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happy-potter
Hey all!

Leave feedback here for my one-shot Such Language. I’ll take everything you say, also critic as long it’s fair and there’s hold in it. Be honest, thanks!

- Vicki happy.gif
OHyea
That was very cute, i loved it. I could definitely see James' and Lily's character. You are a talented writer and this was great! Great job! Keep up the awesome work.
emma_weasley
Bahaha! I loved that little fic. It was funny and sweet and well written all at the same time. James was pretty cool in it. happy.gif Him and Lily are quite cute together. And I like the title, too. Its interesting and makes someone want to read the fic. Nice job and keep up the excellent work!
Lulu-lolo
Wow! So cute, you really get your talent used here. I don't speek all languages as well, but German, French, Italian, Spanish, Danish and English were definitely correct. Well, in Italian, when romantic you sometimes add "Amore mio" = my love, but that is all I know.
James is so cool here, and he is so right about Lily. The fight between the two of them was easy to relate to (oh, now you made me think of him again, I had just forgotten him!). But it was so cute and romantic, and as you said, not cliche at all.

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iluvviktorkrum
Sweet One-shot!!! I love all the different languages that you put into the story. James is soo persitant isnt he. Oh and it was soo true when james said that Lily spending hours in the libary looking up hate words in different languages was Love. i totally digged that part!! Anywho very cute little story!! smile.gif

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happy-potter
Oh, I can't believe I haven't been around, answering feedback here yet! Iih!

OHyea: Thanks a lot for your nice words! I'm glad you could see both James and Lily. Thanks for the review!
emma_weasley: Thanks! Well, fun and sweetness have to be in a story. Especially when it's a one-shot tongue.gif James is always cool (at least in my world)! Well, the title couldn't be different, besides I had that before the whole story. Haha. Thanks for your nice words of my writing!
Lulu-lolo: Well, it seems to me, you are quite gifted with languages as well tongue.gif Again; James = COOL! Haha. Well, dont' we all know about fights. Even though it wasn't a serious one, but are ours ever? tongue.gif Thanks for the nice words of my writing, and thanks for the lovely review!
iluvviktorkrum: The languages was kind of the bearing thing in this story. Yeah, I don't think anyone can break James, but who would but Lily? Well, the whole spending time on a person you love was something I experienced right before I wrote this, so it came naturally for me to put it into the story: Thanks for the amazing review!

Thanks all again for the amazing reviews!

- Vicki
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