Hey!

I hope you're here because you've read my one-shot Seize the Day. And even more do I hope you leave some feedback. A few lines always make me smile and I don't mind criticism as long as it's fair what you say

- Vicki

Hey, the first one here! Yeah

Seize the day. Well, you have actually made me regret that I didn't do that when I sat outside the party, talking to the boy I fancy. The two situations are a bit similar to me, though with a different outcome. Aww, I can easily imagine what Lily is feeling. I like the point that you are making
The beginning is very poetic. First I am puzzled, but soon I realise what is going on. I like that you put some humour into this and using sarcasm. And I truly enjoy the way you describe the tastes, the looks, the feelings so the story EXISTS!.
Nice work, love it

The whole concept of this is something that I've always adored. This teaches a good lesson. It's just never too late to just let someone know you like them. Take chances. And like the title, Seize the Day! It's about the best advice one could give anyone.
Love it.

I think the moral behind this fic is almost as good as the fic itself. I've alway said to take life as it comes at you and if you turn down an oppertunity you will always be sking yourself,
"What if?"

Lulu-lolo: Then remember another time, Louise, seize the day Well, I like this situation. It's kind of a dream to me, sitting outside when a boy comes looking for me because he couldn't see me anywhere, but who knows if that's ever going to happen? I've come to fancy 'poetic' starts for my stories. Description and feelings, and I'm so glad you could feel it in this, I was trying hard to make it more emotional than what I write the most. Thanks for your amazing review!
JSB 073: I agree with you, and who doesn't adore seize the day moments? especially when they end up like Lily's here? And even if the person doesn't feel the same, it's good to get it off of ones shoulders. I've tried it, though not entirely the same. Thanks for the review!
The Happy Dementor: Thanks a lot! And as I love the moral behind it, I'm taking your first comment as a huge compliment Always take chances if you think it can turn things better than they are, you're so right! Thanks for the review!

Thanks again for the amazing reviews!

- Vicki