Hey everyone!!

Here's my July one-shot entry. I know it was the second one with Twilight as the alternate reality, but in my defense, I was half way through with mine before there were any entries for this month, so I promise, I'm not intentionally stealing other people's ideas. Anyway, I had a ton of fun writing it and I hope you like it. You can read it here. If you loved it, I would really appreciate your vote and your feedback.

Thanks,
Dayna

Yay! I love twilight so it doesn't matter how many fics about it there are! The more the better!

So I loved your bit about Goofy, that part was very funny and the thought of Draco with Rosalie... now that was hilarious! I know Draco isn't as bad as he seems but he could never handle a girl like Rose.

Your descriptions were great and there characters were perfect! You did a wonderful job!

-Stef

That was really good. The combination of Twilight and Harry Potter was really intersting. I wish I could like you. Thank you for coming up with something like this.

Stef~ Hey, I'm so glad you liked this. It was so much fun to write. I actually added the disney part as an afterthought, I'm glad you thought it was funny. That was my intention, after all. I know Draco is not actually a bad guy, in fact I like Draco, a lot! But you're right, he would never be able to handle Rosalie.

LadyMalfoy~ I'm so glad you liked it. I've been toying with the thought of writing a Harry/Twilight fic, but didn't know how to do it. This contest gave me the perfect excuse to do it.

On a side note. . . YAY!!! Only one more month until Breaking Dawn comes out!!! *a hem* sorry, I'll control myself from now on.

Thank you for your kind reviews, I really appreciate it.

~Dayna

Great. Harry Potter and Twilight in one! Superb. I have wished to read something that combined the two actually, so great that you made it. Good combination and you use the characters in a great way. Keep up the good work

That was very fun! I enjoyed all of your characterizations for both sets of characters! I think you had them pretty well down. I enjoyed how you had Ron being the buffoon and setting off the port-keys. Heh. Very Ron-like! Their reaction to the vampires was quite amusing. I loved Lucius' reaction to Rosalie. Heh. I was worried there for a moment that he was going to be all "Narcissa who?"! I have a couple of questions/suggestions that my quick-read maybe missed:

1. Why was Jasper going to attack them for just being there? Did I miss it and was somebody bleeding?

2. If this was after Dumbledore died and his portrait was guiding Harry, why was Snape still at the school?

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3. (This is more of the suggestion, not meant to offend) I think Bella wouldn't have been so happy to have Edward tell her that he guesses she can come. I think she would have been more "Darn right I'm coming!" That just seems to me to be more of her nature than someone who acquiesces when told no. She doesn't handle "no" all that well. I did enjoy how you wrote her getting the cane, though! Someone with absolutely no vampire powers or wizarding powers gets the prize! YAY!

Thanks for writing! Good luck on the contest!

Lulu-lolo~ Thank you so much for the kind review. I absolutely love HP and Twilight!! What better way to show it than to put the two worlds into one story. And I had a perfect excuse to do it. Thanks again!!! You're great!!!

Janet~ Thank you so much for taking a little time to leave a review!! Here are the answers to your questions;

1) Jasper wasn't going to attack them for just being there. Hermione blushed when Edward flashed her his award winning, heart-stopping smile. Stephenie often referred to the blushing as a pooling of blood. I probably should make that clearer. Thank you for pointing it out.

2) This fic is post DH, and although JK never mentioned anything about it, I assume that Snape recieved the honor of having his portrait in the Headmaster's office, just like any other past Headmaster/mistress. So Snape was also guiding them through his portrait.

and 3) That is a very good point. Actually, in my mind, I could very clearly see the argument between Bella and Edward. I don't know why I didn't put anything in my fic about it. Maybe I'll go make a few minor adjustments to it right now. Thanks again for pointing these things out.

Thanks a ton for taking a few moments to leave me a review.

Dayna

Oh, I loved this fic. You effectively brought together two different worlds and very convincingly too. I loved that you stayed true to the character's personalities on both sides. Emmett is such a wonderfully arrogant character and you captured that perfectly.

I agree with Janet, having Bella disarm Lucius was sheer briliant. That should teach him that muggles have value in the world.

Good Luck with the competition

~Amanda

Great fic! I thought it was really fun and entertaining. Your descriptions were really good, and I thought the fic as a whole flowed along quite nicely.

I agree with the others that Ron's characterization and setting off of the portkeys was excellent. Definitely sounds like something he would have done.

And like Janet and Amanda said, having Bella retrieve the cane from Lucius was priceless.

Thanks for clearing up those points that Janet asked about. I was kind of wondering myself. Although, I don't really remember blushing as a triggering point for Jasper, but if it's a complete stranger and he's unprepared, I guess it is certainly possible.

Good luck with the competition!

Laura

Amanda~ Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm so glad you liked it!! I absolutely LOVE Emmett. He's definitely one of my seven favorite Cullens. Just kidding. He makes my list of top three favorite characters in the series (Edward, Alice and Emmett tie for my favs). I'm glad you thought I did well at keeping them relatively in character. Thanks again for the review. You're great!!!

Laura~ Thank you for taking a few moments to leave a review. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. I don't think blushing was a triggering point for Jasper. I just didn't know how to put it in the story that someone suddenly started bleeding. But I did end up finding a plausible way to make someone bleed. I don't know when you read this, but I changed the triggering point to Ron biting his tongue hard enough to make it bleed *ouch!* I think it makes a bit more sense. Thanks again for the review. You're great, too!!!

Take care,
~Dayna