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cloe101
hey people before i start i want you to know i added a new person to the story .
tell me what you think.
if you dont like it dont respond.
thanks.
none of the people in this story are mine ecept Lorrie
Harry ,Ron ,Hermione ect...are all JkR's.
Summery :the year seems to be going great for harry when his world is turned upside down by a new girl at school.Harry grows a lot in this year. wink.gif
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chapter 1

it was already july and harry was sick of the dursleys.harry was asleep in his room when he heard a tap at his window. he got up to see what it was ,it was pig rons owl and it had a note for harry .after a few moments of trying to catch the bird pig landed to give him the note:

happy birthday harry! i have a birthday "present" for you.i hope you had a good summer and that the muggels arnt driving you mad.
SEE YOU SOON.
Ron

Harry reread the letter."see you soon."what did ron mean by that?harry soon went back to sleep when he was awakend by a tap at the window again.pig was back with a new letter.

meet us outside at 12:00.
Ron

harry turned and looked at hia alarm clock.11:50.harry packed with a flash and carred his trunk and headwig's cage down stairs and out the door.he sat in the yard and wated. all of a sudden there was a flash of light and a loud "crack" and mr. weasley ,ron and lupin stood in the middle of the street.
were are we going ? harry asked. i cant tell you now but first I must teach you how to apparate.
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CH.2
"Harry all you have to do is think hard of were you want to

go."Mr.Weasley said."Harry I want you to think about standing outside

Grimmuald place."

Harry shut his eyes,CRACK,the group was standing outside Sirius's

house.As Harry walked inside he was welcomed by Tonks, Mad

eye,and Mrs.Weasley."Ron go help Harry unpack." Mrs.Weasley said.

Harry and Ron walked upthe stairs and into their room.

Once Harry was unpacked there was a knock at the door.

It was Hermione and Ginny.Hermione walked over to Harry and

hugged him.When Ron saw this he went red then Hermione walked

over to Ron and gave him a kiss.Ginny giggled."So are you two

together now?"Harry asked . "yeah. we got together in June."Hermione

said."wow thats gerat!"Harry said .Harry was happy for them ,but he

still felt left out.The days passed quickly in Grimmuald place soon it

was time to go back to school.

the next morning Mrs.Weasley was pushing them out the door."Hurry

you are going to miss the train"she said. Harry,Ron,Hermione and

Ginny got on the train just in time.
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A little sloppy but I will try to update soon. There is a surprize comming up .Wate and see.Tell me what you think?(Please be nice.)
cloe101
Chapter 3

The great hall was very loud.All the students were talking about were

they went that summer.Professor McGonagall walked to the front of

the great hall with the first years .she pulled a list out of her robes

and read.Applegate, Adam.A small boy made his way to the

front.Finally the last name was read but instead of leaving McGonagall

stayed up at the front ."We have a sixth year student that needs to

be sorted."she said.A pretty girl with reddish brown hair walked from

the back of the great hall .Many wispers came after her."Now if you

please take a seat on the stool."McGonagall said.the sorting hat

wasent on her head for long when it shouted. "Gryffindor!"

The girl walked down the table looking for a place to sit.When she

passed harry ,hermione said with surprize."Lorrie is that you?"The girl

turned around"oh my...Hermione."she said."Lorrie sit with

us."Hremione said.Lorrie took her seat by harry.Dumbledore stood

up."I would like to welcome you all ,but that would take to long

so ..Dig in."Dumbledoresat back down to the new feast thet was now

sitting on the plates.After everyone was finnished eating Dumbledore

stood back up."Gryffindor Chaser tryouts will be held next week.That

is all."

Everyone walked up to the common room."Oh I am so rude.I'm Lorrie

Chantell."she said to Ron and Harry."Ron Weasley."Ron said.Harry

went to introduce himself but all he did was studder luckly Ron

said "This is Harry Potter." " Well nice to meet you both.I think I'll turn

in for the night."Lorrie said. She was walking up the stairs when

Hermione said."So what did you think about Lorrie?"Ron said ' She is

nice."harry however was still waching her go up the stairs did not

answer.
cloe101
sorry i have not updated in a while but i am back and here is the next chapter.
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Chapter 4

The next morning Harry was being very careful on how he was dressing
himself.After a while Ron was awake and noticed Harry ."Harry , what
are you doing?"Ron asked stupidly."I'm getting dressed Ron ,what
does it look like I'm doing."Harry said quickly.
"Yes,I can see that ,but why so careful? The last time you did that is
when you faniced Cho...oh." Ron thought of why Harry was acting the
way he was."You like someone don't you?Who is it?"Ron asked with
wonder. Harry stoped and looked at Ron."Lorrie"Harry said shyly."I
knew it thats why you studdered and didn't talk all night." Ron said
trying not to laugh."Ron you can't tell her,okay."Harry said firmly."Fine
mate but you should."Ron said.

By now the sun was peeking out from behind the trees and Harry and
Ron went down to the Great hall for breakfast.
"Harry,Ron I have got your class list.We have Care of Magical
Creatures first."Hermione said.Ron let out a sigh."Slytherins"Ron said
with pain in his voice.Lorrie was shocked when the owls came in."We
never used owls at my old school, we always used pet birds."Lorrie told
the others.After breakfast the Gryfindors werewalking down to Hagrid's
hut when malfoy and his gang of Slytherins walked up to Lorrie."what
are you doing with this group of losers ,when you could be hanging out
with me?"Malfoy asked.Lorrie did not respond.Harry was not shure but
he thought he saw a flash in Lorrie's eyes."Why would she want to be
with a slime ball like you."Ron spat."Ohh not very frendly .If you get
tired of playing with weasles.."Malfoy turned to Lorrie."Come and find
me."Lorrie glared at Malfoy.He winked at her and walked off."Today
we will be studing Quaddles a tiney white creature that is belived to
cause a moementary "crush " ,as muggles call it.Can aneybody tell
me the common name?"Hagrid asked."yes Hermione.".Hermoine
coughed."It is more widely known as the love bug."she said."Right you
are 10 points to Gryfindor."Harry couldent consentrate on what Hagrid
was saying because he kept noticing that Lorrie was staring at
Malfoy.Harry felt hatrid burn inside him as he watched Malfoy smile at
her .
During break Hermione was talking to Lorrie."Lorrie you should
consider going into a study group.Are there any club that you want to
join?"Hermione asked."well.. don't laugh but I heard that a Chasser
left last year and I thought about trying out."Lorrie said."I will need to
pratice ."Lorrie said. "maby Harry could help you."Ron said quickly.
"Oh.Harry could you please?"Lorrie begged. Harry went pink."Sure.
Iwilll help."He said with a smile.
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Thanks Esrb99.I will try to improve.
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Chapter 5

Friday had come at last. Harry and Lorrie were talking about when they should pratice."After dinner would be best because the pitch will be free . Tomarrow is tryouts and I won't be able to pratice then."Lorrie said.
Harry and Ron made their way out to the pitch.and was wating for Lorrie to show up when Ron walked over to Harry "Ron, what have you gotten me into."harry said. "Nothing .Here she comes now just be yourself."Ron said while pointing to a dark shape comming towards them."Ready." Lorrie said enthuasticly. "You know the rules so ...er
...all we need to do now is pratice scoring."Harry said. Lorrie and harry mounted their brooms."I hope I don't make a fool out of myself."She said. As they kicked off from the ground Harry read the side of her broom Firebolt . She was a very good flyer. Harry thought as he failed to block another one of her shots.They praticed till it got dark. "your realy good.You fly just as good as me if not better."Harry said. "Thank you, but you havent seen anything yet."She said with a smile.Ron was asleep in the stands. " I better go wake him. See you at tryouts tomarrow." Harry turned to walk away when Lorrie grabbed him lightly in the arm. "Harry thanks for helping me."sha said softly and kissed him on the cheek.She tuened around and walked back to the common room.Harry stood rooted on the spot,does she like me or was she just being nice, then a soft blowing of the wind snaped him out of his trance.Harry woke up Ron and they headed back to the common room.
Qudditich tryouts were this afternoon.Lorrie headed down to the pitich for tryouts when she got their Katie Bell was already talking to the others. "We will start with shooting a few goals then you will be devided into groups and we will move on to capturing the quaffle from the opposing team. On my whissle.3...2...1" A short blast blew from the whissle and the students were off.They each took turns in the end Lorrie did very well.The students landed ."I will now split you into groups of three.your team has to try to get the quaffle away from us.Ron will stand in as a chaser.First team your up."Katie said.Lorrie was in the last group to go. Finally she was up the whissle blew and she was off.She managed to get the ball away from Ron twice but the real shock was when Kaite was comming staight at lorrie when she flipped upside down on her broom while holding on with her legs she got the quaffle away from Kaite and speed towards the oppsite end of the feild.Katie signaled for them to stop.they headed back to the ground."The tryouts are now over. We will anounce who made the team at 8:00 pm tonight in the common room ."Katie said. Everybody ecept the team left.Lorrie walked back to the common room with the others to awate the teams decision.Finally it was 8:00 when the team walked in . Katie Bell stood on a chair so she could be seen."We would like to thank everyone who tryed out tonight, you all played well but there is only room for one of you on the team. So we are proud to welcome our new member...Lorrie Chantell."
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Harry watched Lorrie and Hermione celebrate her victory.Harry noticed how the firelight danced across her face.
"You should tell her." A voice came from behind Harry that made him jump,it was Ron.
"I can't Ron ,not tonight"Harry replyed.
"Why not ?It seems perfect to me."sounding slightly annoyed.
"I can't what if she hates me?"Harry wispered.
"Fine don't tell her ,but she might not be single for long.The way Malfoy keeps talking."Ron said in a offhanded kind of tone.
Once most of the students went to bed Ron nugged Harry towards Lorrie and Hermione.
"Okay Im going...Im going."Harry took the hint and walked over to were the girls were."Lorrie can I talk to you."Harry looked at Hermione."Alone."He added.
"Sure ,Hermoine you don't mind ,do you?"Lorrie asked
"No not at all I need to talk to Ron anyway."She said with a small smile.
"So what did you want to talk to me about?" She asked.Does he know?
"I ...er...I just wanted to...I mean .."Harry took a deep breath."Congrats on making the team."Harry said.
"I coulden't have done it with out your help."She said taking a step closer to him."Is that all you wanted to tell me?"She asked."yeah."Harry lied."Im off to bed ,see you tomarrow."he said and quickly walked up the stairs and left Lorrie standing there.
Lorrie walked up to the girls dorm.Hermione saw what happend and went after her.when she got to the top of the stairs the door was cracked ad she could hear voices comming from inside.
"I have got to tell him."
"NO! You will put the mission at stake."Lorrie was talking to some woman the voice Hermione did not recall hearing before.
"He needs to know the truth."Lorrie pleeaded.
"You have already had your sister go missing because of this.Once they find out it is not you that they have they will come after you and kill anyone who gets in their way.Do you want Harry to die as well?"the woman warned.
Hermione knocked on the door and the voice stoped talking, Lorrie walked to the door and opend it."How much did you hear?"Lorrie asked trying to fight back a sob.
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cloe101
Thanks for that I needed it.If there is somthing wrong I try to fix it.I hope you like this chapter.
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Chapter 7

The next morning Harry was awakend by Ron.
"Harry, wake up we are going to be late for Snape's class!"Ron yelled.
Harry and Ron ran down the hall and right into Peeves.
"Oh look students out of class.what should be their punishment?"he said in a drawling voice.
"Get out of the way!" Ron yelled
"Oh...the weasle is mad.I think he should cool down."Peeves vanished into the wall.Harry and Ron kept running down the hall when Peeves came out of the wall in front of them.Peeves had a arm full of water balloons and with an evil grin he started throughing them at Ron.
"Ahhh!" As the two boys ran into Snape's class Peeves zoomed away happly.
Harry and Ron who was now dripping wet had to face Snape.
"Class started half an hour ago. 50 points from Gryfindor.Now if you will take your seats."Snape said with a smile."Today we will be making Veritaserum,the truth potion.Mr. Weasley and Mr. Potter will be testing the potions when they are ready." Snape instructed."Now."he fliped his wand."The ingredents are on the boardand begin."
By the end of class Snape told them to put up their potions and they will continue wednesday.
At the end of the day Harry ,Ron and Lorrie went down to Qudditch.Hermione went with them to watch.
"We are doing great ,if we play like this in the match tomarrow ,the Slytherins wont stand a chance."Katie told the team .Before they left Katie pulled lorrie aside.
"Lorrie you are doing great but I want you to pratice a new move."Katie wispered.Lorrie waved at the others telling them to go on without her .
At breakfast the next morning Harry noticed Lorrie did not even looked phased.Harry remembered his first match and how scared he was.But Lorrie looked the exact opposite she was laughing and talking to hermione and Ginny. After breakfast everybody made their way down to the Qudditch pitich.As the team got dressed Katie was trying to give pep talk but all she said was"Play like you did in pratice and have fun." She turned to look at Lorrie."You did get that move down dident you?"Lorrie nodded."Okay team lets win this." The team walked out as their names were called.Bell,Chantell,Kirke,Potter,Sloper,Spinnett,and Weasley.They walked to the center of the pitich to meet the Slytherin team.Malfoy glared at Harry then turned to Lorrie and gave her a wink.Hatered burned inside Harry as Malfoy smiled.
The whissle blew and the two teams were off.Harry was looking for the snitch when he heard Lee Jordon.
"Slytherin leads 10 to 0.Bell has the ball she maked her way down the feild and..score! She ties the game 10 to 10. Slytherin has the ball montague heading for the goal..."
Harry saw Lorrie heading straight for Montague when she slipped off her broom on one side holding on with her legs like a kid would do on the monkeybars.She grabbed the Quaffle out of his hands and fliped back on her broom.
"WOW! Chantell with the ball making her way down the feild doges a bludger and she scores!"Harry relised he was just floting there and started flying aroung looking for the snitch.just then he saw Malfoy dive the snitch was below him.Harry wached in horror as Malfoy reached for the snitch.Just then the snitch moved and Harry saw Malfoy's eyes get big as he tryed to pull up but it was too late he hit the ground. Harry couldent help but laugh as Malfoy pulled his broom out of the ground.Then Harry saw it . It was the snitch by the Slytherin's goal.Harry flew past Malfoy and raced after the snitch harry reached out and clasped the struggling snitch in his hand.
there was a massive amount of applause as the team came down. Lorrie ran over to Harry and hugged him as they were lifted up.Harry turned around to see Malfoy looking stunned.

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Okay here goes the next chapter.
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Chapter 8

The months flew by and it was almost time for Christmas.Harry awoke to fine everyone gathered around the notice board.
"Whats going on?"Harry asked while wipeing his eyes.
"There is a dance comming up and the school is holding auditions for entertainment."Hermione replyed.Lorrie walked from behind Harry and over to Hermione .
"Do you want to tryout?"Lorrie asked.
to harry's astonishment hermione said yes.
"But we have to find two more members."Hermione replyed.
Just then Ginny and Paravati cane down the stairs.Lorrie and Hermione ran over to them.
"Do ya'll want to be in our group for the auditions?"Lorrie asked in her texan tone.
"Sure it sounds fun."They replyed trying not to laugh.
After a little while Ron came down and the group walked outside as they were walking Ron said in a low tone "Ask her."
"Ask her what?"Harry wispered.
"Ask her to go with you to the dance."Ron answered.
When they got to the lake Harry asked Lorrie if they could talk.She nodded and got up.They were walking along the lake when she asked"You wanted to talk so whats up?"
"I was wondering if you ...er...wanted to go with me to the dance?" Harry's heart was racing What if she said no.? Or if she liked someone else? .Lorrie stoped walking Harry noticed this and stoped too.
"Harry I...I would love to go with you."she leaned over and hugged him.Harry's stomach felt like it did three backflips.
Ron and Hermione was watching the two and when Ron saw Harry holding Lorries hand, he punched his fist in the air in victory, which caused Hermione to laugh.
Later that night .
"Hermione have you seen Lorrie?"Harry asked.
"No. I thought she was with you."Hermione replyed looking over her book and stairing at ron.
"I havent seen her eather."Ron said with confuision.
Harry left the common room and was walking around looking for Lorrie,when he saw her at the end of the hall with Malfoy.Malfoy looked angry.
"POTTER! How could you be going with Potter!"Malfoy yelled.
malfoy leaned over and wispered something in Lorries ear.Harry noticed she looked scared. Just then Malfoy pushed her up on the wall and kissed her.Harry ran down the hall and grabbed Malfoy by the sholders and pulled him off Lorrie.Harry punched Malfoy hard in the jaw and any were else he could find.Malfoy yelled in pain.Ron and Dean came around the corner and pulled Harry away from Malfoy.Harry saw Lorrie was crying and he broke away from Ron and Dean.
"Are you Okay."he asked."lets go back to the common room alright."he said softly.
When they walked into the common room everyone stoped talking and staired at Lorrie.
"Ron,what happend?"Hermione asked.
"I don't know ,when we got there Harry was beating Malfoy to a pulp."Ron replyed.
"We had to pull Harry off him."Dean said.
Hermione walked over to Lorrie."Lorrie what happend?"she asked sounding conserned.
" I was comming back from Professor McGonagall's office when i ran into Malfoy. He wouldent let me pass.he asked me to the dance and when I told him I was going with Harry he got angry and he said that he always gets what he wanted and he wasen't going to let Potter stop him.Then he pushed me up on the wall and he...."Her voice broke."Anyways Harry saw him and he pulled him off me.and thats were Ron and Dean came in."She said in a horse voice."Harry saved me."She said while hugging him.
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Sorry,the event is next chapter.
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cloe101
thanks for everything.
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Chapter 9

The next day there was a new post on the board.
the group that will be playing at the dance is Jinxed. See you all at the dance.
After reading this note Hermione screamed and ran up to the girls dorm. Ginny,Lorrie,Hermione and Parvati ran down the stairs.When they all read the note they let out a high pitched scream.
Harry walked over to the girls.
"What is all the screaming about?"He asked rubbing his ears.
"Harry we got the part."Lorrie answered hugging him.
Finally the day of the day of the dance had arived and Dumbledore gave the school a day off so they could buy new clothes for the dance.Harry,Ron,Dean and Seamus were out with the girls.the guys decided to split from the girls and do some shopping of their own.Harry and Dean had to help Ron and Seamus pick out muggle clothes.After they were done they went to look for the girls . they found them comming out of a muggle shoe shop.
"Aren't you finished yet?"Ron said sounding annoyed.
"No."the girls said together giggling.
Just then the girls saw something.
"Oh my...we have got to go in there."Lorrie said sounding overjoyed.She looked to her right and then to her left.The girls nodded in agrement. They ran intothe store behind Harry.As harry walked in ,fallowed by Ron,Dean and Seamus,Harry got the feeling that he was way out of place.
"Yeah...Im going to leave now.We will meet you girls outside."Harry said weirdly.The boys turned and left.
"Did you see them swarming over the jewlrey?"Seamus laughed.
"It was like dogs fighting over a bone."Ron said who was cluching his sides.
"I have never seen so much pink in my life."Dean laughed.
Finnally the girls came out with their hands full of shopping bags.
"Ready to go?"Ginny did not wate for a answer she raised her hand into the air.A bus appered out of nowere.
"welcome to the Knight bus."Stan said formally.
"Hogsmead please." Hermione said.when the bus stoped they payed stan and went off to get ready for the ball.Harry put on his tan slacks and his new black button up shirt .when the boya were ready they wated for the girls at the grand staircase.
The guys jaws droped as the girls walked down the stair case.
Hermione was wearing a black strapless dress.Ginny was wearing a blue floor lingth dress.Parvati was wearing a short green dress.And Lorrie was wearing a red dress with a split down the side and red heels with a strap around her ankle.
"Are you just going to stand there all night?"Lorrie giggled.
As they entered the great hall all heads turned towared them.
"Too bad malfoy is not here."Lorrie said trying not to laugh.
The girls said goodbye to their dates and wated by the stage.McGonnagle walked on stage ."I would like to introduce you to Jinxed."She clapped and walked off stage.The lights demmed and the girls started singing.
"oh...oh...oh... so mush for my happy ending.Lets talk this over its not like we're dead.Was it something I did or was it something you said.Dont leave my hangin' in a city so dead.Held up so high on such a breakable thread.You were all the things I thought I knew and I thought we could be."the tempo picked up and the lights came back on." You were everything everything that I wanted.We were ment to be supposed to be but we lost it.All of the memorys so close to me just fade away.All this time you were pretendin'.So much for my happy endin'.They were very good.. Harry thought.Later they took a break.
"You are very good."Ron told Hermione.
"Lorrie and I used to have a band but we lost two members."Hermione explayened.While everyone was talking Lorrie and Harry went walking through the gardens.
"You look great up there."Harry said shyly.
"Thanks."she replyed smileing.They took a seat on a bench by a tree.Harry staired into Lorries blue eyes and noticed how the stars reflected in them.Harry leaned over and kissed her.He did not know how long they were out there and he didn't care.They would have been out there all night if Dean hadn't come looking for Lorrie.
"Oh sorry.Lorrie the band needs you."Dean said.
"Harry I got to go. Im sorry."she said clearly not wanting to go.
When the dance was over they all made their way back to the common room.Harry walked over to the couch and sat down Lorrie walked over to him and sat beside him.
"So where were we.... oh yeah I think it was about here."Lorrie said as she leaned over and started to kiss him.All of a sudden there was shouting up stairs,it was Ron.
"Dean what in the bloody hell do you think your doing to my sister."
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ry for the language.the song is sung is Happy Ending by Avril Lavagene.what do you think? sad.gif
Hint:if you rember in earlyer chapters you will get a idea why two members are lost.
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Chapter 10
The next day Ginny would not speek to Ronand Ron would not look at Dean.Professor McGonagale walked into the room.Harry only remembered once when she idi this and it always had bad news come from it.
" Mr.Potter,Ms.Chantell come with me please the Headmaster wants to see you."she spoke with a cold stern voice.
"thankyou Minnerva that will be all.have a seat."Dumbledore motioned at the two chairs in front of his desk.Harry and Lorrie walked over to the chairs and sat down.
"Harry as you know last term in the department of misterys you had your fellow students smash some shelves.well the workers cleaning the mess found this ."Dumbledore took out a blue velvet bag and handed it to Lorrie.She reached inside the bag and pulled out a blue orb.
"Harry the orb you smashed was incomplete,Lorainna if you will please hold the orb in your right hand and sayEscavateia "Doumbledore instructed.
"I'm sorrie sir but you must be mistaken I am not who you seek,my name is Lorrie not Lorainna."she replyed confused.
"No your name is Lorainna Ann Chantell your mother had it changed to protect you from your fate.Now if you will the orb."Dumbledore said calmly.Lorrie did as she was told.Escavateia The orb turned redas a white figure arose out of it.
"One will be born as two to parents that are dommed .the girl will have flashing eyes of blue the girl will be the key that defetes he who must not be named.Joined with the boy who lived will bring the down fall of the rising evil.She will be the key!"the figure shrunk back into the orb.
"It cant mean me."lorrie stated shocked.
"It does or you wont be able to hold it. But what does it mean?"Harry finally spoke.
'It means that you must stick together to bring an end to Voldomort's power.From now on you two must be train together.As long as you two are together ,you can not be harmed.I belive that you have somthing to share Ms.Chantell."Dumbledore said kindly.
"Professor are your shure,I don't know if you are aware of the..."Her voice trailed off as she glanced at Harry.
"I have been informed about it,but for safety you neeto tell your side of the story."Dumbledore replyed.
"Harry there is somthing you should know.When I was 11 I came home from school one day to find the dark mark above my house."Lorrie explayend not looking at Harry."When Iwent inside I found my mother dead.It turns out that my stepfather was a formar death eater.When my mother found out she thretend my stepfathers freedom so he killed her .Me and my sister..."She begain but was interrupted by Harry.
"Sister. you have a sister?"Harry asked.
"Harry let me finnish please.My sister and I were moved by the Ministery to Texas.Everything was fine till about two years ago when Voldomort came back to power.My sister and I had to be alert.My sister and I are twins.Identical twins.Last year found out about the orb im guessing and kidnapped my sister thinking she was me.We were wondering were Draco was.He told Voldomort he had the wrong person.He can't attack Hogwarts and if he attacks me i cant stop him.Im so sorry Harry for pulling you into this."She said with tears running down her face.
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this is not the end of this story there is MUCH more to come.Hint Hint wink.gif
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cloe101
laugh.gif yea.i got some free time.before i start this chapter was ment for later on in the story but just because Valentines day is comming up i skiped ahead i hope you like it. biggrin.gif
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Chapter 11 The big step

Jan. faded away and soon it was February.Harry was in the common room talking to Lorrie .Valentines day was today and Harry andLorrie planed to spend the whole day together in Hogsmead.Harry was making shure everything was perfict.Harry was sure how he felt about her just as she was about him.they loved eachother more than words could experess.It was Lorries first time in Hogsmead during Valentines day.The first thing she saw was the coffee shop,just as he planed.
They walked into the shop an took the table in the center of the room.After ordering drinks the two sat and talked.Harry had to do it everything was perfict.Harry got off the stool and bent down.
"Harry what are you doing "Lorrie said smiling.
Harry puled out a black box from his pocket and opend it to revale a sliver ring with a large dimond in the center and two small saphaires on each side.
"Lorrie, every time I look into your eyes I get lost in the blue ocean within them.I loved you from the moment I saw you and I will continue to love you till the day I die.Lorrie Ann Chantell will you marry me?"Harry poured out all his feelings to her as the shop turned to Lorrie awating her answer.
Lorrie bit her lip and said.
"Harry of course I will marry you."
The couples in the shop clapped as Harry put the ring on her finger.
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When they got back to Hogwarts they ran into Ron and Hermione in the Great hall.
"Guess what."
"I'm getting married!"
"You are!"
"Me too!"
The girls finished every sentance at the same time.Harry glanced over at Ron who was smiling back at him.
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I know it is short but there will be more soon.I told you it was a big step. laugh.gif tell me what you think about what happend?
keep in mind that I know it was a little sudden but I couldent wate to write it.
no new post till I get replys.
cloe101
Chapter 12
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Harry awoke the next morning thinking about the dream he had just had .He rolled over in his fore poster bed and pulled back the hangings so he could look at the calander:April 23.
He sat stright up in bed.
Bloody hell ! I'm getting maried today. He thought.
Harry got up and got dressed.ron was already getting ready. Lorrie and hermione had planed a double wedding.The wedding was to be held in the great hall and the whole school was invited.Yes including Malfoy.Ron had by force by his mother and little sister choseDean thomas to be his best man.Harry chose Seamus finnigan.Privati and Ginny were bridesmaids.the school was all in a stir about the Potter,Chantell /Weasley,Granger wedding.
Harry and Ron exchanged nervouse glances as the school gathered in the great hall around twelve.Professor Flichwic was conducting a band of students.As Harry looked around the great hall he spoted Reta Seeker in the corner.
Even she cant ruin this day. He thought as the students started singing.
The doors opend as Dean walked in with Ginny when they got to the front the split Ginny's pastel yellow bridesmaid dress sweeping the floor as she walked.Just as it did with Parviti's when her and Seamus split.Finally the two brides came from opposite sides of the entrince hall joining together as tey walked down the asle.Harry felt a smile spread across his fase as he wached Lorrie.Lorrie and Hermione were both wearing white.Hermione's dress was very long Luna Lovegood held the back up as she walked.Lorrie's was floor lingth with a slik top and some kind of white meterial,Harry did not know what it was,the top of the dress had small pearl beads going down in a small point from her chest and she had the straps stright across her arms and off her sholders.Lorrie bit her lip as she walked,he knew she did this when she was nurvouse.The girls passed by fore empty chairs each one with a picture in it one with Lorrie's sister one with harry's mum another with his dad ans the last one with Sirius in it.Harry stared at his passed on family ,his mum was crying his dad ans sirius was beaming up at him. the weading started with a lighting of a candle in the center to represent the people who have passed on and a speech was read that brought almost everybody to tears.
"By the power invested in me by the Ministry of Magic I now pronounce you as ..."Dumblebore paused thinking on how to say this."Husbands and Wifes."
Everybody laughed and clapped .
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At the reception.
"Hey ron were is Lorrie and Hermione."Harry asked.
"I dont know mate they are propley changing."Ron answered.
Just then the lights dimmed.Then Harry heard Lorrie's voice.
"Love ,Love is a sweet thing.I said."The lights came back on and the other girls joined in.
"Love is a sweet sweet thing."
Lorrie and the other members of Jinxed were on the stage they were wearing matching outfits,they all wore bluejeans with a black belt ans a black top bearing the legand Jinxed underlined with a wand with sparkes comming out of the end.
When the song was over the girls hoped off stage.Lorrie walked over to Harry,he put his arms around her waist and gave her a kiss.
"Your not the only one with a surprise." he said as he snaped his fingers and the lights went off and music started playing.Lorrie screamed as the curtin was pulled back.Her favorite band was playing,Metallica.Rock filled the room.Lorrie turned to Harry.
"Harry, how did you get a muggle band to play here?"she yelled over the music.
"Dumbledore took care of it."Harry yelled back.
They walked out of the great hall and out to the carrage thet was wating to take them to The Three Broomsticks,were they hase a suite wating for them.
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By the way each couple got differant suites.
There is only two chapters left.[cry] but i wont post them till i get reveiws.they are very good so post soon. tongue.gif
cloe101
Chapter 13

Harry and Lorrie awoke to the sounds of screaming.Harry got up and walked over to the window.when he saw what was happening he turned to lorrie.
"I have to go,but I want you to know that I love you with all my heart and no matter what happens I will always love you."Lorrie looked at him with tears in her eyes.
"I know."she forced out.harry stared at her for a minute wondering if he will ever see his wife again.harry kissed her goodbye and raced down-stairs.
"There he is!"He heard one of the cloked figures shout.
The sky grew dark as Voldemort appered form one of the clouds and decended.It was like a bad dream.
"Potter how good of you to show up, and here I thout you would be hard to find. Thanks to that Seeker woman I found you at last.
"So were is Mrs.Potter?"He sneered.
"I...I dont know what your talking about."harry tryed to lie.
Voldemort laughed.
Voldemort threw a copy of the daliy prophet that showed on the front page.
DOUBLE WEDDING AT HOGWARTS(potter,chantell/weasley,granger)
SEEKER!Harry thought.
"No one in the room."Harry heard one of the death eaters cry.
"You can do what you want to me but leave Lorrie alone!"Harry yelled
"As I thought,Just like his father.But you see I can't leave her alone she is a threat ,but rest ashure this will end the same as it did 15 years ago."Voldemort sneered.
Voldemort raised his wand"Avada...
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I think I will just leave you there.One chapter left.Don't miss it.
cloe101
Cruccio! a spell came from behind Voldemort.As Voldemort fell harry saw who shot the spell.It was Lorrie.
"The only one that is going to die is you, that was for my mum and my sister."she yelled her voice shaking in anger.Lorrie ran over to Harry and grabbed his hand.As he did there was a jet of white and blue light comming from the end of their wands.The jets wrapped around Voldemort like snakes.there was a bright flash of light and Voldemort was lifted up.the light fadded and Voldemort was broght back down but not as a man but a little helpless baby.
Lorrie walked over to the baby and picked up the crying infent and calmed it.maby it was mertinal instint who knows.
Lorrie and Harry took the baby to Dumbledore as they walked into hogwarts mant students stared at them clearly not aware of what had happend.


Dumbledore stared at them in disbelife for a moment.
"harry do you know what happened when you held lorries hand?"
harry shook his head.
"when you grabed her hand you two unleashed some of the unknown magic that was held in the minstry behind the door that until today was locked.Only you two can control it.It dwells inside you two and your family for generations to come."Dumbledore added looking at lorrie.
"Voldemort could not match the power that you share and was returned back to a harmless baby.Only this time he is a muggle.'Dumbledore explained.
"Sir,what will happen to him?"Lorrie asked.
"He will be put into a muggle orphanage to be adopted.He will grow up a normal child not knowing about the life he led before."
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By the way I made one last chapter it is short but sweet. laugh.gif
no replys no ending.
cloe101
Last chapter,in the end I skiped into jan. of the next year.

Chapter 15

The end of the term approached quickly.Sence Harry was married,it would be kind of weird living with the Dursleys they decided to move into Grimmuld place.Ron and Hermione had been given a large amount of gold ,a wedding preasent from Fred and George,they bought the house for sale.Harry helped Ron move seeing how the girls couldent do any lifting.Lorrie and Hermione sat and watched them move the couch into their new home number eleven grimmuald place.
On Jan.first Hermione had a son named Blaise.And Harry became a father to twins,a boy Andy and a girl Dillian both with black hair and blue eyes,but the weirdest thing of all, the twins birthmarks were both lighting bolt scares on their forheads.

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somthing to think about.


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