I love the horrible, snobbish version that JKR created too. Just that I wanted readers to get to see a rare side to him. Sort of the crying-where-no-one-can-see Draco. Yes, Draco's Dark Mark will become an important part of our 'relationship' in the story. And I will have some involvement, certainly. To what extent? That I have yet to discover.

Thanks for the feedback,
-Karina

Wow! It's very good! I like it at the end where she says I don't know I've never kissed you. I wonder if he'll kiss here again just to make her kiss him! It's very good, and leaves me wanting more!

Please update very, very soon!

Ohh! Wonderful chapter! You had my full, undivided, complete attention the whole time! (Not saying you don't usually, I was just glued to the screen with this chapter.) To me, it doesn't matter if it's short as long as it's good. Which you prove every time you write a shorter chapter. It's always good.

Aww, you had a fight with Beany. That's sad, but I kind of wish you had ditched him. I think Draco's cooler. But if you like Beany, that's fine.

The ending of the chapter was really good. I don't know, but the way you said it, it was just cool.



But I do feel bad for poor Draco. Poor boy. I'm anxious to see what happens, so update as soon as you can!

Chelsea

P.S. Ohh! This was my 600th post! Yay!

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Well thank you much for leaving some feedback. I'm glad that you like it. Yeah, I thought that last part was pretty good too. So again thank you for the feedback and I will try to update very soon.


Chelsea-
I don't know what to say. That's a very awesome compliment, thanks. Yeah, but I just thought you know, it being our first serious fight...ditching him just wouldn't feel right. I think I'm mostly doing it just to torture Draco. Anywho thanks for the feedback, I'll let you know when I update (hopefully sooon).

-Karina

I have been meaning to leave feedback for, like, ever, but the awesomeness of the last chapter just forced me to.

I love your story, it's really funny, but also sad at the right moments.

I agree with the majority of people, it's sad that Beany won over Draco, but I'll just take my place as the avid reader and watch the story unfold.

Post again soon!

Ellie
xxx

The awesomeness of the last chapter? Really? Thanks. "It's sad that Beany won over Draco" Well, for the moment at least. I'm glad you decided to leave feedback. There's still a bit of story to go yet. But as long as you guys keep reading I will try to keep up the "awesome" work.

-Karina

Yay yay yay! Update. Wohoo!

I really liked it. It's starting to tip towards some of the darker stuff, but you still manage to keep it light and make me laugh. Thank you!

Ellie
xxx

P.S. I like the dark stuff. Keep it coming.

Yeah, I try not to focus too much on the dark stuff, because you know I mean, I've still got to remember that this is supposed to be about 'me', not just Draco. Well, anywho, thanks for the feedback and I will try to update asap.

-Karina

Oh you updated! You're wonderful! I was in the mood to read an update in somebody's fanfic and poof! You told me you updated.

I really loved this chapter! And it's on page two! You've written a lot! A-n-ywhoo! That was so cool how you talked to Snape about Draco. You're sounding concerned. Am I detecting a fondness for the boy?? *Hint hint* Gasp!! You called him Blaise! I can't even remember the last time you called him that. Ok, the first chapter, but you get the idea. It's been a while.

Well, good luck in your quidditch game 'tomorrow'. Hope you win.

But this was a really good chapter! I really enjoyed it! Can't wait until you update again. (No pressure.)

Ever,
Chelsea

Well, maybe just a litte. of course I have to be concerned about him, we're friends remember? Well for now at least, that is all. Quidditch is Slytherin vs. Hufflepuff!
Anyway thanks for leaving feedback, I'll try to update soon.

-Karina

Karina! I think that was seriously my favorite chapter! No joke. It was great! I loved it!

Ahh! You kissed Draco! Oh my gosh! That was so incredible! I was perched at the edge of my seat at the moment you asked him to follow you. I kind of stopped breathing too. Woops. Haha.

You tell that Pansy. Put her in her place. Yeah! But oh gosh! I can't believe you kissed Draco, girl!

Let me know when you update again! I can't wait!

Chelsea

P.S. Oh yay! I made page 5!

Well, I really wasn't going to do it until another chapter, but then I thought...well maybe it would be interesting. And so now there is a major conflict. Well thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it.

-Karina

Aw, life totally sucks for you! Poor thing (if I were you I'd dump Beany and go out with Draco instead, but, hey, I'm not you!)

It was really good. I loved it every bit of it! Except for one teeny thing...

Now I want to know what happens next sooo bad!!!

Ellie
xxx

Well if I were you I'd probably do the same, except we all know why I can't do that...or maybe not. Anywho I'm happy to have made you happy. As you may or may not know I love leaving people hanging so...I might update not quite asap....muahahahaha haha just kidding. I'll try to have a new chappie up soon. Thanks for the feedy.

-Karina

Okay, so I have finally found some time to sit down and read the latest three chapters. Wow, I didn't realize it was that many. I am so, so sorry.

I liked the first one because it shows that "you" are sorry for what happened. I must say, though, that I find a little similarities between the ending and parts of another book that I won't mention. Anyway...I liked it.

Episode 15 was fairly good. It definitely seems that you are getting better and like there is an actual plot to this story. You took this chapter and focused it a little more than the previous ones. Snape said way more than he normally would, but I guess your "relationship" with him is a little unique. Good job, I am definitely intrigued.

Now it starts getting good. You kissed Draco. I can't wait to see where this relationship develops and what happens between you and Beany and you and Pansy. Let the fighting begin!

Apology accepted.

Hmm, well you know what they say--"All too often you shall find yourself inspired by another's words." And I believe I know which book you mean...I think I've read it before.

To this I don't really know what to say but I'm glad that the 'plot' has begun to show itself. It's also good to know that you think I am getting better--every author likes to hear (or in this case, read) that.

Yes, I agree Snape did seem a bit off-character but then most of them are (off-character I mean). I kissed Draco. To be quite honest I can't wait to see where this relationship goes either (you see I'm still not so sure about that myself). Well I don't know about fighting but the plot will definately thicken...thanks for the feedy.

-Karina

Sorry I haven't feedbacked for so long!!! It's just taken a lot of time for me to recover from my opperation and I was ill all last week!!! Anyway I loved the new chapter!!! I think Draco and you make an awesomely cute couple!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra

Hey Nam! Good to know you're feeling better. Thanks for leaving feedback, oh, um, Draco and I are not a couple...but its good that you think that would be cute. I have the new chappie ready, I'll try to post it before I have to leave for Christmas.

-Karina

Hey!!!

That's great to hear and we'll see if you and Draco really aren't a couple!!! I just wanted to say if a guy kisses you and you kiss him back then there's defenitely something special between the both!!! Hope you have an awesome Christmas holidays!!! Remember to keep on updating Karina!!!

Cheers

Namra

Oh great! You updated! Wonderful chapter! Oh, everyone is on edge. Tisk tisk, Pansy caught you hugging him. My oh my. Haha. I really enjoyed everyone's reactions. It was great! Oh I'm so anxious to see what happens next! Please update again soon, Karina! Oh gosh I love this fic!

Chelsea

YAY update!

Not much is new with me: Loved it and just thought I'd let you know! It was absolutely fabulous and I can't wait for more! Funny, too! You made me laugh when I was in a rotten mood, thanks!!

Ellie
xxx

Awesome chapter!!! Pansy saw you and Draco hug!!! Atleast she didn't see you two kiss!!! Blaise is jealous!!! Gosh I love your story!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra



P.S. You and Draco would be so cute together!!!

Chels: You love my fic? Haha, yeah. But she was so totally on him because she was jealous. But I thought, well, girls are naturally better than boys at hiding their jealousy. Glad you liked it, I don't know when I'll update though since I have to be going down to Mexico pretty soon.

Ellie: Yay! Happy to help. I'll try to have an update up soon.

Nam: Yeah you're right, if she'd seen that...well Beany and I would be over with a capital 'o'. As it is he's jealous with a capital 'j'! As I said, I don't know how soon I'll be able to update before I go. Well glad you liked it. Draco and I...cute? That is like the most awesome compliment ever!

Laterz,
Karina

Hey there! I liked this chapter, though I was surprised Pansy didn't say anything further. I'm sure she is hiding it away in her pesky little brain and will find a way to use that knowledge against both you and Draco. Can't wait for more and keep up the good work!

Kristin

Yeah, as I said to Chels, girls are naturally better at hiding things like jealousy away. Don't give it away! Well I suppose I can't blame you, Pansy's character is a little predictable. I won't be able to update too soon since I'll be away from VTM (and my hometown) for a while. But I'll keep you guys posted. Thanks for the feedy.

-Karina

Hey everyone. I have finally got around to posting an update. I hope that you all enjoy it. I'm sorry all my chapters are always so short but I just don't write that much. Anyway please let me know what you think!
-Karina

Oh Karina! You updated! Hooray!

Oh, the story is taking some interesting turns now. Gosh, I'd be mad if you woke me up at four in the morning too. Holy cow. Poor Draco. He's being rejected!

Oh I hope you don't get into trouble! Oh dear! Well, I can't wait to see what happens! I know I say that every time, but it's true!

Keep it up!

-Chelsea

I highly doubt that Draco will never speak to you again, considering he is a major player in this story. But I am intrigued as to how utilizing Legilimency will affect the relationship. As much as I am cheering for "you" and Draco, I still have to feel bad for "Beany." Kepe up the good work!

Kristin

Awesome Chapter!!! I loved it!!! As Always!!!

Anyone would be mad if they were woken up at 4 in the morning!!! I think using Legilimency on Draco was not the best thing to do at that point!!! I feel so sorry for him, but I'm sure he won't be able to resist talking to you!!! We all know he loves you!!! You're better off with Draco, Blaise would be happier if he had Pansy!!! They are both very Jealous people!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra

Chels: I'd be mad too ! Anyways, I feel bad for rejecting him too. I still haven't decided if my cousin will give me detention, after all it was only one time that I've messed up. We'll see.

Kris: Yeah, I knew that using Legilimancy would make him mad since he does play a crucial role in the story and his character is very important to my character. I''m sure the Draco that we all know and love will hold a grudge for a while. But eventually he may come to his senses.

Nam: Hmm, Beany and Pansy that sounds interesting. But I'm not sure I want to give up my Beany to someone like her...however you're right they are both very jealous at the moment. To be honest I really can't wait to find out what happens next either.

Thank you guys for the feedback. I'm glad you're liking my story so far, your support helps...really.

-Karina

Well this is my first time leaving feedback, but I think the story is great and has a lot of potential. The relationship and everything is so interesting. My heart goes out to Draco though, not Beany. Draco is having a hard time as a Death Eater and just got rejected.

Spending the holidays with Snape. Yikes! That's awful and ruins the holiday for you! Maybe Beany will invite her to his house for the holidays and she won't have to be around Snape!

Even though I feel for Draco, that is being pretty cowardly to not tell somebody they're off the quidditch team, yourself.

Nice story, Karina!

~alyssa~

Karina,

You're going to spend Christmas break at Hogwarts with Snape. Oh, that sounds like fun. And I'm not totally being sarcastic. I think Snape is really cool, so it could be fun. But that stinks that you don't want to.

You got kicked off the team? What? That's crazy! What is Draco thinking? Oh my word, he'd better have a good explanation or I'm going to have to have a little talk with him. You're like the best player on the team!

I want to see what happens, so update soon!

-Chelsea

Alyssa: Hey! Thanks for leaving feedback I always enjoy a fresh point of view on how the story is going. Yes, Draco is going through a very hard time, but rejection is only part of the equation, you will remember I read his mind. Even if it wasn't on purpose, it would still give him a justification for not wanting to talk to me.

Chels: Yep, Christmas with Snapeward...I mean don't get me wrong I am part of his fan-club, but he's just not really the holiday type. However the idea that christmas with him could be fun does strike me as interesting.I'm still trying to find a justifiable reason for that myself.

I'll try to update as soon as I possibly can!
-Karina

That was awesome!!! Go out with Draco!!! He LOVES you!!! Blaise didn't even give you a proper gift for christmas!!!

Cheers

Namra

Thanks for the note! Glad to see you updated. Fun chapter! Oh! So Draco's giving you the cold shoulder now is he. Well, that just proves he's completely taken with you. Go get him girl! Beany didn't even give you a really nice present. I thought it was going to be something major in the box. Even if it was only confetti bursting out. Update soon!

Your obsessed fan,
Chels

P.S. I agree with Narma, GO Out With Draco!!

Chels: Or so you think...I haven't opened it yet remember? And it wouldn't be the first time he lied to me when he said that all that was in it was a note. "GO Out With Draco!!" I wonder why everyone keeps saying that...hmm. Well anyhose thanks for the feedy...my obsessed fan!

Nam: As I said to Chels none of us really knows what was/is in the box...remember I won't open it until christmas actually gets to Hogwarts. But his apparent gift was good enough. Draco is at the moment ignoring me so I can't very well ask him out, plus it would be mean to Beany .

Thanks for the feedback you guys!
-Karina

Fine!!! If you don't want to be with Draco, then can I have him???

Cheers

Namra

Hey Nam, I never said I didn't want to just that it wouldn't be you know fair. But still that doesn't mean that I don't go out with Draco for lack of wanting to, just because he hasn't asked. But if I didn't want to, sure you could have him.

See you next update,
-Karina

Oh My Gosh!!! Oh My Gosh!!! Oh My Gosh!!! Please be friends with Draco!!! Then you can finally realise how much you love him and then you'll dump Blaise!!! I know it's a long shot, but I can dream!!! Keep Updating!!! I want to know what happens next!!!

Cheers

Namra

Karina: I am so sorry for not posting feedback sooner! I didn't realize you had posted so many since I last read! Time sure does fly, doesn't it? Anyway...I would have to say my favorite part of the three chapters I missed was Snape telling you that you would be staying at Hogwarts over Christmas to spend some quality family time together. I honestly laughed out loud at that part and could picture the hilarity of it in my mind.

I also really enjoyed the fact that Draco was attempting to get back at you by kicking you off the Quidditch team. That's awfully rude, but it is perfectly true to his character. That is definitely something JKR's Draco would have done, and that scenario made me smile (even though I shouldn't have!).

I am intrigued because I truly do like the relationship you (as the author) are developing between you (as the character) and Draco. However, I do feel incredibly sorry for "Beany." He's got to see this coming. And then there's Pansy...she should just jump off a cliff (no, just kidding). But honestly, she's a complete idiot!

Very nice work, Karina!

Kristin

Namsy: Oh My Gosh!!! Oh My Gosh!!! Oh My Gosh!!! Well at the moment we (Draco and "I") don't really know if we are friends again. Of course if we are, well...something might happen. I guess you'll just have to keep reading.

Kris: Hey! That's okay I understand, sometimes we get really busy. No worries. And yeah time does tend to leave people behind and wondering what happened. Yep, a Severusy christmas...I can't wait. I'm glad that you found the humor in it. I tried to stay true to how JKR's Snape would have broken the news.

That's 100% Draco alright. To be quite honest with you, I'm glad that you found something about it that made you smile. The only sad part is...I won't be playing Gryffindor for the cup.

On a happier note, that's a good idea. Maybe Pansy will jump off a cliff...but probably not in this story. And I agree with you, she is a complete idiot.

Thank you both for the great feedback.
I'll try to update real soon!
Karina

Karina!

Oh oh! You're talking to him again! And you laughed! Oh my! I really hope you are friends again! Stinking Pansy. She needs to get over Draco. So that you can have him! Haha. Keep updating! This is so exciting!

-C

Haha. Yeah, well you never know. Pansy is far from ever getting over him. But believe me, that would never be an obstacle. It is starting to get quite exciting. At the moment I'm not yet completely sure of where I want to go from here.

-Karina

Draco and Beany fighting over her... they're as bad as girls! But I think it was so funny when you told Draco you hated him. That was cold, but awesome to read. It was funny cause I was just imagining the look on his face.

Beany's getting angrier and angrier with you! What's going to happen? You go girl, telling them both to shut up like that. That's what lays beneath the softness and *ahem* kindness *ahem* girls have. Haha.

~alyssa~

Karina I loved it!!! Draco and you are friends again!!! WOOHOO!!! Please dump Blaise already!!! He's seriously getting on my nerves!!! I'm telling you Pansy and him would make the best couple!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra (Nimzie)

Nimzie: Pansy and Beany? I don't think I'd ever let that happen, even if I did (and I'm not saying I will...maybe) dump him for Draco. I just don't think that she would be able to ever get over Malfoy well enough to date Beany.

Alyssa: Yep. I can imagine that look as well. And Beany he's just so jealous, I love it. We girls can be very *kind* when we want to be, but sometimes guys just need to be told to shut up once in a while.

Thanks for the feedback guys,
I will try to update soon,
Karina

Oh I did like your new chapter, K!

It was very good. Don't worry about it being short. It had a lot in it. Beany seems really jealous! Wow! I really liked when they both called you by your name! Have you ever had them say your name before? I can't remember, but it was so cool! (Yes, I'm weird) I liked how you ended the argument. You didn't side with either of them. OH I really can't wait to see what happens! And Christmas is coming up soon! How fun! I love Christmas at Hogwarts!

-C

C: I'm so happy that you liked this chappie! (It rhymes, yay! )
Yes, Beany is way jealous. And I don't think they ever did call me by my name before except for that once at the beginning when Draco introduced me to Beany. Christmas I love christmas at Hogwarts too. The pressure's on for an awesome next chapter!

I will try to update Asap.
-K

Karina: Good chapter. I really enjoyed when Draco and Beany were bickering, and Draco's use of the world "girl friend." You just need to break up with Beany already and start dating Draco...you're just going to hurt Beany more in the long run, because (I hope, at least) you and Draco will end up together.

Kristin

Hey, thanks. To be honest I had a lot of fun writing that argument...boys are so funny when they bicker, especially over us girls. You know it's so funny how everyone keeps saying that I should just break up with Beany. I don't know. Why do you guys think I would be better off with Draco? I'm curious.

-Karina