Hey everybody! I'm here with Chapter 3. Hilly just PMed me the chapter...I know it's about six days later than I thought, but I had extra time to write more!!

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CHAPTER THREE
It had been two weeks since Lily had gotten her letter from Hogwarts. She knew by heart all the books she needed and all the equipment, too.
James usually ruined his supplies by either breaking them or drawing on them. Albus usually took good care of his Hogwarts supplies and gave Lily his ‘pointed hat, black, for day wear’. He gave Lily the First Year books that he had not lost and that he didn’t need.
But her father had the best surprise of all. He took her up to the garage attic and dug around in the dust for a few minutes, finally pulling out an old trunk.
“This was my trunk when I went to Hogwarts. I thought you might want to use it,” he told her.
“Dad! Thanks!” Lily cried excitedly.
Just a half hour later, her father’s old trunk was sitting open at the end of Lily’s bed, and Lily was kneeling and putting Albus’ books in her trunk. Just as she was about to stand up, she saw a glimmer of something in the bottom of the trunk.
Curious, Lily reached in and pulled out a shard of glass. Lily thought she knew where it had come from.
It had been the two-way mirror that her father’s godfather had given to him, so he could talk to him. Sirius Black. Lily wished she could’ve met him, she remembered how he was murdered by his own cousin, Bellatrix Lestrange. There was nobody on her father’s side who was still alive. Parents: murdered. Grandparents: dead. Godfather: murdered.
It didn’t make her feel any better. It made her feel worse to know that those people who were murdered were killed by either Voldemort himself or his Death Eaters. Lily couldn’t even understand what it had been like for her father as a child, with the burden of his parents, Lord Voldemort, and the scar on his forehead.
Lily looked at the mirror and saw her own green eye staring back at her. Then she remembered Aberforth, and Dumbledore, and their piercing blue eyes.
So many stories... So many terrible memories that family was a part of it...
“Lils?” Albus said, leaning in her doorway. Lily was kneeling, but that made him seem even taller than Lily; even when Lily was standing, Albus towered over her.
At first she thought that Albus was her father. Albus looked even more like Harry than James did. Lily, however, had flaming red hair just like her mother, but her eyes she had gotten from Harry.
“Lils?” Albus said again.
“Uh? Sorry, Al....what was it?”
“I found The Standard Book of Spells,” he told her, holding up a copy.
“Oh! Thanks, Al....” she took the book from him and set it in her trunk. Then, realizing she still had the piece of mirror in her hand, she set it on a shelf above her bed.
“Lily!” She turned around again as she heard her voice called. Albus had already left her room.
“Albus! James! Lily!” her mother called again. “Kitchen!”
Lily left her room, closing the door on her way. Her room was the very first off the landing, and she was the first downstairs.
“It’s only a few more weeks until you three are going off to Hogwarts.” she told her three children. Lily smiled.
“So I thought we should go to Diagon Alley... Tomorrow?” she asked.
“Can’t,” James replied. “I’ll be gone at... At a friend’s.”
“How about the next day?” Ginny asked.
“YES!” Lily yelled when Albus and James nodded.
“Whose house are you going to?” Albus then asked James suspiciously.
“A friend’s,” James repeated.
“What friend’s? Christy’s?” Albus taunted.
“Stebbins! Okay?”
“STEBBINS?” Albus asked incredulously, laughing.
James turned red and left the room.
“What’s been up with him? No retort? No comeback? Nothing?” Albus shouted at James’s back.
“But seriously, what is up with him?” Albus asked Lily and Ginny, frowning.
“I don’t know, sweetie.” Ginny tousled Albus’s hair. “You need a haircut, Al.”
“No!” Albus yelled, ducking under his mother’s arm and turning around. “No way!”
Ginny smiled and walked outside. She began pulling laundry off the line.
“Now, I’m serious.” Albus rounded on Lily. “He’s not himself. He hasn’t said anything mean to me since... Since I was still at Hogwarts.”
“Oh, who cares?” Lily flapped her hand at the door where James had left. “Why do you care so much, anyways?”
“I don’t know...” Albus was left to his thoughts as Lily walked outside.
* * *
Two days seemed to pass slowly for Lily. James stayed in his room, Albus read books outside on the back patio, and Lily spent her days wandering around the house, sitting down on a chair and getting up immediately after, turning on music and turning it off again.
If only she had her wand... She could still practice magic, since she hadn’t gone to Hogwarts yet. She could practice all the spells in The Standard Book of Spells: Grade 1.
“Wingardium Leviosa. Wingardium Leviosa,” she murmured to herself.
* * *
Lily was sitting on the kitchen counter. She perched her sunglasses on top of her head and swung her wallet on the chain it was on.
“Can we GO?” she shouted to the house.
“Just a minute!”
“Just WAIT!”
“Hold on, honey!”
“Be right there!”
James came down the steps, wearing jeans and a black T-shirt with an un-tucked, button-up shirt. Lily could faintly see his wand sticking out of his back pocket.
“Why do you have your wand?” she asked curiously.
“What?” he asked, distracted.
“Here I am!” Albus jumped into the kitchen doorway. He was wearing almost the exact same thing as James.
“Hey, buddy!” Albus said an annoying, singsong voice, running to put an arm around James. “Nice shirt!”
“Stop it,” James said, staring at the wood floor.
“Well, sheesh!” Albus said. “No reaction...” he muttered to himself.
“Let’s go!” Harry and Ginny appeared in the doorway, Ginny clutching a purse and an umbrella.
“What’s the umbrella for?” Lily asked her mother.
“It has my wand in it,” Ginny whispered to her. “I have no pockets!”
“Oh, right.”
Harry parked their car right outside the Leaky Cauldron.
Lily hopped out and opened the door of the Leaky Cauldron, her family steps behind her.
There was a strong smell of Firewhisky and smoke. Many eyes followed the Potter family as they walked towards the brick wall in the back room.
“Can I try?” Lily asked her Mom, motioning to the umbrella, as soon as they reached the brick wall.
Ginny slowly pulled her wand out of her umbrella and handed it to Lily. Harry instructed Lily on what to do, and as Lily pulled her mother’s wand away, the bricks melted away to form a doorway.
Lily stepped forward through the brick. As her family did the same, the brick melted away to form the same brick wall.
Lily gazed at all the wizards and witches, all walking through the streets laden with shopping bags and carrying wands.
“Mom! Dad! Madam Malkins’s Robes!” she gestured to a little shop, the third from the right side of the street.
“Wait! First, split up. Harry, why don’t you take Al and James, and I’ll take Lily,” Ginny said. We’ll meet back here in...” she consulted her watch. “Forty-five minutes to get Lily’s wand, okay?”
Harry took James and Albus into the Potions Supplies Store. Lily dragged her mother into Madam Malkin’s Robe Shop.
Madam Malkin, a short, plump woman with a kind face was already fitting robes onto a young girl standing like a statue on a stool. Lily and her mother wandered around the store for a while. Lily found a pair of robes that were silver with big purple stars that flashed every three seconds.
After five minutes, Madam Malkin shuffled over to Lily.
“New at Hogwarts?” she asked knowingly. Lily nodded. “Right this way, sweetie, I’ll just fit you into your new robes.”
Lily stood still with her arms spread out as Madam Malkin pinned up her sleeves and the hem and then took the robes off and began to sew them up with her wand.
Lily hopped off the stool. There was a pile of newspapers on a rack. Her parents got this newspaper every day, “The Better Daily Prophet”. It was run by an old classmate of her father’s, Seamus Finnigan.
Her mother had picked up a copy and was reading the front cover with raised eyebrows. Ginny shook her head and lowered the newspaper.
“Dear? Your robes are ready,” Madam Malkin handed Lily her robes in a package.
As her mother bought the robes, she bought The Better Daily Prophet , too.
After they had left the store, Lily tried to grab the newspaper.
“What does it say?” Lily asked.
“Oh, the usual.” Ginny waved a hand airily. “What do you think was in it?”
“Nothing... Just your expression while reading...” Lily trailed off. Her mother wasn’t listening anyways.
They picked up potion ingredients and Lily’s cloak and other books. Flourish and Blott’s was packed and all the crowds were gathered around a book that Lily never got to see. People were buying copies of the books and then hiding them in other shopping bags. Ginny saw the people and rushed Lily out of the store, and she never saw the books.
To her great disappointment, she couldn’t get her owl. The store was closed down; the letters ‘RELOCATED’ were spread across the window in purple letters.
Forty-five minutes were almost up and Ginny and Lily were walking to Ollivander’s.
“Oh, Mom!” Lily gasped. “Weasley’s Wizard Wheeze’s!”
Weasley’s Wizard Wheeze’s had been, ever since it opened, one of the main attractions in Diagon Alley. The store had been closed down for a few months after one of the co-owners had died in the great fight against Voldemort, but then George Weasley reopened the shop and had been inventing his best products yet for almost nineteen years.
The display cases had been charmed to reflect more light than usual. The brightness of the shop was like a neon sign in the darkness.
Lily could see people crowding around displays through the window in the door.
“Mom, can we please go inside? Oh, please?” She asked her mother.
“Well... I suppose... Just to have a look around,” Ginny agreed reluctantly.
Lily opened the door of the shop, the bells tinkling overhead. The store was packed with chattering people, digging through cauldrons of trick wands, examining the Decoy Detonators on display.
“Uncle George!” Lily shouted, weaving through the crowd.
George Weasley turned around.
“It’s Lily!” he said, hugging her. “How are you? Where’s your Mom?”
Lily had never gotten fully used to her uncle having only one ear. He made plenty of jokes about it, though, and didn’t seem to mind it anymore.
Just then Angelina Johnson came through the back room door.
“Auntie!” Lily hugged her too.
“How are you?” Angelina asked Lily.
“Good, I’m about to get my wand!” she told her aunt excitedly.
“That’s great! Where’s your Mom?” she asked.
“Over there...” Lily muttered, pointing. Angelina hurried off. “What is the big deal?” she murmured to herself, as Angelina and George talked to their Mom, all three looking very concerned. Her mom held up the newspaper and pointed out a line. George shook his head.
Lily walked over to the newspapers George was selling by the counter in the back. The rack for The Better Daily Prophet was empty; every single copy had been bought. Turning around, she saw that her Mom was watching her eyeing the rack, and Lily walked away.
When Lily and her Mom left the store, Lily had a huge shopping bag full of supplies from Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes. Decoy Detonators, Extendable Ears, a handful of fake wands, and, something that her Mom didn’t know that she bought: a love potion. She didn’t have plans to use it for anything, but it would be good to have, she had thought as she was buying it.
When Lily and Ginny got to the front of Ollivander’s, James, Albus, and Harry were waiting for them. Lily watched her parents closely to see if Ginny showed Harry the mysterious newspaper, but she didn’t do so.
Once again, a bell tinkled above Lily’s head as she walked into the shop. It was dark and dusty; the shelves were covered lopsided, thin brown boxes. In the center of the small room was an enormous wooden desk. Behind the desk was Ollivander.
He was old. Very, very old. He was very frail looking, and moved very slowly towards the Potter family.
“Harry Potter...” he murmured, shaking Harry’s hand. “Harry Potter, holly with phoenix core, am I right?” he asked.
“Yes.” Harry told him, smiling.
Mr. Ollivander turned to Ginny.
“Ginny Weasley, birch, unicorn hair, nine inches?” Ginny nodded. “James Potter, maple, hippogriff feather, ten and a fourth inches? And Albus Potter, ivy, ten inches, with Chimaera scale?”
Lily could almost see her reflection in Ollivander’s eyes. “And you... You need a wand yet. What will choose you?” He asked mysteriously.
Ollivander flicked his own wand and a measuring tape soared across the room and began measuring Lily. Meanwhile, Ollivander walked back and forth among the shelves, running his finger along the boxes, occasionally pulling one out and examining it. He disappeared along a hallway behind his desk for a moment and then appeared with four boxes. He set them on his desk and beckoned Lily over.
“Dogwood, core of demiguise hair, eleven and a half inches. Unyielding,” he professionally told Lily, handing her the wand.
Lily took it and was about to bring it up in the air when Ollivander snatched it right out of her hands. “No, no, no... Not quite right, how about this? Cherry, hippogriff talon, eight and five sixth inches...” he handed it to Lily.
Once again, Lily had barely touched the wand when Ollivander grabbed it and placed it back in the box, tossing it aside.
“Aha! Here .Try this one... Rosewood, with the hair from a Thestral. Eight inches, nice and flexible...” he said, eyeing the wand.
Lily took it. Warmth spread from her fingers all the way down to her toes. Lily swished the wand through the air and gave it a quick flick. Golden-red sparks shot out of the wand, twisting and exploding into little gold stars.
Harry, James, and Albus were clapping.
“Oh, bravo!” Ollivander cheered, taking the wand back from her and placing it carefully into the little brown box.
Harry paid for the wand and the five Potters walked out of Ollivander’s. Lily kept the box in her hands all the way through the crowded streets of Diagon Alley, beaming at everyone she passed.
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