Hi! For those of you who have read the story, you will know that I'm writing about Snape's past. But I need help. Really badly. So, either post feedback here, or the 'other' ideas that you might have (see poll) and trust me, if you have read my other story (The tale of Bob, Milo and Greydude) then you will see just how much feedback means to me. It will really help.

Thanks!

Paradox573

Yay, I love Trelawny! It's a good start, update soon to start Snape's tragic lifestory. Make sure you include a Malfoy or two or I will never speak to you again!

Lol

Ellie
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PS I voted Other Character, because we know all about Lily (yawn) so it's old news. Or, what about Original Character!!!! He could date all of the Black sisters, one after the other, then they could all gang up on him and curse him for the rest of his life!!!

Thank ye for dat idea, what about having Snape hit on them in turn, and then in anger, they all blow each other up, until Bella is last Black alive, and then Sevvie poo blows her up. It would be such an unexpected twist!


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If you kill the Black suisters, then god help me, I will kill you as well!

Just thought I'd let you know!

Update soon, but skip the boring stuff and get straight to life at HOGWARTS!!!!

Let the dating begin. Lol.

Ellie
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I forgot to mention this in the story, and potassium oleate is elbow grease, but Severus knew that because he saw it on the back of the bottle. It was just scented to smell like lavender.

Sorry!

Paradox573

Hi Parry,

I'd say Severus should be dumped by about 10 girls and I also love the idea of him dating the Black sisters. It sort of fits with Bellatrix never trusting him in the books.

By the way, Sevvie poo's mother is hysterical. Very to the point, just like her son!

Keep up the good work and please, please add a feedback link in your chapters so I don't have to go searching anymore! Thank you.

Lisa

By the way lisa, you can add your own ideas of what should/could/might happen in the stories. You never know, I might use yours instead of Ally-poos (Alastorlet and proud).

Now, how disasterous should this date go?


Bye!

Oh, please make him go round to the Black household! Cygnus and Druella could be all snobby because Sev's a half-blood and then he can see Bella and realise he's dating the wrong sister, but he's too scared of Andromeda to dump her, so he lives in misery for the next two years until she dumps him and then he can gop out with Bella, realise she's all wrong, someone tells her that he plans to dump her, she basically murders him and then dumps him before he can dump her. Then he can date Cissy, and him and Lucius can have a massive duel over her than she'll dump Sev for Lucius.

Ellie
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Ooohhh! Sev is so cute. I would marry him in a second, even at 6 years old and with a plastic ring. That was a funny chapter. I really liked Andromeda's reply!

I have no ideas at the moment, but if I do, I'll definitely let you know. Oh, I do have an idea: put a link to your feedback thread in your fanfic!! Please!!!!!

Anxiously Awaiting the Next Chapter,
Lisa

ALLY-POO that just went straight through my brain turning it into mush on the way. (Shock horror yes I do have a brain.) No I will not do anything you said, and have him kill off all Malfoys if you do one more thing ike that. this means that you should stop writing really long pointless messages that I will never read if you want Malfoy to exist.
Lisa, I have added link to all threads made by me.
Ally-poo, if you want Malfoy to win epic ghost battle in TTOBM&G, then stop irritating me on these things.

Parry, can i just point out that you asked ellie for advice and she gave it to you, so its pointless getting mad at her. personally, i think it was a good idea and that you should use it (ellie, im not saying all of your ideas are good, just that one). Please tell me when you next update.

Paradox, if you keep up with this attitude I'm going to close this and the Fanfic thread down. If you want to hear everyone's ideas but don't like one or two then be polite about it. Being rude will only lose you readers, not gain you any. I would think that any Author would be happy for any amount of ideas and any amount of readers. I suggest you try and keep your readers, not insult them and potentially push them away.

Parry, that date was really cute! For some reason, I just love that Severus ordered steak and chips and a coke. It's so ordinary which is so unordinary for Sev.

And thanks for the link. It makes leaving feedback much easier!

Lisa

Ally, Clucky, I'm really sorry, and I no u will be happy about this, but you will be called, just to make you happier, Ally, you (in my books) be called Al (it's so much easier to type!) and clucky, you will be called anything you like provided it is SHORT in exchange for calling me something part decent lol

parry, can i just point out that you told us to call you parry. i dont mind you calling me clucky, just a bit confused about were it came from. like the story.

Lottie
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All right, you can call me parry, but don't be mean about it. please, it can b quite annoying when you're going on and on about it, but you can call me that on here. It's probably alot easier to type and so provided it's on here and on here alone, then I'm fine with it.
Lotts, u wanna b called on this Sev?

Can I just say in a completely neutral way that



what you just said could be interpreted as a little hypocritical.


I know the above was meant as a joke, but remember the teachers play they did in assemby? Where Ms Paton really insulted Mrs Gilliam (sp?) even though it was meant for a joke? Well, if you don't remember, the point is still the same. You're my friend and I forgive you for what you wrote, but in reality, I was not actually going to post in here any more. I guess I've broken that now, but still.

Ellie

parry, i don't want to be called sev. one of the mods called me rox, and i think thats better. i agree with elz in what you said because even though i knew you meant it as a joke, even jokes can be hurtful. im sorry with anything that ive done thats annoyed you in the past.

Lottie
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Oh ok sorry about that I'll stop that. I'm really really sorry Elz (do you want to b called that if you do then I will) I guess I got carried away and didn't read the danger signs. I'm really sorry. Really sorry. Lotts, sure I'll call u rox. sorry

Poor Severus! Dumped at 6. I feel so bad and he didn't even get to have his steak and chips. Andromeda could have at least given him that kiss he asked for. Cute ending to the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens with Narcissa.

Lisa

Thanx, lisa. The way you put it I now feel so sorry for Sev. No steak. No chips. No kiss. A poor little Sevvie-poo with no girlfriend, a broken heart, and trying for a new girl; his old girlfriend's sister.

If any readers have any ideas for the date with Narcissa, I'd love them. (Rox, Elz, I guess that I'm getting my comeuppance for being a horrible little person who didn't care about your feelings*, even if it was only meant as a joke. Guess I learned from that experience. I won't do it again to ANYONE. * = Yes, you can call me that on here.)

I do actually love feedback and I shouldn't have done what I did to Elz & Rox, and I feel really bad about it now.

can you just call me Lottie? Because I really don't care. Thanks. Liked the bit with Narcissa, but won't it just end the same way as it did with Andromeda? Him getting dumped because Bella finds out? Or you let them get really close and kiss, then she dumps him by telling him like three weeks later that Lucius proposed to her and she accepted and tehir getting married the next day? On second thoughts, that might be a little cruel, but you know...

Lottie
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Sure, I just want the wretched names thing sorted out Lottie, (can I abreviate it to lotts?) I was sorta thinking of having Narcissa and Snape getting on really well, and then Mrs Black finds out in her room (...), and screams herself stupid at Narcissa, but that might be a bit repetitive, if you know what I mean... I could combine ideas and have Sirius find out, or Lucius, and then Lucius gets mad at Narcissa and Snape, and, well... <dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuun>

Somehow I missed chapter 4, but I just read it now after getting the automatic email announcing that you posted chapter 5. That was quite a good date! Imagine Sev getting lucky with an older gal!! If he was six, then what would she be, about 12 or so? Oh my, Narcissa is devious!

Now my poor Severus is a death eater after many failed suicide attempts. Jeeze, if he dates Bellatirix, he might not have to commit suicide, she might shoot the killing curse at him! I have an idea: After Severus gets dumped the predetermined number of times, he can date me and we can live happily ever after!! What? It could happen...

Lisa

Ok sorry about the absence for a few months - I kinda, well, forgot about it. Im am very sorry. Well i finally finished chapter 5, but evil things will happen... I have it planned...

Gosh, I keep missing your posts. I don't know if I got unsubscribed or what, but just by chance I was checking to see if there were any new Sevie fanfics and I noticed that you had posted recently. Now my poor, dear Severus is engaged to Bellatrix. I have the feeling she's gonna eat him up and spit him out!

I really enjoy this fic. It's so light and funny, but I still think Sev needs a nice gal like me!

Lisa