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Yay first one-shot is up!!!! The first one is always the hardest. I liked, still a little on the short side though. If you do a second one work on putting a little more detail in. A scene between L/J knowing that they're probably never going to see each other alive again is always a good way to get people to cry, which is actually a good sign. Other than that I like, keep writing.
~Kristina - the most awesome beta-type person you've ever met