So here's the feedback thread! You guys know how much I love to read what you think. So let me know what you honestly think I love opinions!

-Stef

Hi fany_monkey,
Your fic is really good, a great introduction. I like the diary format and I can't wait to see what Lily and Gwen get up to.

From kmozel

yes second to reply!
wow i haven't been on here in yonks but anyway not the point.
i love the idea
hahaha its payback muffin, cookie guy and dark/mysterious!!!!
yes so again i love the idea, i'm intrigued as to how this story will turn out...i hope it ends badly for James and Sirius though. humiliation is chugging their way like a choo choo train

Hi Stef!

Wow! This looks really really good! I can't wait to learn what these girls are planning! I love the whole concept! (And yes, Mr. Darcy is dreamy... Even though I only have the mental image of him from the movie!)

The idea of James hurting Gwen and Sirius (Aw!) hurting Lily is very interesting, but I particularly loved how you introduced Severus in the concept. Him being behind the whole plan was a really nice touch!

Have to tell you, I just subscribed to it!

(Did I mention how much I like your fics? )

The whole princess and prince concept was nice and the change in the writing was very different! I really liked it all!

Don't let this idea escape from you! I want to know more!

Great job so far!

Thanks a bunch!

STEFFYKINS

I read it =]

And I love it.

Haha there's so many different things that could happen now, i reeeally can't wait to see what their plan is now =P I hope they teach silly toxic boys a lesson

*faints at thought of Mr. Darcey* haha, It seems really funny to be honest, I can't wait for them to shatter their hearts, but I also don't want to believe that Sirius and James would have hurt them It's mean... *faitns* gahhh I love Sirius lol

Kellyy
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Um, WOW, Stef! That's some of a brilliant idea you've gotten! I love it already and can't wait to see this plan being brought to life. It's so interesting and different from other things! And really, when you get ideas, you have to write them down ! Though I'm afraid I can see this plan backfiring...?
Like Kaitlyn I like how you brought Severus into this by him being the brain behind it. And Gwen's comment about him pulling off the mysterious dark look was so great. I was laughing there (to be honest she made it sound rather sexy haha) I'm possibly going crazy.
Also I need to say I loved the tale of princes and princesses! It was so great and fun! It really made this whole thing sound so fun! I loved the humour you put into it. Gwen is great!
This truly is girl-power and I must say that I love it! We don't see enough of that around Keep this really great idea going, you've got me stuck. I'm waiting for more!

*chants* STEF STEF STEF!!! *chants*
Oh yeah. I think I found a new love and it's this story. I absolutely adore the plot and I think I might steal it for my real life. Hahaha... just kidding. But how amazing would it be to give guys a taste of their own medicine? Who knew the taste of revenge could be so sweet? It's so original, and it deserves to be done. Who else other than Lily and Gwen could pull off hurting James and Sirius. But I bet you anythig they're going to end up falling in love with them as they want to make them fall in love. If that makes sense. But somehow it will all be futile as the whole plan is found out and not only that, everyone is left hurt and to wither in their pain. Ooh... I like that. Don't steal my words! It's officiall a J~O (Jessica ~ Original) Oh yeahh...
Love it. Post soon.

Steffers darling this is simply a marvelous idea. A journal type story about girl power...I like how its different from everything else, not all romance-y. Yes guys like Mr. Darcy only exist in books, and speaking of which I have to read that book. *cringes* Don't kill me! Anyway, great idea and I promise to keep reading! I heart it. And uh...well you know me "like a drunk knows beer" apparently so you know that I adore everything you write even if I don't express it properly. Eek. Go Lily, Gwen and contacts!! Yes, I said contacts. Speaking of that too, the whole thinking of them as new people happened to me too when I got my contacts. So I rambled for this entire feedback but hopefully you'll be laughing at my silliness. Hearts and cookies for excellent work!

--x Lauren

Who said they loved the fic? I did! I did!

Woa Stef! This is awesome! Those girls are mean! They're simply great! They know their stuff and they'll give those brats just what they deserve! I loved it!

You know what? You're great at making mental images on my head... I couldn't get off my mind the thought of James crashing into the hoop, and Sirius scratching himself with his broom in mid air! That was hilarious! Definitely my favorite part! Hahaha!

I'll support Vicki's girl power code name! It's not about being a feminist, it's about giving someone what they deserve! Oh sweet vengeance! Those girls are going to have fun! And I'll stick to it whole and laugh with them!

Way to go girl! You rock!

Keep writing!

so i started reading you fic last night, i was gonna leave feedback, but didnt cos i wanted to see it you would keep posting. turns out you are:)
its a great idea, i love it already.
cant wait to read the next chapter..
oh and the writing in italic .. any chance you can make it not bold? cause its harder the read since its so small ...
anyways.
good luck!!!

elizabethNeita<3

Hey Stef

I have got to say this: I always knew that girls can be crueler than us guys

This is a very different story, I like it. So Lily and Gwen are like the female pranksters just a tad more evil.

Poor manhood I almost felt their pain and I was laughing so hard my stomach was sore.

Great start

DW

Haha! That was... great simply. I didn't know the girls could come up with such great ideas! But how dumb is Lily exactly to put her hand out when the door is closed? She's supposed to be smart. haha, but fun all the same.
Basically you can go back and read what Kaitlyn wrote; your brother is wrong. I'd say, you're not a feminist. I think this story represents a lot of girls. Girls who have been pushed around and not stood up to themselves! And then Lily and Gwen does, it's great and something a lot of girls should do!
Also I like how they have different ways of telling about this. Gwen tends to make her look better (for fun of course), while Lily is more to the facts. But when they start bickering it's fun!
Haha, I like how Gwen always manages to insult Severus. You'd have thought that the girls at this time had had this discussion enough times, but I guess not. That's the way it is with things we have different views of I guess.
One small things that bothered me though was that you changed between a lot of writing styles. Two (one for each) would be better and not as confusing.
Keep up the good work, you've gotten me stuck! And when I'm stuck I'm not going anywhere haha. Post soon!

Wow I didn't expect the feedback to be so amazing but you guys never stop amazing me!

kmozel: I'm so glad you enjoyed the silly introduction the girls made up. To be honest I thought the introduction was going to be shorter but my fingers have a mind of their own! Thanks for reading

Me_Hermy:1 of the Same: your becoming the metaphor queen Teddy! Hahaha well you must add so many other's to that list of three you've written out right there. Krissy said she had a hard time telling which girl was more like me! The choo choo train remark is so going in I hope you don't mind! Thanks for reading Teddy!

Pawprint: Anita you really boost my ego so much! Your feedback always makes my head grow like two sizes! So first off thanks so much for your help with the first chapter! Seriously I hadn't seen those mistakes! But then again I never see any of them because I post in a hurry and I don't have a spell check on this computer so I seem to over look a lot of things. Secondly remember Sirius is mine oh and I figured it'd be a good touch to add Snape since Lily was so fond of him. He'll have something bigger coming up soon. Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed!

PottyHead: *throws water on face* don't faint Kelly! *shows picture of Mr. Darcy and Sirius* hahaha they are dreamy! Oh gosh your "silly toxic boys" remark was great! Had me snorting. Oh come on Kelly you know that no matter how gorgous guys are they have a bad side to them! So yes Sirius and James messed up big time Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed!

happy-potter: hahaha it was supposed to sound sexy deary! I figure Snape has some sort of appeal to him. Might as well make him sound sexy. Oh gosh you also made my head go poof big! I'm glad you enjoyed this different concept. When I thought of it I knew it would be different but I didn't know if it would be a bad different or a good different! Thanks for reading and I'll keep the girl power going

JSB 073: *chants* Jessica Jessica hahaha well I guess it was boost Stef's ego day huh? I'm soo glad you enjoyed and if you plan on doing that in real life let me know and I'll help you plot See you just pointed out the reason I even thought of this fic. I've always wanted to make certain guys feel what they make girls feel. I mean not all guys are bad but the one's I've met sure are and a little revenge would be nice . I'm not telling you my plot but don't worry you're not completely right about this one! Thanks for reading!

Ginny.Weasley: LAUREN! I sent you that book so you'd read it! It's so amazing and Mr. Darcy is completely dreamy! Read it! hahaha don't quote my silly phrases deary makes me sound drunk! Ohhh and I know that you love your contacts! Actually it happened to me in reverse. When I got glasses people didn't recognize me. Funny how that works right? Well I'm glad you enjoyed and yes your feedback had me laughing. Thanks for reading!

Pawprint: Enserio estas haciendo que me cresca la cabezota! Well I thought the descriptions were lacking but I'm glad to see they weren't for you. I was actually laughing quite a bit with this chapter because I used a personal experience for this prank . Like I told Vicki I'm going to try to keep it mostly girl power! Woot go girls! hahaha thanks for reading!

lizzie.xx: Of course I'm going to keep posting! I like this concept and I'm SO sorry about the font mix up! Its harder to make a difference between the two fonts here on VTM. I'm still working that out but thanks for reading anyway even if you did feel like scratching your eyes out!

dewet_pdw88: Wow Dewet you braved a girl power fic! I'm impressed! What's even more surprising is that you liked it! So yes girls can be very evil but only when provoked. To be honest I've pulled this prank before. The itching powder one . These guys had it coming just like the guys I pulled the prank on. I'm sorry about your stomach but I hear laughing is a great work out. Thanks for reading Dewet only male so far!

happy-potter: First off let me say sorry again for the font! I tried to use only two fonts but I'm still a newbie with the fonts here on VTM so I'm working it out! I think I fixed it up a wee bit. I'll get it right next chapter! Oh so Lily stuck her hand in because if not she'd have been stuck in the locker. But I think sticking a foot in might have been smarter! Never the less amusing! Oh and this prank is just the beginning! Honestly I think a lot of girls have felt what these two characters feel. I know I have which is why I've chosen to write it. I figure it'll give hope to someone who is being pushed around by a guy. I do believe what I wrote, no guy is worth it. So I'm glad you enjoyed and yeah the prank is funny (its even funnier live ) Thanks for reading!

I'm working on the next chapter I might have it up by tonight again! Thanks for your help everyone!

-Stef

I have to say this is the funniest fic I've ever read. I found it weird but brilliant that Sirius hurt Lily and that James hurt Gwen (the guys messed up bad). And how Lily told the story with princesses and princes, while Gwen told it her ego way if you know what I mean. I just want to know how you come up with such great ideas, I mean the itchy thing was hilarious (I like the girls' evilness) . Anyway your an awesome writer keep up the good work

**still laughing**

Hhahahahaha. Oh my goodness.
Must be the best thing I've heard all day. I was laughing aloud and it might be because it was hilariously funny or I'm been hyper today. I think it's the first one.
Just imagining that... wow. Football players wear cups, so that's what I was thinking of the whole time, putting it in some guys cup so they couldn't actually get to their 'little soldier' as I loved what you called it. I would've been laughing so hilariously, so outrageously. That made my day.
I've actually wanted to pull off a John Tucker, which is kind of what they're doing. Watch the movie John Tucker Must Die? If you do, you'll understand.
Loved it. Post soon!

Back again! very quickly before I leave.

Ginnyfan101: Well I'm glad you found it so funny because I did too but then again its not too hard to make me laugh. So I know people found it curious that it was James who hurt Gwen and Sirius who hurt Lily. I was thinking about that and well to be honest if a guy made my life a living hell for years I don't think I'd be able to go near him without wanting to attack so it made more sense for them to trade! Oh and the itching powder prank is a classic with me I pulled that one thats why I wrote it. Thanks for reading!

JSB 073: Jessica I think you're a mind reader because itching powder on the cup is what I did to the football players thats where the idea comes from! It was so classic! But I'm surprised you knew! I'll put that movie on my too watch list and I'm glad you found the "little soldiers" so amusing Thanks for reading!

Ok so new chapter and sorry to say that I didnt get a chance to re read it so its probably full or errors! If you guys find some tell me so I can correct them thanks a bunch! You all rock!

-Stef

Ooh. First encounters after a makeover. I just wish they didn't have to have a makeover, just a define beauty type of thing. But it proves how shallow guys are. They are really a dissappointment to the human race.
And I'm itching.. ahhaha. tempted... to know the knewest prank.
I've decided that I am going to eventually do this. I'm somehow going to do this to all the idiots, okay maybe one at the least, and just tear him apart. I have the perfect guy in mind. Of course, I'll have to think of better and really realistic things to do. But dude, I'm getting excited!!
Love it. Post soon!

P.S. I'm happy you're posting uber fast.

I loved it! Truly I did! That was awesome! I have no idea why you say you lost your edge there! Seriously! It was hilarious!

I always pictured Lily as a cute girl, but after this chapter, it's funny how you made her go from dork to Malibu Barbie! I wish we had that kind of magic!

The hairdressers were simply great! I have to agree (mine's name is Randall, and he's great! I actually have to go see him soon, my mane is out of control!), gay guys make the best hairdressers ever!

I really liked how you made Lily and Gwen so beautiful that the dumb Marauders didn't even notice, and now James has the hots for Lily... I wish Sirius could have got a glimpse of the girls too! He'll go crazy as soon as he sees them!

Y a alguien le creció la cabeza en la historia! Y no fue a ti! That was so funny! Poor Remus! And James laughing before mending him! Typical guy! Yay for girl power!

Oh, and Severus again! I love those tiny bits! Your pranks are great! I can't wait for the new prank, I bet you have something great in store for us!

I really liked this chapter! It was really good! You're awesome Stef! (But I really hope we get more Sirius in the next installment! Hahaha!) Great job! I loved it!

Haha I love you Stef!

This fic is utter greatness. Total girl power =]

Just what I need right now as all men seem to suck =]=]]

I love love love loooove the hairdresser bit =] I thought that was so amazing haha. I really wish someone could make me hot just like that *clicks fingers*

And I'm either blind, or really really stupid, but where was the CIWWAF lyric in it? : I can no find it

Loves it Steffys, post soon!!!

Kelly
x

What are you talking about Stef? I think this was cute, great and fun as always! haha. Though I think it was a bit over the edge that Remus didn't recognise them. You'd have thought so as he's a prefect and supposed to be a friend of Lily's... Hmm.
Anyways... I looove gays sorry, but they're just so great. Sometimes I'm sure my best boy friend is gay, but hey, he's only 17 there's time yet haha. It'd be great. okay sorry off topic! I loved the makeover!
And the little meeting with Snape. HA! Had to get that out. James is creative I must say, I laughed at the butt-part haha. You're really creative and I'm looking forward to your next update! Which I hope is soon haha really, really good.

Man you keep getting funnier and funnier every time. I loved the makeover part with the gay guys. You know I never pictured Lily ugly and with a unibrow, but man you made her ugly good thing the makeover worked You know at the encounter I think Remus should at least said "Do I know you?"since they were both prefects, but is still great. Hey I have a question for you. Who do you identify yourself with (Lily or Gwen)??


Awesome fic keep writing

Back again:

JSB 073: So I agree with you Jess but the thing is I wrote about the make over to prove a point about guys being so shallow that all they think about is what a girl looks like. Oh and I loved your expression so I borrowed it! Oh snap I don't think I gave you credit! I will next chapter I promise! Oh and hey the itching powder thing is a realistic thing since I've done it! Poor guy won't know what hit him! So thanks for reading deary and if you need help with your plan let me know.

Pawprint: Malibu barbie hahaha nice one. Yeah my hairdressers are so amazingly funny and its true gay guys make amazing friends! Or at least my gay friends have been great! I have a plan for when Sirius first sees Gwen. It'll be funny trust me. Si le crecio la cabeza... lo bueno es que fue la grande hahaha Oh gosh I did not just say that! So thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked! I'll add more Sirius next chapter!

PottyHead: Kelly you're already hot you don't need to click your fingers and yes guys do suck! So yeah you found the lyric in there So ummm yeah Girl Power all the way thanks for reading and posting deary!

happy-potter: So Vicki if I made Lupin a good guy then it'd completely go agaisnt this whole fic! Well no see I plan on making him and Lily friendish but never amazing friends the marauders represent EGO here which means ALL OF THEM are egocentric . Oh yeah gay guys tend to be so cute. It annoys me at times but they are awesome! So yeah I like creative spells and I'm glad you enjoy them! Thanks for reading dear!

Ginnyfan101: Haha I don't think Lily is ugly but it went with my plot line so unibrow it was! I just remembered this soap opera from here about this ugly girl that got this hot guy so I pictured her and took it down a bit. Oh no no Remus is far to egocentric and polite to ask that. As for your question... just the other day my friend was telling me that as she was reading this she kept trying to see which one was me. She figured they both were. I think that Gwen is the part of me that only comes out when I'm angry or feeling very feisty. Gwen is a character baised on how I react around egocentric guys. Lily is more like how I normally am. I'm more of a thinker so I think I identify with both of them depending on my mood Good question dear! Thanks for reading!

New chapter is up! Hope you enjoyed!

You've done it again Steffy darling, you're amazing and I bow down to you hahaha ok enough feeding your ego lol But seriously it was great, I'm loving the friends referances to their "little soldiers" A red thong? seriously...you warned me and I still almost died laughing...and here me thinking you're a sweet, innocent, little mormon girl...ok not true i corrupted you ages ago but still lol. Very amazing stef...and props to you for taking it out on them here and not in real life like i have a tendancy of doing

And hey, no lying to your readers...Gwen displays stefs more violent evil tendancies while Lily represents her consious coming out to be a pain in the butt lol

"Oh and I loved your expression so I borrowed it!" -- What expression? The dissapointment to the human race? I just wanted to know.

And loved your chapter. Completely genius! Dressing the guys, but at least they're not stupid enough to know it's not the real girls.. they sound disgustinly horrible by the way. And I love the humiliation. Putting those clothes on and eight inch heels? I don't even think that's realistic! But all's good if these pranks and revenge are so sweet. Laughing my butt off right now.

AND I have news for you! Okay, so you know how people curse a lot when they're mad or whatever, and well, to put it lightly I'm not exactly normal... NO not that way. I just have a weird mind as in insulting people by calling them "idiotic baboons" and being completely and utterly serious it's hilarious. So I just wanted to say that for some off reason...

Love it! Post soon.

~Jessica

Hahaha! You were right Stef! Definitely more Sirius in this one! Hahaha!

What a great prank! I just wish we could use magic in some like-scenarios... Ah! Life would be so much funnier! You've got some great imagination!

The girls are simply great! I can imagine the humiliation poor Sirius and James suffered! But they deserved it sooo much! Hahaha!

You're great at painting pictures in my mind... Sirius's bum in a thong... Hahaha!!!

Those guys will have a hard time figuring out who got them... They'll probably be on the lookout, but the girls will outwit them for sure! Nice one!

Y la cabezota... Hahaha! Tienes razón! It would have been a nasty picture! Hahaha!

Oh Stef, you've got it going great in this fic! I love it!

That was.... creating some images in my mind tobe honest. Sirius... James... really, who could choose? Anyway...
Fun as always. Sirius and James was quite stupid to just go with the girls in the begninng. I guess they're kind of naive... But that they know about what some girls are allergic to just shows that they are quite attentive when wanted. Funny. I don't feel sorry for them.
And as a respond to your respond... Yes, it would actually be a bit against the whole thing if Remus was nice and all. Maybe it is a bit feministic fic I love it though!
On a sidenote: HA! I love how Gwen always manage to give Snape some bad adjectives! Haha!
As usual, great! can't wait for more!

And I'm here yet again!

Weasly_Girly_83: Aww Krissy you can't go around revealing my secrets . Well you are the first person to mention my Friend's refferences! You can tell I grew up with that show huh? I am a good mormon girl... and yet I've been annoyed by boys for far too long and getting even even if it is just in a story! Well *whispers* I do take it out on them in real life just not as often as I should. Thanks for reading deary! This feels like old times when you and I met *tear*

JSB 073: the expression I borrowed was "I'm itching to know..." I thought it was funny . Thats the wonders of magic! They could turn their clothes instead of having to do it the old fashion way and hey I've seen 8 inch heels! No joke I was like how do you walk?! Nice to see a girl who doesn't swear when mad! My ex boyfriend used to mock my insults because I once called him a doody head or doody brain. I dunno whatever comes to mind but you aren't alone on that! I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading!

Pawprint: Anita cochinota! Picturing Sirius in a thong! tsk tsk! Well believe it or not the guys are clever and yet they are very thick! They don't realize who's behind the pranks as shown in this new chapter! *shakes head* {I'm sure people will think I'm exaggerating when I say I know A LOT of guys who are that dim! Oh and no more talk of cabezotas you'll make me blush! Well I'm glad you enjoyed my non sense! Thanks for reading!

happy-potter: Well Vicki I'm going to tell you what a friend once told me. He said that the word femenist is a person who was equality between both genders. I don't honestly believe I'm a femenist, its more like I'm a tad bitter and chosing to show it through this story . So back to your review. Of course James and Sirius would walk out of their room for girls! I asked at least 4 male friends what they'd do and they all replied the same. Girls and food are a priority to them! Oh and Gwen HATES Snape I dunno she's crazy like that. Thanks for reading dear!

So new chapter is up I'd love to know what you think!

-Stef

Well well well... a filler, but it was entertaining while it was. Potter.... Potter... Potter. He's a shame, ain't he? Bothering Lily like that and her whole rant, very funny. And Gwen's going to have a magazine? Should be quite interesting to see what it turns to be.
Love it. Post soon.

Stef darling!
1. don't talk about old times you're gonna get me all worked up lol
2. that was amazing, even when you're sick your writing is better than mine...are you a god or something? ok so I still dying thinking about Sirius being to busy staring at her that he didnt notice the wall and is now uncounsious in the hospital wing that was classic darling. But I think they need to reword that...hell hath no fury like a STEF scorned...Or a Kristina...it's the beauty of being a LIVE 666 dear, we're far more creative than normal girls Sirius is right about that...he just didn't realize he was dealing with 2 of your personalities (i'm waiting for #3 to show up via lily ) All in all great writing stef, keep it up

It wasn't dull! At all!

I liked the whole setting, and honestly... Thinking about Gwen and Lily as reporters is quite funny! I can't wait to learn which articles they might come up with! Those girls are great together!

I'll never stop thinking about Sirius's bum... Aw! And having Gary Oldman in the picture doesn't help either! But the thong thing from last chapter isn't something I like to include in it!

I loved the Sirius-running-into-a-wall bit and the James-running-into-Lily bit too! But my favorite part from this chapter was the Remus-is-gay thing! "He fits with the salon guys!" Hahaha! It's interesting... A friend of mine who is gay just told me last week that if I wanted to date someone pretty and smart, I should date a girl! Anyway... Poor Remus! He can't have a brain or else he'll be labeled! And Sirius and James are sooo thick! Hilarious!

The all-time favorite: germs from someone I dislike: boil it! Hahaha!

Loved it! Can't wait for more! Thanks for a very interesting chapter!

O my captain edward john smith! That was so hillarious! Alright so i would make this one of my long entertaining reviews but i've had such a hectic day (i'll tell you about it later ugh). So i've been like running all over and now my brother is driving me nuts and whinning about helping saying i haven't done anything even though i've been doing chores and cooking all morning. Anyway i need to go kick his butt so unfortunately i have to make this quick. so i really really liked it hahaha he walked into a wall... i've done that before! But i can't wait for more it's so good and next time i'll leave a fun review!
~Erin

WOW!!! SUPER HILARIOUS!!! I love Lily's plan she is truly the master prankster. I'll just tell what I loved: Sirius' red thong, James' high heels, the compromising position of James and Sirius, the comments the students made, the sexy shirts of James and Sirius, the tore skirt, tripping on the high heels, Sirius showing his butt, James and Sirius' entwined hands *catching breath* man that was a mouth-full, this is really the funniest thing I have ever read!!! Ok so moving on,I think Gwen is doing a great job in catching Sirius' attention I mean with only one smile she got Sirius to walk straight into a wall .And James is starting to bother Lily, question: Did Lily really felt James' "little soldier"? I'm just curious. Finally that brings me to magazine that Lily and Gwen are going to make, this is going to be interesting. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! *cough* Sorry got a little carried away. I'M LIKE A ROLLER COASTER!!
Post soon

JSB 073: Yes it was a filler. I don't think I've ever used one of those before I promise never to do it again! So yeah Potty head will never learn and the magazine has a purpose.. it will be reveled in due time! Thanks for reading!

Weasly_Girly_83: aww come on Krissy! Talking about old times rocks my socks right off! But also makes me miss my good friend Jay! And hey don't feed the ego more than necessary! Wow I was sick hahahaha. So I know of someone who's been busy staring at someone that they run into a wall I just won't say who . Oh yeah we sure are creative and yet... no wait if that jerk... (the hole one) was anywhere near me he'd so pay! So thanks for reading dear! I'll be glad to inform you later that there's a new chapter

Pawprint: They are taking a leaf out of your book dear . Hey hey we had agreed that Sirius was mine so stop thinking about his bum! You can have Jaime Camil and I'll have William Levy deal? Hahaha I know I'm being harsh on poor Remus but these girls are mean! Oh and don't mock my line thats what I say to anyone that suggest I use a public bathroom I say no because then I'd have to go home and boil my bum . You really are an ego booster did you know that? Thanks so much for reading! Hope your exam went well!

bounce.like.a.tigger: I forgive your small review only because I know that you'll leave longer reviews later on . So I'm glad you liked it dear blondie. I knew you would! Thanks for reading!

Ginnyfan101: whoa girl breathe! I'm so thrilled that you liked it but you need to breathe . So I wanted to work more on painting vivid visuals but I reckon that if I got you to get so worked up I'm not doing such a bad job aye? Oh the whole smile thing just reminded me of that one movie about the geishas(sp?) where the girl could make a guy run into something with a look. That is how powerful us girls are... we have the whole female power! yay! Oh yeah Lily felt the soldier! Yes the magazine will be a big part of their plan! *gets on rollarcoster* yay! Thanks for reading! Really great reviews from you!

So new chapter up!! yay!

-Stef

Hi.
First of all: You are funny, I really must say! You make me laugh so my eyes are running (literally).
At first, I was annoyed by your layout, but I can see the advantages of it.
I think your idea for this fan-fic is quite something, it is original and great. I especially like that Gwen starts a magazine at Hogwarts and dressing James and Sirius up. That was so funny. I also like that you explain why it is in the sixth year that James starts to fancy Lily. The makeover was quite something.
Summing up: great story, keep it coming

Absolutely adored the article. Hilariousness. I'm surprised Lily didn't kill them while they answered. I would've been close. It's amazing how much scum one school can hold.
Stupid Snape. Loser person Good gosh. He's such a stalker, figuring out the code and thinking Lily liked James... it's a possibility not admiting it to herself.
Gwen with a date with Lupin? INteresting... Sirius's getting jealous.
Love it. Post soon.

Hey darling! guess whos back! (I know shocker to feedbacks in one day I'm on a roll hehe)
so anyways great chapter as usual. I'm loving how Snape only copied the exact parts that make it seem like they're in love with James and Sirius, and I have a strong feeling that you put those parts together like that to prove that they ARE falling for them they just don't know it yet. My logic on that being theres really know point in putting that in there otherwise, we all know that after what happens down by the lake Lily hates Snape so that scene isn't nescessary unless you're trying to tell us something...so either the girls are falling for them or Snape's gonna rat them out...but since you don't like Snape I'm going with choice a. (watch you go with choice b just to say that I was wrong haha) mmm so yea, thats my prediction...love ya darling! later

oh in reference to your reply...which hole one? the one we made up the code for or the missionary one or the scary one who was perving on me? there are too many of them...

Hi all

Lulu-lolo: So I'm glad I made you laugh I love making people laugh. It's why I've never been able to properally write something too serious. I just enjoy making people laugh. So just clearing something up, this story starts in their 5th year . Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

JSB 073: aaa believe it or not those are direct quotes from some guys I know. I did want to murder them but I restrained myself seeing as I was the one who asked right. But yes some males are pigs and should get slapped. So Lily has no feelings for James. She really does loath him I love it though because it seems like something out of one of my favorite books... Pride and Prejudice. Lupin and Gwen is going to turn into something quite amusing to be honest . Thanks for reading

Weasly_Girly_83: well you're spoiling me and now I'm going to expect feedback often . Ohhhh so you're being clever so that I can say your right? Well there is a point to why he copied that but its not what you're thinking. Let me state that neither Lily nor Gwen have any feelings for the guys. The really are just trying to destroy them. Just wait a bit. Oh the jerk I was reffereing to was the one who hurt me the major one. Anyway thanks for your feedback!

So now I'm sad... I hope that the reason there weren't that many replies is because of finals! If so good luck with finals but don't forget about me

-Stef

Gwen and Remus had a sweet little date. It's getting somewhere between them, huh?
But Sirius and his death glares and his stares that see right through you aren't the best. He's jealous... Ooh... *the way the Malfoy does it in the third movie)
But Lily and James however. He's such a pig. If any guy ever grabs for my butt.. dear gosh. They won't know what hit them.
Gwen was nice with her comments on Lily's butt, eh?
Love it. Post soon.

Another good chapter. What a sweet date that was, Lupin is always the nice guy, huh ?. And what was that thing with Sirius? Was he jealous, made me wonder...
But oh my gosh was Potter just awful there. Grabbing her butt! Uhh.. I get the creeps if a guy I don't like starts touching my back! Ew.
I never actually thought of Lily's butt as big... New perspective.. There is this girl in my class with the most enormous butt, now you've created a horrible picture of Lily in my mind.. I'll erase it in a minut

Great chapter, keep it coming, please post soon

If Guitar Hero says you rock, you've played it too much. Okay, I'm just irratated because I suck so much at it that there's no word for it. Oh well, what an interesting chapter! Sirius sooo likes Gwen. And well, it's no secret that James likes Lily, but how rude to grab her butt! And Gwen is fun; is huge. Ha! You in fact made me laugh several times in here. You must be impressed by Lily's skills in different languages, I can now say 'leave me alone' in five languages. Ha! I'm good!
Oh well, a good chapter, Stef! keep it going!

Ok Stef even though I really shouldn't leave this because I'm spoiling you and you're going to get addicted to my lovely feedback you just left to force me to so I'm afraid that I must. Loved the chapter. The date with Remus was very cute and I loved how completely honest he was about the way guys act...where can we find one of those? It'd be great we could get him to decode everything that the untouchables and Jesse and AJ and Andy and Matt if he ever signs on again say hehe. *goes out to buy a guy decoder* hahaha Ok sorry getting off topic here...(don't I always ) But anyways what was up with Sirius? I mean I get that he's into her and all that but why did he get mad at her? And was Peter really hurt? I'm thinking no because of the look that Sirius gave but I'm probably overthinking like always...*shrugs* anyways once again great chapter. Loved it!
~Kristina
p.s. James has good taste in books even if he is a pig

Hey girl, THE ROLLER COASTER IS BACK!!! Sorry I haven't left you feedback in like forever. So lets start feedbacking . So, Gwen had a date (rather say a sweet date) with Lupin and Sirius is REALLY jealous. Gwen is diabolical you know and I love it. I can see her plan boiling up and I think it's going to be a good one. As for Lily and James, that was a little pervy you know, but if he really tripped he had to grab something, right? Just like Gwen said maybe her butt got in the way . OK this butt grabbing thing is bringing back memories to me. Like when my friend pushed me and I accidentally grabbed the butt of the cutest boy in my class, but it's OK I wasn't even embarrassed Your doing a great job, post soon.

Oh and by the way you really impressed with the 'leave me alone' thing in 5 languages.Really awesome, GREAT JOB.

Back yet again

JSB 073: I don't think I meant to make Sirius seem jealous I was going more for annoyed! He's used to getting what he wants and now he sees his friend getting what he wants and that annoys him not only because he isn't getting the girl but because he doesn't want to be a bad friend... its complicated but that is kind of what my male to english dictionary explained! Oh yeah and the butt grabbing... it was an "accident" never the less I'd have kicked him where the sun doesn't shine. Thanks for reading dear!

Lulu-lolo: Hahaha Lily has some junk in the trunk! I mean hey why not? Remus is a nice guy and seems nice to Gwen because she's so intent on hating the other two . Well I'm very glad you liked it and yeah I know what you mean about the back touching. Heck I'm so uber ticklish that I don't let anyone touch me . Its pretty sad because my friends are huggish. Thanks for reading!

happy-potter: Aww Vicki I play in easy mode which is why it says I rock! I tried in medium mode and I wasn't so bad but still I sucked and then hard... well it was terrible! 5 languages?! Wow... well I know how to say it in 3 english, spanish and now french! I had to google the german bit! Hahaha I want to speak German! I'm like obsesed with it I think! Hahaha German accents are way sexy! Ok I'll stop! Thanks for reaidng!

Weasly_Girly_83: Completely honest guys... do they even exist?! Hahaha funny enough my decoder is Jess! I pester him to help me and he does because he wants me to shut up! But he's good at explaining things. Now I can explain why Sirius was mad at her. Because she seemed interested in Remus and not in him! He thinks that he's way hotter than his friend but doesn't want to be thinking that so he gets mad at her because she is the source of his bad thoughts... its complicated . Oh and Sirius made Peter sick thought I'd throw that in there! Ohh yes James has good taste in books! The Marauders are pigs but they are smart pigs! Thanks for reading!

Ginnyfan101: Who would be embarrassed to grab a nice butt? Hahahaha I'm sorry I sound gross but hey guys do it why can't girls right? So yay! The roller coaster is back! I'm glad you're back and don't even worry about not leaving feedback! As long as you came it back its all good! So yes Gwen is evils but I love this character because she is evils! Oh and James really did trip but he probably shouldn't have grabbed her butt anyway. Oh and I had help with the languages... I'm not that smart . Thanks for reading!

So new chapter is up and keep the feedback coming!!!!

-Stef

Wow. I liked it. Especially the part with the dialogue between Gwen and Sirius. Sirius is SOO into Gwen, it is so obvious (well, to me, but maybe that is just me who wants to see it?). Oh, and nice work with the joke, it was nice to think "Hey, I know this one" . I didn't really get the thing about the German language being sexy. I speak it quite fluently, and yes, it is rough, but I don't think it is sexy. English is sexy to me. (By the way, if you ever come in need of translations into German, or Danish, Norwegian or Swedish for that matter, dont hesistate to PM me, I'll be happy to help).
Oh, and you didn't bother me with your comments about blonds. I am a brunette, so I'd like to think that blondes perhaps are a bit dumb, just once in a while. Oh, and the end with the buttcracks . You just cracked me up!

Great chapter Stef, I cannot wait to read the next one, I hope it will be up soon

Hmm... *smiles* Quite an amusing chapter there.
I loved the making of Brenda ticked off. The bet shall go as planned.
And the little scene with Sirius, nice. Exactly as should be against him. It's amazing how self centered and stupid guys can be. What's funny is he tries to sound cool... so not working.
But the new pranks may go well, yes?
<33 Post soon.

hahah wow Stef, that is the, I'm almost positive, the most random, pointless, chapter you have ever written. That being said, I loved it! Ok so my opinion, Sirius should continue dating Brenda for a few weeks because he's trying to prove to everybody that he can be a stand up guy or something. It would make me laugh a lot. I loved the bit about the German guys, although I highly doubt any of your readers save for me, Kelly, Lauren, and Katie will understand our random conversations and know what you were on about there

Post again soon or I will start to bug you almost as much as my beta bugs me

~Kristina

Hehe. I swear even with silly things you make me laugh .Ok let's start, I officially declare that Gwen will win the bet. Because Sirius notice Gwen first and not the blondie. I not gonna say a lot about the conversation of Sirius and Gwen because then you'll get tired of reading my feedback ,but I do wish the german guy was real . It was unexpected for Gwen to cry even if it's anger, that's how mad Sirius makes her. Oooh I love when they start plotting a prank against the Marauders. I smell it's gonna be good, muahahaha *cough* sorry. Moving on, Gwen's joke was so stupid I'm still laughing my guts off Seriously lame but funny hehe. Ok, the last bit of the conversation confused me a little but I still laugh. It sarted that Lily was on crack to that she was obsessed with german buttcracks .
(Ok, I just want you to know that I read what I just wrote and it looks like I was just blabbing, I hope you understand what I'm trying to say ) Anyway, Great job like always.

Wow so I finally caught up on this story. I really have too much reading to do, and I never seem to have enough time.

I love Lily and Gwen and their plans. The thing in the Great Hall was amazing! I laughed so hard I was nearly crying haha. And your references to things like 'little soldier' and happy and the german stuff made me laugh harder because I actually understand what you're talking about.

Sev is a creep. I mean come on, I know we say we're stalkers (jokingly of course) but what he did was really stalker-ish. Who would actually take the time to decode such a thing?

So that's why you wanted the French line! Haha I love how Lily can speak a bunch of different languages. Or maybe she just learned "leave me alone" in case someone ever asked her. Either way, it's just too cool.

This latest chapter was brilliant. The blonde jokes made me cry though. Haha I'm kidding, I get where you're coming from. But you're right! It is girls like Brenda that make me cringe and hate being blonde. Sucks majorly. But anyway, Brenda and Sirius will be over faster than you can say Butterscotch Apple Toffee Pudding Cheesecake.

I love Lupin in this one. You make him the nice guy, and I love him. Poor guy is being played though, that's sad. Ah well, he'll get over it. Great work ma belle, and I'm sorry for not keeping up with it!

--x Lauren

I just found your fic and love it. It's perfect the way Lily and Gwen work together to cause such revenge mwahahahah. I'm looking forward to the Marauders' worst day.

As for the German... I have no idea what your inside joke is, but I will admit that I have a weakness for Germans. Been there a few times and, well, anyway...

Post again soon!

CG

Haha, funny chapter. The hair was especially good. Liked that Black made inquireries about Gwen. I am a shipper

Great chappie, post soon