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PottyHead
Okies here is the feedback thread for my one-shot =] Please vote for it if you liked it enough, and feel free to leave me feedback so that I can see what you all thought of it =]

Kelly
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PottyHead
Okay I would just like to say one thing.

So I've only just watched the series finale of Heroes as I live in Britain and we get it later than America.

So I would just like to clarify that me having Peter burn the cane in this one shot is in no way a rip off of what happens in the series finale. Those of you who watch Heroes will understand what I mean tongue.gif

Just so that you don't think that I stole it from the show though. I couldn't have - no possible way seeing as I wrote this two days ago and I finished watching the series finale literally five minutes ago.

Also - please leave me some feedback. I haven't had any and I'd love to know what you all think of it. Even if it's negative, I'd still like to hear your thoughts on it.

Kelly
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fany_monkey
Hahaha nice Kelly I didn't even remember that happened in the season finale! Wow you're a seer! Not to mention a great writer!

Let me tell you that I loved it! I was seconds from choking you when Peter died but then you fixed it! Yay! Ohh I say instead of Ginny, Harry should stay with Claire tongue.gif. I don't like the cheerleader much but I like her better than Ginny mind. It was really great I'd just like to know one thing... how did the heroes get there? Like did they take a port key? Thats the only thing that wasn't clear to me but I still loved it! Amazing my friend, truly amazing

-Stef
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