Imperio!

You are now under my power and therefore you must leave some feedback. *derisive laughter* This is my first ever humor fic, so even if you found it dreadfully dull or awfully unfunny--laugh anyway (it's great for your health and you live longer...) no really, if you don't laugh, I will Avada Kedavra you. Just Kidding. Just tell me what you think.

~Veritaserum14~

PS. I don't really know Harry and I am not crazy....I'm insane!

So, I liked it. I'm hoping that there is more to come, but I'm not sure with the way that you ended it. You definitely have an interesting style of writing and it did intrigue me. And yes, you had me chuckling quietly to myself, so kudos to you! If there's more, I can't wait to read it!

Kristin

Cool, I'm so glad that you like it, don't worry, there will be more, as soon as I get around to posting it. Thanks for the feedback. I noticed you found [but I'm not sure with the way that you ended it] yourself confused by a part of it. What did you find confusing? Feel free to ask many questions, this is after all my first attempt at making people laugh and I want to be sure that I do it the right way.
I will try to get the next chappie up soon.

~Veritaserum14~

It's a great start!!! I love it. It's very... Well interesting I guess. I can't really say what!!! But I love it!!! Blaise and you together... Hmmm.... Is this based on your real life??? No I don't want to pry. So Never mind that stupid question. It is a very good story though!!!!

Lily

Actually it was a combination of VTM and my sister that gave me the idea. It was thanks to VTM that I was paired with him in the first place, at first it surprised me; but I've grown to like the idea. (Especially after I read more about him . And my sister encouraged me to turn his nickname (beany) into a fic idea. Please, no question is stupid; glad you liked the first chapter.

~Veritaserum14~

Awesome!!! I really enjoyed reading the story so far!!! It really is quite interesting because you don't normally think that anyone would want to go out with a guy like Blaise Zabini, but there you go!!! Please continue!!! I want to know what happens next!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra

Oh, well thank you Namra. Glad you like it so far, yes, I suppose that is a bit hard to believe (especially with JKR's description) but you know, in my world, anything is possible. And of course I will update a.s.a.p.

-Karina

Okay so I just read your latest two chapters (and with it being BEFORE 6 a.m. I am quite impressed with myself) and I must say, your writing style is very interesting. I love the way you dialogue, it is much different than anything I have read before.

Now, your "friendship" with Pansy is quite an interesting one, one that I imagine to be based on competition and backstabbing. But I absolutely love it because that is how Pansy is! She is a weasley little dormat. Though I did find it a little creepy why "you" just went into his room like that. I'm really curious now how it is that "you" ended up in the asylum. Keep up the good work!

Kristin

I really enjoyed the new chapter!!! What is it that "you" want to tell Blaise, but are too scared??? Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra

Hey Karina! I've finally got around to feedbacking this fic that you told me about a while ago. I like your fic. Its not the funniest I've ever read, but it does have me giggling at some points. And I like how you call Blaise Beany. That is quite a cool name.

I know this quote isn't from the actual fic, but it cracked me up.


I'm looking forward to your update. You have an interesting style of writing and I quite like it. Nice job!

steppy40- That is actually a very interesting story, you see, after I 'woke up' and told my parents this very same story...they had me sent there; so that's how it happened...you'll find out more about it in the final chapter which is still quite a ways away. Keep reading.

NKIqbal- Well, you see it's like this, he still doesn't have a nickname yet, and 'I' am a bit scared of how he may react to being given one. I won't go into detail on how it happens; keep reading and you'll find out.

emma_weasley-I knew that you'd feel like my sister about the 'funny' content; but don't worry, a funny chapter is coming up soon, I promise (hope you like Potter Puppet Pals)....Thanks for the feedback.

Interesting chapter. There wasn't really a lot to it, but I do find the relationship between Draco and "you." Sorry, but I don't have too much else to say about this one. But you do have me a little scared...about the Potter Puppet Pals. Can't wait!

Kristin

Well thanks, glad to see that you found this a suspenseful chapter and I agree it wasn't all it could have been, but i didn't have much in the way of time to be picky about it. As to the PPP (Potter Puppet Pals) yeah, I can see how that would be scary, but you'll just have to wait to see.

*Under Imperious Curse* (monotone voice)
This is the best fic I have ever read in my entire life. It is also the funniest fic I have ever read. *blinding flash of orange? light (imperious curse broken)* I love Harry's theme song! Go Puppet Pals!!!!!! Jumping Jelly-Beany! Was he really cheating on you with Crabbe and Goyle? That is so not funny! I'm kidding so don't hurt me, please!

HaHaHa! Aren't you the funny one? Glad to know that you enjoyed the Puppet Pals thing; and technically he wasn't cheating, he was trying to. And I am so going to hurt you. (Note to other readers: she is my sister, I'm allowed to be mean.) Thanks for stopping by and leaving feedback 'Hermmione14'.

-Karina

I just realized that I forgot to leave feedback. Naughty me. Tsk, tsk. *shakes finger at self* The last two chapters were good, I laughed at the Potter Puppet Pals thing. I love Potter Puppet Pals. You should use the Elder Swear at one point, haha. Maybe. If you want.

Beany is the coolest nick name ever. Although, if I was a guy who is semi-cool/popular and toughish I wouldn't want someone going around saying "Oi! Beany, how are you today? Oh Beany, you're so wonderful. Beany, haha. BEAAAANY!" That would be embarrassing. So I see why Blaise doesn't want "you" calling him Beany in public.

By the way, is "your" name in this fic Karina or is it something different. I don't remember.

Yeah un-creative me was too lazy to come up with a new name for myself. Thanks for leaving more feedback; glad you found Potter Puppet Pals satisfying. Elder Swear? that's great advice I love suggestions; I'll have to think about that one.


I know right? it's so awesome. But of course he doesn't want to be called that in public, I mean who does? Besides, he already feels humiliated and jealous enough because of Draco *hint hint*. But you'll just have to wait and see what will happen.

Hey there! I am so sorry for not leaving feedback sooner! This was a great chapter and I loved how Blaise was flirting with Crabbe and Goyle. Of course Blaise was mad, but he really didn't have a right to be. I mean, he was flirting with other girls while he was dating "you." Horrible. Just horrible. And I loved the PPP reference, though I honestly didn't remember that one so I had to go and watch it. My personal fave (with a song that is..The Mysterious Ticking Noise is my favorite) is "I'm Harry Potter, School is for Losers." But that's off the point. Great work and I am excited to read more!

Kristin

Glad you think so. I was aiming for a funny spot when I decided to incorporate PPP in there. I just love PPP (they're so funny). Thanks for leaving feedback; I've hit a rough spot of writer's block at the moment, but will try to get an update up soon.

-Karina

EDIT

Does adding more to an already posted chapter count as an update? If so, then consider 'Episode 6' completed (finally) Chapter 7 will be up soon (I can't promise anything though).

Okay, so I didn't realize that you had posted another chapter, but I loved it! "My eye!" Of course there's nothing there. Draco is always upgrading his "injuries" to gain attention. Pansy, no doubt, rushed over to him immediately and babied him for the rest of the year! Anyway...good chapter!

Kristin

Haha, nice chapter. Pansy-DracOW time sure is interesting. It was a cool chapter and I laughed at something although right now I can't remember what, but I did laugh! So, I guess DracOW didn't really have something in his eye. Silly boy. He's so melodramatic! I'm going to call him DracOW for the rest of my life.

steppy40- That's true of course. Don't worry about not posting feedback immediately after an update; I'd have to be crazy to expect that. Anyway I am sure happy to know that you liked this chapter. You know it, they're so much alike; he loves attention and she likes his attention.

emma_weasley- Yeah, I didn't know how many people would get the joke-attempt. Good to know that I made you laugh this time. (Although my fic will probably never be as funny as yours.) Anyway, I'm thinking about putting the Elder Swear in sometime soon.

Thank you both for the feedback. I will try to update soon.
-Karina

That was quite the chapter. I hope that "you" aren't starting to fall for Draco Malfoy!! And I'm interested to hear what Draco has to say to the request to be placed on the team... Anyway, good job!

Kristin

Well thanks, glad you thought so. I don't want to give anything away, so you'll just have to wait and see what happens. I love Quidditch and 'I' am very good at it, so you know if he says "no" I can make him say "yes".

Thanks for the Feedback.
-Karina

Sorry I haven't left feedback since ages. I absolutely loved the last chapter. So will DracOW let you be on the team or not? That is the main question. Don't stop writing because I think you're brilliant. Keep Updating.

Cheers

Namra

Nice to see your feedback again; it's been so long. I loves it too, and he probably will....eventually. You'll just have to read the next update, I posted it yesterday.
Thanks again.

-Karina

Awesome chapter!!! So Draco might actually let "you" on the team!!! Well I can't wait to find out!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra

So, "You" are a cousin of Severus Snape...interesting...very interesting. Nice touch, I might say to that! Other than that, I am excited about the quidditch tryouts.

Why thank you very much. I am excited about writing that. I don't want to be a dissapointment. By the way, I started reading your fic; I'll have to remember to give some feedback sometime. Anyway, thanks for leaving feedback. I will try to update as soon as I can.

-Karina

Its been a while since my last post so I'll go ahead and let you all know that an update has been posted just in case you haven't had a chance to look. I don't want to be pushy, just letting you know. As always your thoughts are much appreciated.

Thanks.
Peace \/
-Karina

Woohoo!!! You are officially a chaser on the Slytherin team!!! Your boyfriend is a seriously jealous person!!! Blaise really needs to calm down and not think you are going to cheat on him with Draco Malfoy!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep Updating!!!

Cheers

Namra

Well thanks for that rather cheery feedback Namra. I know, he's very jealous (although that may be because he is based on my best guy friend[who I think likes me]) but anyway that's off topic. Of course I will keep updating as long as you promise to keep reading. Once again thank you.

Peace \/,
-Karina

I love how Draco becomes a bumbling idiot in front of "you." He stutters and can't get things out. It's great! And Blaise was so jealous, but you know, if he would have shown up to tryouts/practice, he could have walked "you" to dinner and the whole fiasco could have been avoided. I love it; it is very amusing. I'd definitely love to read more!

Kristin

Wow. It's that obvious huh? Well yeah, mainly it's in there for....gah I almost gave it away. Well, I guess you'll have to wait and find out. But you're right of course...if he had simply kept his promise and walked me himself we could've avoided that. But let's face it then it wouldn't be a very interesting chapter.

Keep Right on Reading,
-Karina

This is a really good fic! I really like how 'you' are in it. It makes the story so interesting and fun! 'Beany', haha! That is so funny and cute! Oh haha! Dra-cow! That is great! Oh my, I love it! I'm going to think of that every time I say Draco. DracOW! Oh wow! You're the team chaser! Congrats! Good for you! And great job writing! Let me know when you update!

~Chelsea~

Hey, a new reader. Well, nice to know that you like it so far. Yeah, it took some experimenting but I finally came up with his nickname, I really didn't think it would end up being that funny. Yeah, well now you know the 'inside joke' about DracOW. I'll let you know when I update, thanks for leaving feedback.

Peace \/,
-Karina

Oh an update! Your new chapter was very good! Oh poor Draco. I'm sorry, I feel sorry for him. I have a feeling he kind of likes 'you'. He was really surprised when 'you' were nice to him. Poor boy. He's so used to people being mean to him. Well, I hope you update again soon!

Chelsea

Why thank you. Yeah, you're right he's not used to people being 'nice' to him. Well you'll just have to wait and see...oh I love keeping people in suspense. But thanks again for reading, I'll try to update a.s.a.p.

-Karina

I am now leaving feedback for your fic while I read it. Ba-BAM!

Lalala, it was good. Beany and "you" are cute. DracOW is weird and so is Pansy. There were a couple funny parts, but I'm too lazy to go back and find them all.

I think that DracOW like "you", dear. And its cool that your the Chaser. Being a Chaser always sounded fun, although I prefer Beater so that I can pelt heavy stuff at people without getting in trouble.

Update soon!

P.S. I'm sorry that this feedback stunk.

Emmy welcome back, I totally missed you dude! Anyway, thanks for the feedback, it does not stink...I admire anyone that can leave feedback while reading. Yeah, this fact will become only too obvious in the next few chapters. You're all very good at picking up on stuff. Thanks for stopping by; I'll leave you some feedback...when you update!

Laterz,
-Karina

P.S. Cookie is up by one vote. Just thought I'd let you know.

Thanks for letting me know that you updated, Karina! Oh my goodness! Draco's in love with you too! I can't believe it! Well, I can, but wow! Oh wow! You ended the chapter so I don't even know what you think about it! So you have to update again soon! I'm dying to see what happens now!

Chelsea

Haha. Yeah sorry. Please, don't die! I will update soon! *hint* Don't worry you'll find out exactly how we both feel about it *hint*.

I'll let you know when I update, thanks for the feedback.
-Karina

Howdy do! You updated again! Hooray!

Oh my goodness, poor Draco. I feel so bad for him. And he finally ended it with Pansy. It was about time. But I feel so sorry for him. He's so alone.

*Gasp* Do you like Draco?? I mean, now you keep thinking of him. Hmmm, well, I can't be sure. I hope you update soon, don't worry I won't die if you don't, so that I can find out.

Post soon.

Please!

Chelsea

Thanks for the feedback; and as to me thinking of him...there's a difference between that and liking him. But I guess you'll just have to wait and see.

Laterz,
-Karina

Hey Karina! Great chapter! I love quidditch! It is so exciting!! You're a really great player!! I'm glad it was a tie! I get so sick of Harry always getting the snitch.

Draco seems sad. I think he still likes you. I'm sorry but Beany's name is so funny! I love it!

But it was a really good chapter and worth the wait! Don't be too sorry about not posting sooner, I take forever in between my chapters. A lot longer than you! Keep up the good work!

Chelsea

Yeah, originally I meant to make us win, but then I thought how dumb and predictable can you get? So I decided to make it a tie! Ha. I wish I was that good for real! Well....I won't ruin it for you. I won't go beyond saying that he is both tired and sort of sad about...something.
Yeah, I don't blame you, Beany is a funny name!
I will try to update soon!
-Karina

Karina: Hey! I am so so so sorry for not posting feedback sooner! I honestly hadn't realized how many chapters I actually missed! I think I counted 4! Time really got away from me and I finally sat down this morning and read those chapters. Wonderful work!! I absolutely loved them all. And you had me laughing out loud and bursting at the seams with your wizard swears inclusion! Just classic..."Daniel Radclife"...It just kills me everytime!! I love the way your story is progressing with the relationships between Draco/Pansy, Draco/You, You/Beany. I definitely can't wait to read more! And I will try my hardest to keep more up to date on leaving you feedback!!

Kristin

Karina, awesome chapter! I really really liked it!

Wow! Draco made a really bold mood sitting next to you! I was really surprised that Beany let him. But I guess when he was given detention, he'd keep his mouth shut. I was kind of glad he didn't sit next to you and that Draco did. *I like Draco*

*Gasp* His dark mark! Poor Draco! He's in so much pain! And it's not going to go away! That's awesome that you two got to talk without Beany hovering behind your shoulder for a change.

Honesty, I love it. He said it so blunt. He likes you. It's great. But tough for you.

It was a really great chapter! Update again soon!

Chelsea

Kristin: Hey! I was wondering when I'd get to read your lovely feedback again. Yeah, I had a ton of fun writing that chapter, at first I didn't think I should make Pansy and Draco's break-up so funny, but then I had this great idea and I just had to do it. Well I will try my hardest to keep updating!

Chelsea: Yeah that was pretty bold of him. But Pansy didn't like it. I felt bad at first getting Beany in trouble but then if he wasn't in trouble then I wouldn't have spent the night talking to Draco. But yes, his confession does sort of complicate things for me. Besides *I like Draco* too (D.O.D.D.D). The situation certainly does give my character a lot to think about.

Thank you both for the great feedback,
-Karina

So, Karina, Draco has finally admitted that he likes you. Honestly, I like your portrayal of him, and I think that it is pretty accurate for someone in your position. You are friends with him and so you'll see him in a different light as opposed to, let's say, Harry. Draco has always been a favorite of mine, though I must admit that I love the horrible, snobbish version that JKR created. But I like your portrayal of him, as well. It's refreshing, actually.

And you've brought up Draco's Dark Mark. I'm just wondering if that is going to be important at all in this story? And will you have a role in any of those plans?

But anyway, I really enjoyed the chapter! Keep up the good work.

Kristin