Thanks for the good read.