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No.1_HarryPotterFan
Well, here it is. The place where you can leave feedback for my songfic, which can be found here!
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Oh my God. I don't know what to say. That little snippet had and has tears running down my face. I love it. Please keep writing. It would make my day. Even though I'm crying I would love to read more. You have great talents. I can't believe how hard it was to write because I found it immensely hard to read. Keep up the good work.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
harry_potter_luvr_4life-- Aw thank you so much! I'm totally going to keep on writing; I actually have another one-shot that shall be posted as soon as I finish editing... Your review made my day! Sorry to have made you cry, though...
harry_potter_luvr_4life
No it's fine. I think if I wouldn't have cried I wouldn't have liked it as much. I'm weird like that. Just like when
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I think I shall read yours again just because I liked it that much. The spoiler is from New Moon. I'm not sure if you've read it yet so I put a spoiler thing to be careful.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Yeah, I have... I cried at that part, too.

Well, I feel insanely special... biggrin.gif
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Yeah. I read it again and this part really made me cry...


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Almost without thinking about it, he touched a hand to her stomach, feeling the little bump there. Her baby. His baby.


That really go to me. I don't know why because I've never had that happen in my family but I think just the baby... It really got to me though.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
I think I know what you mean... I kind of got the same reaction writing it.

My friend told me to write a prequel where it showed Lily's death, and stuff... O.O That would be depressing.

Truth be told, I'm kind of considering it...
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Let me know so I can bring on the water works!!!

On a different subject... Will you read my fic and leave me feedback??
No.1_HarryPotterFan
I've decided. When I am at the condo this weekend, I shall write it. When I get back, I shall post it.

I'm actually reading it now... It's really good so far!
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Well. Thank you. Ok. I shall take my laptop with me to Ohio so I can be the first to read it and cry my eyes out!!! PM me when you get ready to post it please!!!!!
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Okay I shall.

I reviewed your story... Really good!

Why are you going to Ohio?
harry_potter_luvr_4life
My grandfather lives there. I don't look forward to it because he has a really bad temper and he gets mad a lot. But oh well. Thank you for the PM notification when you post and for reading my fic. You already know what I think of your songfic.
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
Oh my gosh I feel out of the loop (just kidding!) Sorry it took so long to find your story! Seriously, that is a GREAT! song fic!!! That was so sad!!! I almost cried! (then again, I've never cried during a fic or book sleep.gif ) But I was close to it! And the part:

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Almost without thinking about it, he touched a hand to her stomach, feeling the little bump there. Her baby. His baby.


eeek.gif That was so sad! But I loved it, no matter how sad it was! You have a great talent in writing!!!
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aww, thanks!
As I told harry_potter_luvr_4life, I'm going to write a sequel/prequel to it, I think... I was going to write it this weekend but... personal problems stopped me. It should be up soon!

-Jasmine
harry_potter_luvr_4life
QUOTE(Padfoot, Prongs and Moony @ Aug 11 2008, 11:21 PM) [snapback]529226[/snapback]

Oh my gosh I feel out of the loop (just kidding!) Sorry it took so long to find your story! Seriously, that is a GREAT! song fic!!! That was so sad!!! I almost cried! (then again, I've never cried during a fic or book sleep.gif ) But I was close to it! And the part:

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Almost without thinking about it, he touched a hand to her stomach, feeling the little bump there. Her baby. His baby.


eeek.gif That was so sad! But I loved it, no matter how sad it was! You have a great talent in writing!!!


I said the exact same thing about that part!!!!
The Happy Dementor
Wow...
MoonFighter
That was so eeek.gif My tears were falling freely, honestly ;( Poor James...It was so heart-breaking.

Thanks for this wonderful and heart-breaking song-fic hug.gif I really love the story and the song ... *sniff*
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