Pease tell me what you think, I love getting feedback!

amazing!!! hurry up and post again!

ok let me just check i understand it --- this is a world where the harry potter books were published and all the characters know about it but lucius and narcissa got their daughter deleted from the story??

it's really good so far by the way --- carry on writing!! xx

Yes, you've got it. Thx for the feedback. I'll post again soon.

amazing! i love the part where Harry and Vespia seem to be friends. it almost seems like Vespia will be in any house other than slytherin. its really gd.
pls update soon

Lottie

Good job! It's a very interesting story. The Harry/ Vespia thing is really nice but on the other hand I really feel sorry for her cause of her parents, don't get me wrong I'm a huge fan of Luci and Cissy but this is actually the first time I see them like this nasty people, good job. Please post soon again.


Greets Rox

So Vespia is going in Slytherin? She is a Malfoy then. But at the same time, she's freinds with Harry Potter. Please say they end up like best friends and Draco, Luci and cissy are all really ****ed off at her. It would be so interesting. Loving the story btw.

Lottie
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so funny! Her problems and the way that Snape hates her but loves Draco! loving the story! Keep it coming!

Lottie
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hahahaha i love the potion. the way draco and vespia interact. this is a good story, keep it up

the potion is so funny. the way Draco wants to laugh and Vespia gets really annoyed at him is funny. the way they interact as siblings is really good. try to update soon when your on a beach in St. Lucia

Lottie
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Oh.
My.
Merlin.

This is awesome! I love it! I was a bit disappointed that Vespia was a Slytherin, but we can't have everything in life, can we? I really hope that Vespia will get along with Ron and we can have a Golden Quartet (sp?) instead of a Golden Trio.

Great job, by the way!

Yay! Feedback!

I'm really sorry if I don't reply to everything. I do read it all, and I'll try to write back as much as I can!


snape_rox_my_socks: What can I say? You'd just know what I was going to say anyway... Because we can communicate in a strange way, without speaking... Because we have amazing magical powers... (or perhaps because we are both peculiar in the head).

Robin A.B. Weasley: Thanks for the feedback! I'm usually pro-Malfoy myself, but I kinda like writing this story, because I force myself to see them from another angle.

KIARA925: Thanks for letting me know what you think! It's nice to know that my work is appreciated!

Sister to the Dark Lord: Thanks so much! Golden Quartet... Hmmm, I like that. I like that a lot. I might use that...

Keep reading, I'll try to be a bit faster updating next time!

Ellie
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Draco Lucius Malfoy!

Just because Vespia is being sensible doesn't mean that you have to go and write to "Father"!

Yay, great job, I can't wait to see Vespia defy every single Slytherin and turn the Golden Trio into the Golden Quartet!

(PS: Glad you like the Golden Quartet idea, it'd be awesome if you do put that in)

I agree with sister to the dark lord. It is kinda harsh. Ah well. Its funny the way Harry doesnt take whatll happen to vespia seriously. Malfoys reaction to Harry being on the quidditch team is funny. Update soon

Lottie
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Really good! I like Lucius' letter a LOT! I like the way you make Vespia stay away from Harry, and then how shes in the bathroom with Hermione and the troll.
Please update soon!

Lottie
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this story is amazing! please post soon

Amazing! really good. i cant believe she lied to get the gryffindors out of trouble. thats odd. anyway, please update soon, i cant wait to find out where this is going

Lottie
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i love this fanfic please update soon
Kirsty x

It was amazing-I really like it. The character Vespia is really interesting-I can't wait to write more!!! It's really interesting and very different to the normal Harry, Ron or Hermione. Also, I love how the Malfoy house is described-as if it was actually in the books.

Vespia's a really cool character, and Hermione helping her was really interesting. I really cant see where this is going (which you could say is a little odd, but there we are) and I cant wait to find out.

Lottie
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that is so good! i love the way that her stroke of genius (and i can see where that has come from) actually gets her out of trouble. i also like the way that she wants to have an argument with the family portrait, but realises this might not be a good idea. please update soon, im dying to know what happens!

Lottie
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Oh my gosh, I can't believe I just found this fic! It's amazing! I just read the whole thing and...Wow! What a great idea for a story. I really love it and I love the sibling interaction between Draco and Vespia. I've enjoyed every chapter and gotten many laughs, but the biggest laugh was when Vespia suspected that Snape was on drugs!

I love the way you are bringing us through first year from an entirely different point of view. Vespia is a great character, by the way. Oh this is soooo good! I can't wait to read more.

Lisa

Oh, wow, thank you all so much for the amazing feedback!

snape_rox_my_socks - Thanks for all the feedback (if I haven't already mentioned it to you )

harry potter freak - Thanks for your feedback; it's nice to know what you write is appreciated!

Joey Ravenclaw - Thanks for your feedback! I'm glad you like my story - and I'm glad you think I'm portraying the Malfoys accurately.

lisasnape - Aww, thank you! I'm glad you like the character of Vespia, and it's great to know that you like the idea!

I'll hopefully have something new soon for you all. Please keep reading!

Ellie
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Grandmother Malfoy is a terror! She's exactly what I would have expected Lucius' mother to be like. You did a great job portraying her. I absolutely loved the way Draco and Vespia dragged themselves down the stairs as though they were facing their death! That was so funny! Good for Vespia for sticking up to her grandmother like that! I just hope she doesn't get into to much trouble for it. I loved it!

Lisa

Fantastic, I love Vespia so much and I can't wait to read more !!!:D

Ellie, the Christmas card chapter was amazing! My email updates weren't working, so I didn't know that you had posted. I just read it now and I was literally laughing out loud! The gifts that Vespia received were so pathetic, but incredible humorous! Oh, and Draco's diamond encrusted chess set was classic! You have a wonderful imagination and a true flair for comedic writing!

The ending was great! So much tension over Vespia and Harry's friendship. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great, great, great job!

Hugs,
Lisa