Okay, so I woke up in this morning and I suddenly had the main plot of this story all worked out. I also woke up with the title all set, and I just couldn’t wait to get this up, so I came home from school, did all my homework, and did all of the editing. I couldn’t wait two weeks like I said I would in Secrets and Masks, so here it is now. Like it says, this is just the introduction, but the rest isn’t so boring, I promise. You have to start with this though, so deal with it. Now, if you were kind enough to read this, then I think you’ve been patient enough, so I’m done. Enjoy!
Introduction
Three girls sat in a compartment on the Hogwarts’ Express talking amongst themselves: three beautiful, bright witches; each one so very different, yet the best of friends.
First there was Lily Evans. She was the tallest of the three reaching 5-foot-9. She had straight, bright red hair that fell in layers down to the middle of her back. She had emerald green eyes that always betrayed her every emotion. They sparkled with happiness, shimmered with love, shone with fear, glistened with sadness, or flashed with anger. When she smiled, she lit up the room. Lily was gorgeous. There was no other way to describe her radiating beauty. It followed her around with the aura of kindness that seemed to bring anybody in need of help to her. Lily’s kind nature was known by all and it had people saying that she was the sweetest girl to ever enter Hogwarts. She was nice to everyone in the beginning. She never judged a person before meeting them. She had a way of caring for others that no one else could match. She showed kindness to almost everybody and gave second, third, fourth, and even fifth chances to almost everyone. She showed kindness to just about everybody until she found it almost impossible to do so and was forced to admit that there was no way to keep being nice. There were only a few exceptions to this rule. Lily was a very strong witch. She could conduct spells more easily than others and knew the answers to everything the teachers asked. Some said that Lily was a model student, and that’s why she was awarded this year’s Head Girl badge.
After Lily, there was Maria Goldstein. She was the next tallest at 5-foot-7 with shining dark brown hair that curled at the bottom reaching down to her lower back. Her eyes were a chocolate-brown color, but with a little something else. Maybe it was the dark gold specks or maybe the darker brown around the outside, but they were more than your average brown eyes. Her skin was naturally slightly tanned, and it suited her well. She was never seen without her dazzling smile; Maria was always so full of happiness. She saw the bright side of life. Maybe it was because she was so used to looking for that good part throughout her childhood that was so hard to find back then, or maybe it was her way of trying to overcome that sorrow filled past. Whatever it was, it was something that people needed. Her vibrant nature helped people find happiness that they felt they had lost or forgotten. She made sure that her friends were always happy. If dejection hit them, she was there with her bubbliness to get rid of it. People like Maria were greatly needed in times like these.
The last of the trio was Siena Vertenella. Siena was short, only 5-foot-4, blond, blue-eyed, and indescribably beautiful. Her golden blond locks were straight and layered and went down to her shoulder blades. Her bangs framed her face beautifully. Her skin was milky smooth and her facial features were perfect. Her eyes shone bright; they were a beautiful aquamarine color, but they had specks of other blues hidden in there. No one could ever think of a word to describe Siena’s beauty, so they simply said ‘angelic.’ Her rare smile could cause anybody to smile back; her soft, quiet voice was so like her shy nature. She hid behind her two friends making her go unnoticed by most; however, there were a few who noticed her, and when you noticed her, you saw everything about her. You fell in love with her before even speaking to her. There was something entrancing about Siena’s gentleness and beauty. Even though she was quiet, she had an enchanted air about her, though very few felt it; but if they did, they were lost in her. Unnoticed by Siena, there was someone she held spellbound, someone she wouldn’t have thought of, and someone who didn’t show he was captured by her spell.
Together, the three girls created one complete person. One clever, strong, energetic, caring, sweet, beautiful person; if one was missing, they weren’t whole. Together, these three girls led their lives, knowing that they would never be alone.
Down at the other end of the train sat four boys. They were four best friends; so close they were that if you didn’t already know otherwise, you would think they were brothers. In a sense, they were; there was a bond between them that held them together throughout everything: the good, the bad, and the in between.
James Potter was the first to be noticed. His height reached 6-foot-2, his body was well toned, and his looks were noticeably close perfect. He had soft hazel eyes that always sparkled with mischief, hidden behind round glasses, and a mischievous smile always playing on his lips. But probably his most distinguished feature was his messy, jet-black hair that never seemed to lie flat and always flew around everywhere. Of course he had girls all around him, hoping for a chance, but James had eyes for only one. Though, this didn’t stop James from being with girls, occasionally long term relationships, though they couldn’t last because of her. What got James noticed wasn’t only his good looks, though they were a major factor. No, what got James noticed was his personality; the way James was always so loud and confident. It was the way that James managed to keep the population of Hogwarts happy, with the help of his friends, with their silly antics and amusing pranks, though they did at times go too far. James’s confidence was bordering on arrogance, but it had hit its high point a couple of years ago and was slowly residing. James wasn’t what you could call completely mature, though more so than before, but maybe it was his fun childishness that made him such a good person to be around. Of course, there were only three people who could handle his childishness at all times without getting fed up.
One of those three was Sirius Black, James’s obvious best friend. Where there was James, there was Sirius and where there was Sirius there was James. Sirius was the same height as James and had the same color hair, but Sirius’s hair fell neat and elegantly into his deep grey eyes. Girls waited around him just to see him flip the hair out of his eyes with an elegant flick of his head. Sirius had achieved a casual elegance that no one else could hope to match. Everything about him seemed to be perfect. Sirius was often times close to recklessness which is where his friends stepped in. He had devilishly handsome looks to rival James’s and maybe even more girls falling at his feet. Almost every girl in their year, the year above, the year below, and a few from other years, had had their chance with Sirius Black. It was every girl’s dream to be with the heartthrob and Heartbreaker of Hogwarts, which seemed to make no sense. Some girls, very few, found the whole thing rather odd; whose dream would it be to be with the guy who has a record number of broken hearts on his conscience? Maybe it was because they all hoped to be the one to break his streak, to be the one to tame him. Or maybe it was the secretiveness of Sirius. No one really knew what kind of girl Sirius was looking for, and maybe they hoped that they were that girl. What they didn’t know was that that girl was already there, already decided. She was hiding in the shadows, and Sirius was secretly watching her, learning everything about her, hoping to find a way to get her. No one saw this; not even his friends, and especially not her.
Not even the caring, sweet, and sensitive Remus Lupin saw it. He was only an inch shorter than James and Sirius reaching 6-foot-1. He had sandy brown-blond hair and blue eyes as blue as the clear, bright day sky. His looks were up to par with those of his afore mentioned friends. Many girls noticed Remus as well, but the reason they didn’t chase him was his unwillingness to date. Nobody but his friends knew why, and they weren’t about to tell. Remus’s intelligence was great. He was rarely seen without a book, and it was obvious that he was the brains of the group’s operation. But, the thing that made Remus stand out was his character. Unlike his two friends, Remus showed both sides to the general public instead of reserving one for his friends. At times, he was sweet and kind, the level-headed one of the group. At other times, he was noisy and mischievous like the others. Most usually saw the level-headedness first, and therefore were surprised to encounter the high spirited side of him. That was probably what made Remus, Remus.
Rounding off the group was the shortest of the lot: Peter Pettigrew. He stood at 5-foot-8 with small watery eyes. He was rather plump and didn’t have the looks or the brains to match that of his friends, but his personality wasn’t so much below theirs. Though more quiet and reserved, Peter had his moments; he had his ideas, and there were a fair amount of things that wouldn’t have gone through without him. He was sneaky like a rat, though only his friends saw the connection of that. True, it wasn’t consistent; Peter was clumsy and often gave them away, but nonetheless sneaky. Though he didn’t have the intelligence to match his friends’, Peter tried hard, and with their help, did well in school. Despite his few strengths, Peter looked to James, Sirius, and Remus for guidance. He followed them and was rarely seen without them. Throughout the years, he had found little of his independence, but the lack in confidence made it still short lived.
Together, the Marauders were looked up to in school, though maybe not for their goodness, hopefully, the few good qualities of theirs shown on the outside were also taken in by the other students. Though the Marauders ruled the school and did come off as cocky at times, they were loyal to each other and had strength, bravery, intelligence, and, most importantly, each other.
Well, what’d you think. Did the intro bore you so much you won’t come back for the rest???
I hope not because the rest is more exciting. Give me lots of feedback and you can see for yourself.
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