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Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Please tell me what you think
snape_rox_my_socks
that's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! biggrin.gif hurry up and put the nxt bit up! pls sad.gif
snape_rox_my_socks
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! biggrin.gif
snape_rox_my_socks
Amzing but a bit confusing. pls put the next bit up soon
snape_rox_my_socks
love it! are you going to go through the years and explain how each one changes, or just skip to the big bits? please update soon, i want to know what happens.

lottie
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snape_rox_my_socks
love the story. I like the way you described how the evil people have all changed and i like the Weasley Family Christmas. Update soon, i want to know what happens with Harry and Cedric.

Lottie xxx
snape_rox_my_socks
love it. Wat does Voldemort look like? is he a proper person, or not? i really like the way you say that its all the hufflepuffs and how Voldemorts really annoyed at having hufflepuffs as followers. pls put the next bit up soon and tell me when you have

lottie
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snape_rox_my_socks
love it! so funny. Bellatrix picking flowers. Theodore trying to beat Percy at Scrabble laugh.gif. Are they still inside the tree? really really really love it. post again soon!


Lottie
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The Happy Dementor
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Lucius Malfoy helping Mr Weasley take apart a Muggle motorbike... Rodolphus and Rabastan Lestrange having joint therapy... Amycus and Alecto Carrow running a Muggle hairdressing salon... Fenrir Greyback teaching a werewolf psychology course... Yaxely working as Senior Undersectretary to the minister... Bellatrix Lestrange picking flowers...

"ENOUGH!"



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Draco Malfoy helping Ron get rid of a rather large gnome... Crabbe and Goyle playing Dungeons and Dragons... Blaise Zabini telling everyone at the Weasley's a hilarious story... Theodore Nott trying to beat Percy at Scrabble...

"ALL RIGHT, I GET IT!"


laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif That was the first bit of your story I read and I laughed so hard my Mum said I was too tiered and should go to bed. I had no idea about them all being good really and didn't understand a single thing but it was soooooo funny I had to go back and read the rest. laugh.gif Amazing idea having them all read the books before hand it really makes you think differently if you know what I mean...they're all different but not unrecognisably different....ok apart from Bellatrix....she was unrecognisably different laugh.gif Bellatrix Lestrange picking flowers......*laughs again causing mother to shoot evils at me* too funny to say...what a random idea to. Ahhhh but random is by far the best.

Great fic! keep it up!
The Fifth Marauder
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This is like utter brilliance!!! The best bit is the bit where Voldemort looks at what the Death Eaters have been doing! laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif Bellatrix picking flowers - Priceless!

Oh and "The Information Eaters"! XD laugh.gif
Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Yay, more feedback!

snape_rox_my_socks: You know I love ya!

The Happy Dementor: I sooo agree, random rocks! Thanks for the feedback!

The Fifth Marauder: Utter brilliance? My story? [checks that there is no alternate Alastorlet_and_Proud! standing behind me] Thank you!

I'll update soon!

Ellie
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snape_rox_my_socks
so funny! you know what i think of that already but i didnt know the last bit! keep going with how you are, to funny and good for words. love it!

lottie
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The Happy Dementor
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"You’re not supposed to insult the flowers in any way shape or form."

"But-"started Voldemort.

"HE BURNT THEM," wailed Bellatrix.


...ah...I love reading this fic after a long stressful day. It makes all my stress ... dissapear.
happy.gif ahhhhhhhh

I love what you have done with Bella. Just love it. Defninitly keep up what your'e doing now. I couldn't spot any faults so write more soon because....I have nothing else to read and I like it! laugh.gif

THD
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snape_rox_my_socks
i love it? You know i do.
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"You know", said Voldemort, leaving the Malfoys to start a heated debate and staring thoughtfully at Harry. "There must have been a reason I called all these people here... It can't just have been for a nice chat..."
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"nope, it's not coming back to me."
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"Thanks for coming," said Voldemort leading him to the trapdoor. "hope to see you again soon"
So funny! Have to go now because mum's yelling at me, but please update soon!

Lottie
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mugglelovrspew
OMG! This is the 1st fan fiction I have fully read. It is one of the most utterly confusing, but so halariously written fan fiction. I mean, just so weird. You're a very descriptive writer. Add more please!
snape_rox_my_socks
so funny! i love the way dumbledore turns up and Ron's like "what?" its so funny! does dumbledore tell them? wat happens? please update soon!

so funny! i love the way dumbledore turns up and Ron's like "what?" its so funny! does dumbledore tell them? wat happens? please update soon!
lancelot243
Hi! I just read your whole fanfic, and i have to say, it is very confusing. But I like it alot!! I feel kinda bad for harry, i know he had a hard life before, but he was special. You know what i mean? Obviously he still will be im sure. Well, anyway, I thought it was good and im really excited to see your next installment. Cant wait to read more!!!
Alastorlet_and_Proud!
lancelot243: Thanks for the feedback. I know what you mean about being sorry for Harry, but you can't just lose your 'chosen one' abilities, so I'm pretty sure he's going to get more and more confident as he goes along.

Keep reading, guys. Hopefully, I should have an update up, at latest, this weekend.

Ellie
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snape_rox_my_socks
thats so good. I love the way that you cant talk to Bella about Voldemort. And the way Snape trys really hard to get out of goin to Voldemort. I love the idea of a wizard exchange. So funny!!!!!!!!!!
lottie
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snape_rox_my_socks
really good! especially the way that no one from Durmstrang are really confused please update soon

Lottie
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lancelot243
Interesting chapter...thats so wierd that they TEACH dark arts, thats crazy! Its going to be an interesting year for the hogwarts bunch, i hope they are up for it, but i guess we will see. I know you havent posted in awhile, so i hope to see an update soon!!
The Happy Dementor
wow

you are so funny...Bella has to be my fave in this fic.

I havent read this fic in sooo long that I had to read it all again and if possible it seemed even better than last time. Great updates Ellie! I loved the bit with Bella and the flower burning session...how could Voldy do that to her? tongue.gif and......Harry forgot who Grindelwald was?

Please update quickly because I need something good to read. happy.gif
Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Thank you for the feedback!! It makes my day!!!


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Harry forgot who Grindelwald was?


Sorry, I should have made that clearer. He DIDN'T forget, he was just sort of... pretending.

Anyway, hopefully I'll have an update ready soon.

Ellie
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The Happy Dementor
aaahhhhhhh! Clever!

YAY!
The Fifth Marauder
Oh LOL great job so far! Its amazing, especially the Hufflepuffs xD "Information Eaters"! This is the first fan fiction I have liked Harry's character in, nice work!

Or, and its Grindelwald, not Grindenwald xDD
snape_rox_my_socks
so good! and Snape told Voldemort! He TOLD him! just one question. i thought Snape couldn't tell Voldemort where the Order was because of the fidelius (sp?) charm? anyway, please update soon. i cant wait to find out what Dumbledore talks to Harry about. except, upon reflection, itll be the horcruxes, wont it?

Lottie
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snape_rox_my_socks
nice update. they found a horcrux! yay! i like the way that Harry still doesn't trust Snape. anyway, keep up the good work.

Lottie
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