hi
please lemme know how you liked it and please don't forget to vote!!!!!!!



thanx
alycat

Hey there, I liked your story. It was a little confusing in places, but good. Also, just a heads up, no one will be able to vote for you, as you didn't create a poll. I don't think it's too late. I think you have up to three days to add the poll. At least I think I remember reading that somewhere.

Good luck with the contest.

Dayna

That was different than I expected! But in a good way, obviously. When I read 'a flash of red' I thought it would be Ginny, but poor George! And he did it all to make sure his brother didn't die in vain for Harry.

I love the idea that Harry is going to bury the bottle of Felix, as a reminder of wht happened then. He could have kept it for himself, but we all know how noble Harry is!

Well done! Oh, and I would alter your sig before the mods get to it - they might delete the whole thing because it has much more then 5 lines of text. Just thought I'd let you know!

~Amy <3

Good job. It's pity George died, not that I don't want Harry to survive. It well written and you really chose a good title for this one shot.

Greets Rox

I don't get it: Why would George be lucky? He didn't get the potion. I am also confused by the last line. Why is the best thing to keep the potion buried? Wouldn't the best thing be to destroy it? If it is merely buried, it will continue to cause treasure-seekers to try and get it. And what happened after George was killed? Malfoy was not killed, and neither was Harry. Why would they have stopped their duel just because George was killed? And what did happen to the potion?

Also, you should really get a beta reader to go over your fic before posting it. It is full of spelling and punctuation errors.

Well done. It's so sad that George had died, but he's back with his twin now, so that at least is something. I also like your inspiration to keep the bottle buried - very symbolic, given the death and destruction that had resulted from the potion. I guess the reason the battle stopped with George's death was that Draco showed some empathy, and couldn't comprehend the fact that he had killed someone? Even if that's not the reason, I'll go with it

Yeah, not-too-bad an effort! Good luck with the competition

wow, that was great!
i really liked your fic, very unexpected, i really couldn't imagine it being a dream or a flash back or anything of the sort.
keep up the good work
you're brilliant