No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 9 2008, 07:52 AM
Well, here it is. The place where you can leave feedback for my songfic, which can be found
here!
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 9 2008, 08:47 AM
Oh my God. I don't know what to say. That little snippet had and has tears running down my face. I love it. Please keep writing. It would make my day. Even though I'm crying I would love to read more. You have great talents. I can't believe how hard it was to write because I found it immensely hard to read. Keep up the good work.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 9 2008, 08:58 AM
harry_potter_luvr_4life-- Aw thank you so much! I'm totally going to keep on writing; I actually have another one-shot that shall be posted as soon as I finish editing... Your review made my day! Sorry to have made you cry, though...
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 9 2008, 09:02 AM
No it's fine. I think if I wouldn't have cried I wouldn't have liked it as much. I'm weird like that. Just like when
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Edward left I cried but kept reading to see when he came back into the story.
I think I shall read yours again just because I liked it that much. The spoiler is from New Moon. I'm not sure if you've read it yet so I put a spoiler thing to be careful.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 9 2008, 09:04 AM
Yeah, I have... I cried at that part, too.
Well, I feel insanely special...
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 9 2008, 09:06 AM
Yeah. I read it again and this part really made me cry...
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Almost without thinking about it, he touched a hand to her stomach, feeling the little bump there. Her baby. His baby.
That really go to me. I don't know why because I've never had that happen in my family but I think just the baby... It really got to me though.
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 9 2008, 09:08 AM
I think I know what you mean... I kind of got the same reaction writing it.
My friend told me to write a prequel where it showed Lily's death, and stuff... O.O That would be depressing.
Truth be told, I'm kind of considering it...
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 9 2008, 09:13 AM
Let me know so I can bring on the water works!!!
On a different subject... Will you read my fic and leave me feedback??
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 9 2008, 09:16 AM
I've decided. When I am at the condo this weekend, I shall write it. When I get back, I shall post it.
I'm actually reading it now... It's really good so far!
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 9 2008, 09:19 AM
Well. Thank you. Ok. I shall take my laptop with me to Ohio so I can be the first to read it and cry my eyes out!!! PM me when you get ready to post it please!!!!!
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 9 2008, 09:24 AM
Okay I shall.
I reviewed your story... Really good!
Why are you going to Ohio?
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 9 2008, 09:30 AM
My grandfather lives there. I don't look forward to it because he has a really bad temper and he gets mad a lot. But oh well. Thank you for the PM notification when you post and for reading my fic. You already know what I think of your songfic.
Padfoot, Prongs and Moony
Aug 12 2008, 05:21 AM
Oh my gosh I feel out of the loop (just kidding!) Sorry it took so long to find your story! Seriously, that is a GREAT! song fic!!! That was so sad!!! I almost cried! (then again, I've never cried during a fic or book

) But I was close to it! And the part:
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Almost without thinking about it, he touched a hand to her stomach, feeling the little bump there. Her baby. His baby.

That was so sad! But I loved it, no matter how sad it was! You have a great talent in writing!!!
No.1_HarryPotterFan
Aug 12 2008, 07:26 PM
Aww, thanks!
As I told harry_potter_luvr_4life, I'm going to write a sequel/prequel to it, I think... I was going to write it this weekend but... personal problems stopped me. It should be up soon!
-Jasmine
harry_potter_luvr_4life
Aug 12 2008, 07:30 PM
QUOTE(Padfoot, Prongs and Moony @ Aug 11 2008, 11:21 PM) [snapback]529226[/snapback]
Oh my gosh I feel out of the loop (just kidding!) Sorry it took so long to find your story! Seriously, that is a GREAT! song fic!!! That was so sad!!! I almost cried! (then again, I've never cried during a fic or book

) But I was close to it! And the part:
QUOTE
Almost without thinking about it, he touched a hand to her stomach, feeling the little bump there. Her baby. His baby.

That was so sad! But I loved it, no matter how sad it was! You have a great talent in writing!!!
I said the exact same thing about that part!!!!
The Happy Dementor
Sep 4 2008, 04:52 PM
Wow...
MoonFighter
Sep 22 2009, 12:34 PM
That was so

My tears were falling freely, honestly ;( Poor James...It was so heart-breaking.
Thanks for this wonderful and heart-breaking song-fic

I really love the story and the song ... *sniff*
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