Hello!

This is the feedback thread for my songfic/one-shot White Flag. The song is, well, White Flag, by Dido, for those who want to know. I'd really appreciate it if you left me some comments here, whether it says you liked it, you hated it, it needs something more, it doesn't matter, just say it. As long as you're nice and you follow the rules.

Thank you!

-Wings

Hey there person!

At first I couldn't remember what the song sounded like but then I remembered and I have to say it was the perfect song for that fic. Go figure-a songfic, duh. I like how it's in Cho's POV and how she still loves Harry. Her jealousy for Weasley and Granger was slightly comical to me for some reason. I loved it and it was a very nice piece, well done!

--x Lauren

Thank you, person. You're the first to leave me feedback, woohoo. Actually, I really really wanted to use that song, so I had to find somekind of storyline that fit with it, and [somehow] I came up with Cho thinking about Harry in bed at night the day before he came back. I'm not sure how, since I kind of despise Cho, but whatever- it was a fun challenge to write from her point of view. And I really really wanted to write a songfic, so I figured any idea would do.

Thanks again, person.

-NAthalie

Well we all know that Cho had a jealous streak against Hermione, why shouldn't it be the same with Ginny? I like the way you portrayed Cho as a tragic romantic with having hope of a reunion of herself and Harry. I like that you had her still thinking about Cedric, although the way you made it sound was like she had a crush on him and was infatuated by his good looks and she was really in love with Harry.

The only think that was confusing to me was I believe Cho was a year older than Harry so if you are writing this during the era of Deathly Hallows, Cho wouldn't have been at Hogwarts. This one little detail throws off your entire timeline of this story.

I do like the basic idea though.

Is Cho older than Harry? Oh. But she's in Deathly Hallows, isn't she? When Harry comes to Hogwarts, she's there. I don't know. But thanks for the feedback anyway!

-Wings

Great fanfic ~Wings, you hit the nail on the head with Cho. I couldn't put my finger on why Cho was in Ravenclaw, but I believe you're right her mind is always working trying to think things out. And I love the line, "I laughed darkly to myself.", great line. ~Lycan

Aha, I'm a bit late, but thank you.

Now that I think of it nevillesgirl it doesn't make much sense. Cho shouldn't be at Hogwarts in DH, because she is a year older than Harry. But she's in the book. Mistake?