Please leave me feedback, I want to know what you think. It's my first fanfic so be gentle.

Hey,

Well I read the entire story and I must tell you it's rather good . I'm not really in to all the punctuation stuff and I couldn't care less but it looks well. The story is wonderful. I really like this thing, I was writhing a story like this a while ago, I never posted it though. I never really liked the fact Draco was married to Arthingy but I don't mind her here. So I'm looking forward to read more of this story. (I really wished I could write as fast as you, I'm not really a fast poster My story has been left on his own for almost two weeks, I'm so bad. )

So I'm looking forward and bey

Greets Rox

Well it's me again. I just read the last bit and it's good. Although I have one question.

did he mean Bellatrix being killed by Molly, what I presume most, or is it someone else?

I'll hope you'll post soon again. (I really hope some other people leave feedback as well. )

Greets Rox

Yes, I mean Molly killing Bella.

You have to be kidding me this can't end not yet. Not now. I really liked it but I hate the end, I don't want it to end. But if you really want to I can't stop it. I already started reading your new thing so maybe I'll leave some feedback there.

Greets Rox

I agree, I need to write more, but I need a little more time to come up with ideas. You may have to wait a bit, but there will hopefully be some more coming...

Thx for all your feedback.

does anyone know how to create a feedback link to their fanfic? b/c I've just got mine apporved by mods and I can't figure out how! I noticed i had 3 replies and I'd really like to see them, so if you could tell me how, that'd be great!

Basically, while you're actually writing/editing your post, open a new window, go to your personal feedback thread, copy the web address, create a hyperlink in your post (using the little world symbol) and when it asks for a ULR, just paste. Make sure you have created a new topic on Fanfiction feedback especially for your fic beforehand!

If it doesn't make sense, just PM me.

Ellie
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i loved the story so much that i spent about a minute after reading it proclaming how badly i wanted to kill you for leaving it there. Are Scorpius and Albus friends? Did Draco send the note before he was captured or after? Pls update soon, i can't wait that long.

Lottie
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hey,

I'm so sorry that it has taken me such a long time to read your story . I actually started again today and I read it all in once, wonderful.
One Question, Who is that man? I really want to know, I hope it's no Lestrange cause I'm a Lestrange fan (Rodolphus and Rabastan that is, Bellatrix doesn't really fit the picture ) but if it is I'm fine with it.
I really hope you'll post soon again and once again sorry that it has been so long.

Greets Rox

. Sorry, but it kinda is a Lestrange (I think). I'm not really definite yet. I thought it was going to be Rodolphus, but I'm now pretty sure he's dead, so it's probably Rabastan...

Anyway, hopefully there'll be an update soon, but I'm been so [would be MOD deleted if I actually put it] busy it's not even funny!

Ellie
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Well, that's going to be fun . I'm actually a big fan of Rabastan and it will (if it is going to be him) be nice to see him as the total opposite as I see him and write about him. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
What's that all about Rodolphus being dead? Where did you find that? Did I really read the books that badly? This can't be true...

I completely understand the lack of time. I'm extremely busy myself, with my Christmas exams at the moment (I don't know how they call these exams at your country but here it is called like that ). So I understand and if you update please let me know, so I can read and leave feedback.


Greets Rox

I only remember it saying that he was badly hurt, but he wasn't mentioned at the batlle of hogwarts, and basically all the others were. I just sort of presumed...



Ugh. Yeah. At my school, we get summer exams in mid-June and it's an absolute NIGHTMARE! Good luck with it all!

Ellie
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P.S. I work through my story updates in an order: I have to finish one that I'm working on at the moment and then this one is next, so hopefully in the next week or so...

so good! what going to happen when they discover that its not split personality? what went wrong? cant wait to see what happens! please update soon!

Lottie
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Ellie, this story is fantastic! I've only just read the first 10 chapters, but I'm loving it! I can't imagine how come I've never come across it before. Anyway, I really like the plot with Scorpious and Albus trying to be friends. I'm obviously behind, so I don't yet know if Albus will blame Draco for his mom being missing, but I can't wait to find out!

I'm thoroughly enjoying your writing style and all your twists and turns. Are you sure your only 13??? You write like you're much older. I'll post again when I'm all caught up, but I just couldn't wait to tell you how much I like this fic!

Lisa

Yay, I'm all caught up! I'm so glad that none of the Malfoy's had anything to do with Ginny's kidnapping. Come to find out, Malfoy's were kidnapped as well. That evil guy was creepy! Did you ever decide who he was?

I really like where you're going with this. Now everyone will be stuck in St. Mungo's together. I can't wait to see how it all plays out! Poor Scorpious, though. It must suck being possessed by the Dark Lord!

Well done,
Lisa

lisasnape, thank you so much for you feedback. I'm glad you like my story . Anyway, it's my Easter holidays at the moment, so there should be an update soon to come...

Ellie
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Ellie, I loved chapter 17! The first 3 paragraphs about "The beauty of the Permanent Spell Damage Ward" cracked me up. "I feel like I'm back in Azkaban..." That must have come from Lucius!

Poor, dear Scorpious though. I really feel bad for him. I wonder what he'll do if he's released. But I'm sure you'll tell us, won't you?!

Great Job,
Lisa

I just read chapter 18, Ellie. Great job with Voldemort's speech inside Scorpius' head! His evilness came through loud and clear. I'm looking forward to Scorpius being back at Hogwarts and running into Albus again. That will be very interesting...

Lisa

just been rereading it and... THE WILI STRIKES AGAIN!!! yeah. basically, think it's good, and that you should try and update soon what with the unlimited hours of freedom you have stretching before you over the summer, with no exams or schools, just you, the computer, and Harry Potter (how much fun is this going to be?)

Lottie
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hi, me again. thats so good! honestly. i really really cant wait to find out what happens, and where your going with this (although i have a vague idea). please update soon

lottie
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halo, thought i 'd let you know that I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there, got the message? anyway, love it, and think it's really cool that Harry still has the connection even though Voldemort is sharing Scorpius' mind and Scorpius has become so mean! then again, he is a Malfoy being controlled by Voldemort, so what more did i expect?

Lottie
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I just finished reading the last two chapters. I'm not sure why, but I never got my emails saying that you had updated. Luckily, I received the email regarding the feedback thread, so I checked things out! ( Thanks for posting here, snape_rox_my_sox, or I never would have known anything!)

They were both great! I loved seeing the way Voldemort is taking over Scorpius' mind and actions and I especially loved Harry's dream. I'm hoping that now Harry will recover and be able to help Scorpius. Though I always enjoy your writing, the last two chapters have been exceptional!

Lisa

snape_rox_my_socks -

lisasnape - Thank you for the feedback. You're always so nice, and make me feel all happy!

So I'm doing a round of my other stories first, but should be able to get anohter update up in the next couple of weeks.

Ellie
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