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Triad
Yeah it's a silly fic, but how often will Winnie the Pooh and Harry Potter be in a Fic together?

I had fun writing it. I hope everyone has fun reading it. The ending is weak but by then I was tired of writing and needed to end it. So there it is!
fany_monkey
Wow! I never thought I'd see the day when Harry met Pooh! That was a good laugh, specially the vision of seeing Hagrid in the Hundred Acre Woods!
But you should have made Hagrid sit on Piglet so we could just be rid of him already (not a fan of that silly pink pig).

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***Picture another page turning***


Hahaha that one had me laughing quite a bit! Ohh and I loved the ending, McGonagall evil! Yay!

Great job Tahra! It was excellent!

-Stef
Triad
Glad you liked it! You seem to be the only one. sad.gif Maybe I should threaten everyone with MP to make them vote for me.

I got the idea for Harry to meet Pooh from Kingdom Hearts. I figured if Sora could meet him why couldn't Harry? And Pooh is so easy to write. I was going to do Artemis Fowl but I couldn't get into character......

I love Piglet! "Oh d-d-d-dear!" He's just so precious! I want to hug him! And Eeyore....didn't put Eeyore in though.....I guess I forgot about him.....and the fic was getting too long anyway.

But thanks for feedbacking! I like feedback.
etphonehome
Oh my laugh.gif You have seriously lost the plot.

That was funny and the ending wasn't weak.....it just finished with a little twist. I like endings that sort of make you think there's room for more...and then you don't give us anything!!! wink.gif
Triad
I haven't lost the plot! If I had I wouldn't have been able to write a fic! So since I have written one you can't say I've lost the plot.

If it wasn't a one-shot fic, I still wouldn't have given anything else! I don't know how to write her as evil......she's too...tough to be evil. Eh. Vote for me!!!!! Lol.
Hilly
I've finally gotten around to reading this. Sorry Tahra, I've been busy! ph34r.gif

Anyway, it was great! I honestly couldn't stop smiling throughout the whole thing, it was brilliant. I really loved when Tigger came to meet them, I think he and I share a theme song. Your fic made me laugh, so good work! I also loved Piglet, but I'll always love Piglet. Admittedly, the lack of Eeyore turned me off, but I still loved your one-shot! The ending was so... sinister! ohmy.gif McGonnagal evil?! There's something I've never seen, but it worked!

happy.gif Looooove it!
Triad
sad.gif Does the lack of Eeyore mean that you won't vote for me? sad.gif

Can I edit my fic? Nah, that could be seen as cheating. And I'm not a cheater. I could blackmail people though.....hmmm.......who on the board is scared of Mods?

KIDDING!
Glad you liked it. I like McGonagall evil. But I'll tell you a secret,
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Which everyone would have found out if there was going to be another chapter. smile.gif
passerby
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I feel a little better after having read your little secret up there! tongue.gif My guess is that it's Lucius using Polyjuice potion!

This is my favorite line:

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Meanwhile in the Hundred Acre Wood


I laughed.

I liked how you had the trio figuring everything out instead of needing guidance by someone else.

Good luck! Thanks for writing!
Triad
I tried to make it as funny as I could. And the pages turning is very Winnie the Pooh so I had to add it in. Pius it made the jumps easier.


Lucius hey? That's interesting. To be honest I hadn't thought that far ahead! I thought it's have to be a girl, but like it matters with Polyjuice!


Thanks for reading!!! biggrin.gif
nevillesgirl
I love reading Pooh to my kids so I got right into this. I actually am going to read it to my children tonight. smile.gif

I loved the ending! I loved that you left that opening into our imaginations as to good McGonogall or evil McGonogall. I love that you actually had something sinister happen at the end; that there really was a threat to the Dark Lord's returning and it wasn't some hoax or mistake.

Oh, Eeyore would have just completed the story...maybe next time?

Triad
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I love reading Pooh to my kids so I got right into this. I actually am going to read it to my children tonight.
Seriously? blink.gif

After the comp I might tweak it a bit and add Eeyore in, since most people seem to want him in there!

And who knows, I might do a second chapter. Might. Depends on if I can come up with something decent. smile.gif
nevillesgirl
Seriously!!! smile.gif

My kids loved it. Captial L, Loved it. They especially like it when I sang the Tigger song. They also really liked that rabbit "shared" the cane and then got a better one from Hermione. Okay, so that is how I explained it to them but they really liked it.
Triad
Well that's just brightened up my day for sure! It's not every day someone reads your fic to their kids! I might have to keep that in mind when mines old enough to understand stories. biggrin.gif
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