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Hilly
This is feedback for my one-shot Butterflies and Hurricanes. Let me know what you thought of it, because I definitely do not know how this will be received. Cookie for a review? happy.gif
zwillo
Yay, I'm first!! biggrin.gif I really liked this. You did a great job. I thought it was so funny how Harry insisted that Edward was Cedric, heehee!!! Then this;
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“Edward or Robert,” said Harry “That guy could play one really, really good Cedric Diggory.”
heehee. Good job!!

Dayna
Hilly
Thanks, Dayna! I'm glad you liked that part, it was the first that came to mind when I thought about a Twilight/HP crossover! Poor Robert Pattinson will always be Cedward! Anyway, lots of thank yous for reviewing! It made me feel happy! happy.gif
fany_monkey
ohmy.gif You can't just end it there! I was enjoying the whole Emmett hitting on Hermy! That was great! Oh and the Cedric/Edward thing was quite amusing I must say.

You know now that I think about it Edward kinda does look like Cedric! Ohhhhh Cedric didn't die he just became a vampire tongue.gif wait that's a bumper sticker on facebook...

This was a great one shot but I do want to know how it ends! You can't really leave us hanging like this... I will send Jasper to make you feel warm and fuzzy about posting the rest biggrin.gif

Great job!

-Stef
Hilly
Hey Stef! Thank you so much for the review! smile.gif

I actually have that bumper sticker, I think. laugh.gif I'll see about posting the rest. We'll see if more people read it, I probably would if enough people read this and liked it.

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you appreciate my humor! happy.gif Jasper's coming?? I'll just go get ready then and make sure I don't have any open wounds... wink.gif
madie
Heya! I've just voted for your fic too. Great job! My new favorite ship: Hermione/Emmett laugh.gif I agree with fany_monkey, you should continue the story rolleyes.gif I thought the whole story was really funny and well written.

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Emmett nodded as Edward walked back up behind them. “We need to go home, Emmett. Esme’s worried and Alice has got Bella trapped in the bathroom trying on wedding dresses.”


OMG! laugh.gif laugh.gif so fuuny! Poor Bella. This is another motive for you to continue the story: they must meet Alice... So if you write another chapter please let me know!

Good luck with the contest! I hope you'll win happy.gif
snowmanperson
Taylor! I love this! I especially love how Harry thought Edward was Cedric. haha. I'm thoroughly disappointed though! Where are the other three pages? I was enjoying it, then suddenly, bam! Cut off! I really do hope you write more because it was so entertaining and interesting, not to mention I couldn't stop laughing. You're such a great writer!
Hilly
Madie~ Thank you so much for reading! You're awesome, hun! happy.gif I love the Hermione/Emmett ship too! If only it was real! rolleyes.gif (Says this while talking about fictional characters...) I love Alice, she's one of my favorite characters! We'll just have to see if I continue, but if I do, I will definitely let you know. Thank you again for your review and everything!

Anne~ I can't believe I'm letting you read these things... Even if I don't put up the next three pages, I'll definitely send them over to you if you promise to send me your work!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, you are an absolute star and I love you! happy.gif
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