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happy-potter
Hey there!
Well. This is the place to leave feedback for my story, 10 Flaws I love About You. I'll listen to everything you've got to say. Thanks!

- Vicki
Lulu-lolo
Hey Vicki smile.gif

This was a really good one. I just loved this:
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“You like people for their good sides, but love them for their flaws.”
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I actually found that this was a rather profound one of yours. And it was so funny. It was just really great. And brilliant when Lily stunned James.

The title just reminded me of the movie "10 things I hate about you", it was just in reverse. Amazing.

I absolutely loved this one. I think I might be reading it over and over again, I think it's got much more to it than I caught in this first reading.

- Louise

PS: I know what a rollercoaster it has been for you this weekend, you've got my sympathy
ravensblood
I really enjoyed your clever use of the ordinary day to day rather than the obvious things to love someone over. I wanted to keep reading to see which way you were going to take James. Lily was fantastic with her witty comments. Thank you for a good read.
Nymphadora Lupin
Hmm, I thought I'd posted feedback on this already huh.gif

Ah wey, I'm posting now happy.gif I absolutely loved this. It's so great how you can think up these fics, and this one was so nice. The reasons are so little and somewhat meaningless, but when a person notices such little things about someone then it really does show they care. You showed that so well smile.gif

Your fics are brilliant Vicki, that's no exaggeration, and I really want to read more! Your one shots are just great and I love reading them, cos it's always something a bit different happy.gif
Keep writing love biggrin.gif

~Amy <33
happy-potter
Hey!

Lulu-lolo Thanks louise! I like the quote too, but I actually think I stole it from somewhere, though I can't remember where... Hmm. Hm, I was actually trying to make a distance to the movie, btu I guess I didn't succeed. It doesn't matter either, the movie is great. Just read it again! Ha, sometimes I even do so, just to look at what I wrote, maybe think of things I could have done different, or just to get in the mood to write something with the same mood tongue.gif Thanks for the nice review!
ravensblood: Well, it is the small things in the every day people tend to love anbout each other, not the huge things one might first notice. Lily was great, wasn't she? Didn't want it, but still knowing she'd lost. I have a soft spot for making Lily like this if you ever check any of my other one-shots, she'll probably be a little like this. Thanks for the lovely review!
Nymphadora Lupin: Oh well, I got the review, right? tongue.gif Thanks! To be honest, I don't know where I get the ideas either, but without sounding too self-satisfied, I liks the ideas too. As you said, different and. And you're right, noticing the small things shows that it''s for real, and that's what got Lily too. Thanks a lot for your amazing review (and I hardly ever use italic), Amy!

Thanks yet again for the reviews!

- Vicki
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