Hey all you Romione fans. I hope you enjoyed the first part of the story. I'd love to know what you guys think of the sequel so far.
Post Away!

-Karina

It's been a while since the first post so:

Hey, I don't mean to be rude, but maybe you just haven't seen this...
But some feedback might be nice, I am working on Chapter 2 and will probably have that up soon. And if you haven't found this thread yet...or haven't found the time to post feedback...well, just a little *nudge*.

Thanks,
-Karina

Karina, I can't believe I'm the first to leave feedback! Your fic is so good! Your style of writing pulled me right in!

First off, I love Ron and Hermione together. They're so perfect! So whenever I read a fic about them, I get all excited! So that alone caught my interest.

I can't believe they didn't see each other for three years! That's crazy! The bums! Well, I'm glad Ron went over to Hermione's house to see her! It's so sweet! *Sigh*

This is really good and I hope you update again soon! Please let me know via pm when you do!

~Chelsea~

Wow thanks. I was really starting to think that nobody liked it, but I'm glad you did. I wasn't really sure if I should do a sequel to Lost in Your Eyes but what kind of ending would that one have been. I decided to do the sequel as a sort of lead-up to the epilogue of DH.

Thanks again,
-Karina

Karina,

Thanks for letting me know you updated! Your new chapter was awesome! I really loved it!

First I love how Hermione went to Weasley Wizard Wheezes to talk to George. I love George and I was so excited to hear about him! And Angelina! I'm so happy they're married. You have no idea. They're so cute together! George was so good to Hermione. I am surprised she went to him, but I'm glad she did.

Haha! Ron. He is too funny. He was yelling at Ginny and it turned out to be Hermione! Haha! That's great! Oh my gosh! They kissed! That is so adorable! *Sniffle* I love it!

Great job writing! I can't wait until you update again!

Chelsea

Yep. Glad you liked it. George will play a more crucial role in the story so I thought I might as well just go ahead an re-introduce him. Thanks for leaving feedback, it means a lot.

-Karina

Karina! I'm so excited you updated! Whenever I see a pm from you when I sign on I know there's been an update and I get all excited!

Awww.....The whole time I was reading I had a gawky smile on my face. My sister came in and was like, what is your problem? Haha! It was so cute! I love Ron and Hermione together! They are so sweet! They're so loyal to each other! I love it! It was a wonderful chapter! Please update again soon!!

Your faithful fan,
Chelsea

Aww. I have a fan? Wow. Well, glad you liked it, I'm a little brain-dead at the moment so I don't really know when I'll have the next update up. But I'll make sure and let you know about it! Thanks for leaving feedback when nobody else does. Appreciate it!
-Karina

you just got another fan

Oh you updated! And your chapter was awesome! I really loved it! It had so much in it. There were a lot of things in it that I really really liked!

I liked how Ron and Hermione visited Harry, but I felt so bad for Ron since he was jealous when Harry hugged Hermione. But I liked it. I think it's really sweet. He loves her so much!

I was also so excited that Ron met Hermione's parents! I loved this part.



Haha! Mrs. Granger is so cute! I love it! I also have always pictured her really short, so I thought that was funny.

Aww, Ron is so adorable! I'm sorry! I just love him! He loves her, but he doesn't think he deserves her! I hope he realizes he does soon!

Great chapter! Keep them coming!

Your fan,
Chelsea

Hi, Kari! I've just read until chapter 2, but I wanted to leave you a little feedback now, before I go.
I really like how you made things happen; I almost felt like crying when I read that stupid words from Ron, how could he have done that? (I'm not attacking you, of course, I'm just refering to Ron, and I liked your idea of a painful continuing )
And Hermione's cowardice ... oh, it was great.
Just a little thing: the final meeting. I think you kind of rushed things a bit, I mean, if you were making a reluctant and afraid Hermione, it would have been nicer a more emotive reaction whne Ron Apparated in front of her, like a bit of crying or an awkward silence.
But I really like your story, and I'll keep reading!

sign_keeper: More readers, yay!

Chelsea: Thanks! I was sort of unsure about that chappie. I didn't know if I should bring Harry in so soon, but it's good to know that it worked out! Yes I agree, Ron is adorable . So glad you liked it, and I will try to remember not to forget to update!

DeSs: Oh my gosh! Thanks for reading it! Yea I was kind of going for a Ron hurt her, he was pretty much a jerk, but I tried to make it so that it works out. Yeah you're probably right I was trying to go for a hesitant angle, but I don't know. I wasn't too proud of that chapter to be honest. But still, muchas gracias for the suggestion. And the feedback! I will try to update asap.

Laterz,
-Karina-

Oh, Hermione's letter were so sad. I wish she wouldn't totally blame him. She didn't really go over and see him either. So really, it was both of their faults. And now he's completely blaming himself. And he's leaving. Poor Ron! This line was so sweet......



*Sniffle* I hope he isn't gone too long! Poor Ron. Poor Hermione! That's too bad. It had better work out! If it doesn't, I'm blaming you!

But it was a great chapter! Nice job!

Your loyal fan,
Chelsea

Oh, it's so sweet! Again, you make me feel sad about Hermione's feelings and the way things developed But I'm sure Ron will mend everything he made soon
I like your fic!
It was great how Hermione asked George for advice, and how her mother told Ron about the letters ... you made a poet of her! It's very beautiful.
Waiting for more chapters!!!

Hey guys thanks for the feedback.

DeSs: I see you're now all caught up. Awesome! Glad you like it so far, yeah, George will become quite an important character in this story. I'm glad you liked Hermione's poetic side. I really tried my hardest to still make it seem like her. But yes, Ron is gone and will be for a some time. I thank you again for the feedy and I'll try to update soon.

Chels: Hey, loyal fan of mine . Yes, her letters were sad...but that's how she felt so its appropriate enough. I'm not sure if it sounds like them but I did try. Please don't blame me, I will try my best to make things work out (which of course they will ). Thanks again for the feedback, I'll let you know when I update.

-Karina

Hooray! You updated!

There was a lot of emotion in this chapter and you conveyed it really well. When I had finished reading I realized that I was frowning and suddenly feeling distressed. I had to remind myself that I was in a happy mood. Great work! Wow, and they both went to Harry. Surprising. And that Hermione stopped talking to Ginny. But great job! I enjoyed it. *Shakes head to remove frown* Let me know when you update again!

Chelsea

Heavens, it's just so sad ... so sad! The hope in Hermione's eyes... Oh, my dear! Well, I read this as I was writing a pm, and I thought I would have to leave it to enojy it more, but ... I couldn't! I'm so stuck. What's going on next? Where are Ron's feelings going? What, where, when, who? Update soon!

Aww, guys thanks for leaving feedback. Yeah, they both went to Harry. So many questions Dess well I'll try to answer them as best as I can. I will try to update soon.

-Karina

Thanks for telling me you updated, Karina.

Oh, this chapter was so sad. They both miss each other so badly. And Ron was at Harry's place. I didn't think he was. I'm sorry, but Ginny's annoying. She still acts so young even though she's.......what.......19? 20? Something like that. She's not very helpful to Hermione. Poor girl. She's suffering. I hope things work out soon! I'm so sad for both of them!

Update soon!

Chelsea

Really? She seems younger? hmm. I might have to work on her maturity a little then, darn and here I thought I was doing a good job of interpreting her character. Oh well. Yep, Ron is at Harry's place; I'm sad for them too. I guess you'll just have to wait and see what happens.

-Karina

Ahh! Karnia! I'm sorry! I didn't mean that in a bad way! I'm so sorry if I've offended you! What I meant was I don't like Ginny. Period. Not because of how you interpret her, just in general! You do a great job! She's always seemed immature to me in the forth book and beyond and that's all I mean. It's nothing against you, I just personally don't like Ginny. You are doing a great job! Don't worry about me. I'm just weird.

Feeling horrible,
Chelsea

Hey everyone, just thought I'd extend a formal apology for not updating. It's just been taking a while longer than I expected to come up with anything with which to continue the story, I just don't know how to follow up on it. However I will try my hardest to have an update up soon.

And Chels, no worries...personally, I don't like Ginny too much either.

Laterz,
-Karina

Nice chapter! I've been waiting for you to update soon, and here it is! But don't worry: expectation rises the longest you take to upload it, mwahaha
I agree with Chelsea in that it would be good if you work on Ginny's maturity. I do like her, and I don't think she's immature, she was only very young and HP has taught us everybody has got fails, and I think the reason of this could be that you're still seeing her in a childish way (she in a childish way, not you). But you still have got a lot of things to learn, as everybody has, and you will soon improve more and more. Your fic is great!
Aw, poor Hermione. She's been suffering so much! I wonder what are they going to do now? Will she forgive him? I'd slap him, firstly, then I'll see.

Oh wow! The world just came crashing down for Ron! Oh boy! Haha, Dess, I think she'll slap him too. Haha! But really, when Ron went to close the door and he shouted "Hermione!" my jaw dropped! Uhoh for Ron.

But this was a really great chapter! I can't wait until the next so I can see what happens with them.

Chelsea

DeSs: Oh, well don't I feel horrible. Sure I will try to get better at Ginny's character...she is important to the story and I guess I really do have my work cut out for me. And I do see your point she was a bit young and she's older now. On a brighter note, I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks for the feedback.

Chels: Yeah, thanks. Personally I'd slap him too, but when you really think about it, Harry was the one who chose to lie to her about Ron's whereabouts. Well I'll just have to wait and see what happens. I'll try to have an update up before I leave for christmas.

-Karina-

Great chapter!! I've been reading this fanfic for a while, but I just thought to give feedback now ... You're doing a fab job!

Write next bit soon pleaseeee

Oh hey, well thanks for taking the time to leave some feedback, honey~pie, really appreciate it. Glad you like the story so far. I'll try to update it soon. If I ever get around to it, I'll probably have an update ready to post sometime. But then again, since I am leaving for the Holidays I don't know if I'll get to update at all. Keep reading though.

-Karina

Hey Karina!

Thanks for letting me know you updated. Aww, what a sad chapter. Poor Hermione. She and Ron are in such a dilemma. I feel bad for both of them. I hope they're smart and work it out! They're made for each other!!

Hope you had a nice Christmas! I'll pm you soon!

Chelsea

Hey Chels my x-mas was cool, I got a few presents but most of all I enjoyed spending it with the fam. Anyway thanks for leaving feedback, I'm sure they will work it out sooner or later. I don't really know how much longer I can drag out the misery. It's making me miserable and I'm the author. So you can count on them making up soon.

-Karina

Yay! I'm so excited that you updated! I really like this chapter. Both Ron and Hermione get advice. I really loved when Ginny quoted Hermione.



I thought it was very fitting and I actually admire Ginny for saying it. It surprised me that Ron went to George for advice, but I'm glad he did. And we got to see Angelina. I love her! George gave some good advice too. I love how the chapter ended too.

Keep writing!
-Chelsea

Kari! At last you updated! I must say I still like this story, and you use really wise dialogues. The only thing I must say is, that it'd be great if you ask somebody to be your beta, because this time you've had several spelling mistakes and it's a shame that such a nice story has them. Otherwise ... keep on!

Chels: Hey! I'm glad you liked it. I made you admire Ginny? That's an awesome compliment. I thought I should be fair to her, and let her give Hermione some friendly help with her brother. I'll try to update again soon.

Dess: Thanks. Yeah, usually I go through and proofread my chapters as best as I can before I post them. But a beta does sound like a good idea. I understand how it can be a little problematic when there are spelling mistakes, so I'll try to do better.

Thanks for the feedback guys.
-Karina

Oh oh oh! Karina! They're both making a move! You worded the chapter so well. The feeling was so there! I really enjoyed reading it, but ah! How can you end a chapter like that? I'm going to be on edge until you update again!

-Chelsea

Yep, I was sort of going for a cliff hanger there at the end. Thanks for the compliment, and yeah this is a very big step for them both, but since I still haven't quite decided what she will say...and do, I will make sure that you are on edge for as long as is humanely possible.

I'll try to have an update up real soon,
-Karina

Yay, it was about time they put on their ... pants robes and face the situation! Im eager to see it going! Don't worry, it happens to me too that sometimes I don't know how to follow a story... frustrating, but you'll figure out!
Good luck with that!

You got that right, I hate having writer's block...ay-ay-ay. Sometimes it gets a little annoying. Anyhow I thought that it was about time that they realize they weren't kids anymore. It's just kind of hard to come up with dialogue you know? Thanks for the support and feedback.

Laterz,
Karina

Oh, geez, Kari, they said it, they said it! You nearly made me cry! (well, I would have, indeed, if I was weepier)
I liked this chapie really much despite it was too short; it was really touching! I can't imagine what's going on next ... what comes after everything is forgiven, after so much pain? Reading your story, I imagine Hermione and Ron's pain like the Cruciatus curse. It's so painful!
Update soon!!

K! I nearly broke down myself!

That was such a sweet chapter. Aww, it was so nice! And they finally said they loved each other! It didn't really matter that it was short. You captured everything. I loved it!

-C

Dess: Yep. Those three small words. I hope they didn't come too late. I'm touched that you think it was touching. Yeah Ron and Hermione sure did go through a lot of pain. I'll try to update as soon as I possibly can.

Chels: Wow, it must have been a more emotional chapter than I had originally thought. And yes it wasn't a suitable enough length, but I am so glad that you think it captured the moment well.

Thanks guys,
-Karina

K!

Hey! Sorry I didn't leave feedback right away. I was wondering why they were going Hogsmeade. I have to say, as much as I don't like Harry and Ginny together, you made it aweful sweet. I really liked how Harry asked Ron first. Or, told him. Haha. I liked Ginny's short reply.



It was nice. Now Ron needs to follow Harry's example!

Update soon!

-'Sea

Sea, yeah well, I tried to make it sweet. Let's face it Harry likes, no scratch that loves Ginny and that's not likely to change....so I decided to have him set an example for Ron. Which hopefully he will follow! We know Ron doesn't take hints very well . But thanks for leaving feedy, I will try to have a new chappie up soon.

K

Rina, I was just wondering when you were going to update again and poof! You updated!

What an exciting chapter! I'm actually super excited about Harry and Ginny's wedding! I never thought I'd actually hear myself say that. I've never been to a wedding rehearsal before. But weddings are so fun! I'm looking forward to seeing Harry and Ginny's. And hopefully by that time, Ron will have fully caught onto the hint that is staring him in the face and make a move with Hermione! Very nice chapter, K. It's a very nice story and you do a wonderful job telling it.

-Sea

Aww, thanks Sea, I'm blushing...really? I never thought I would actually be excited at the prospect of Harry and Ginny's wedding either...but let's just say some pretty interesting things will come from it. *wink, wink* I'm really phsyched that you liked this chapter, I didn't really think it was all that good if you want to know the truth. Anyway, thank you so much for the feedy dude! Talk to you soon!

I'll update as soon as I can!
-Rina

Rina! Oh my goodness! I loved this chapter! L-O-V-E-D! By the end I had this huge gawky stupid looking smile across my face and I didn't even realize! Hooray! Ron proposed! *Fire crackers pop! Balloons float! Confetti falls!* Yay! Yes, that was a little dramatic, but I wanted to show how excited I am!

Ginny's dress sounds pretty. I thought it was nice that Hermione went with her to pick it out! That would be so fun!

But the scene with her and Ron was so cute! I couldn't believe when he got it out! Well I could believe, but you understand! Oh it was a perfect chapter, Rina! I truly did love it! And Hermione's right, Ginny's excitement is contagious!

Excellent job, Rina!

-Sea-saw

Sea-saw:
Yay! Happy to oblige. A little drama is always good. You can never be too dramatic *adopts voice of reason to explain to friend that it is okay to be a bit dramatic sometimes* Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, I tried to differentiate between Harry and Ron in their ways of proposing. Harry's was a little more thought-through and organized while Ron's was just basically spontaneous. I like that you believe I am capable of making things cute. I thought it was pretty sweet too when I was writing it.

*thanks friend for leaving feedback and informs general public that she will update soon*

-Rina

P.S. I actually got the idea for Ginny's dress from a mix of a really awesome dress I saw when I went out shopping a while back and JKR's description of Fleur's dress. To be completely honest with you I have absolutely no idea of how I am going to put together a chapter about a wedding! (soon to come).

Laterz Everyone!

It's the first replay I do to this story, well let say any story. This is a great story, it caught my attention some weeks back and from then on I can't stay away. Hope you post soon. Oh and that last chapter was amazing, the whole Ron proposal, it is so him. Very cool!!

Oh hey well, thanks. I'm flattered. I'm so glad my story caught your eye. Welcome to VTM hope you are enjoying yourself here. So, back to the feedback, "the whole Ron proposal, it is so him." Thanks, I try. Well, I'll try to have the next one up soon. Thanks for the feedy, keep reading!

-Karina

Rina!

I'm so excited that you updated. You have no idea how much I was in the mood to read a fanfic. And then I got your pm. You are a mind reader. Why didn't you tell me?

Great chapter! Everyone is getting so excited about the wedding! Including me! Haha! You did a good job showing just how happy everyone is. I actually loved George's speech! It was so heart-felt and beautiful! I really thought it was nice! He has very good insight. And the fact that Ron was there taking in everything he was saying was good too. Ron is so cute!

I can't wait for the wedding!

-Sea-Saw

Sea-saw!

I'm so happy that you liked the chapter. Yay! I am excited too but I have absolutely no idea how I am going to write a wedding!?!? Gah. I hope I can pull it off. I am glad that you liked George's speech, I tried my hardest to come up with something 'insightful' for him to say, so it's good to hear that I did an okay job with that.

I can't wait for the wedding either!
-Rina

Rina-Fina!

*Wipes a stray tear out of her eye.* That was such a sweet chapter, Rina! You really captured everything! You pulled off the wedding perfectly! Again, I had the gawky smile on my face without realizing it. Haha. It was great!

During the preparation right before the ceremony, I couldn't help but get excited! The characters emotions were really clear and kind of contagious. Holy cow, I laughed so hard when Hermione pointed out that Ginny would be living with Harry. Haha! Ron is so clueless! So Ron too. I'm sure he really did that at their wedding. Very funny.

Ron's speech was cute, but it was adorable when he proposed to Hermione! Oh, it was so sweet! I loved it! This was an amazing chapter! Seriously, I think it's my favorite!

:Sea-Saw: