Ok this is feedback for my Fic HP and.....The Fictions!!!! DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN
So I know it wasn't a brilliant first chapter and I know it was weird and random and I'm wondering why I dared put it up here becasue I have just read it through on here and my face went all red....

Anyway if you have any quiries, comments or crits please post them here because I love feedback in any shape or form.....Feedback for me....is like fire for Fire Queen.....

Now just to say....it does get better even if the first chap is a bit odd....

YAY!

[Does a little random dance]

I luuurve it! It's so crazy! And funny!

It' such a cool idea, the mish-mash of stories, it gives it an interesting twist and... er... FUNNY!!!

So, anyway, write more soon, it's so funny!

Ellie
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HA HA!!!!!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!


LOL!

I love this XDDD. Its so funny.

But then again, I shouldn't comment since I DID help you to write it XDDD

Yeah...
Thanks for being my amazing Beta....you rock.

Thanks Ellie it has started a bit odd but I hope that it gets better. We see more of....everyone and there is less moving about so its a little slower but I think easier to understand. Might update next week when I have a mo spare for the computer and have my memory stick with me

I LOVE IT!!!!!

It's so funny! And random! I LOVE RANDOM!!!

Lord of the Rings! And Alex Rider! AND His Dark Materials!! It just gets better and better (Fred, George, Merry and Pippin being quadruplets was a GREAT idea!!!)

Update soon!

Ellie
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Thank you! I know .... I LOVE RANDOM TOO!!!

I think that some characters like .... Fred and George and Merry and Pippin are just too similar...like Kreacher and Golem too....hmmm.....

Wow, it's crazy! But in a good way
I've read all the series except Inheritance so it does make some sense. The idea is really good though^^ I'd like to make a suggestion as to another series to include if you have read it: Mortal Engines by Philip Reeve. It would fit in really well here, it's the same sort of confusing page turner as Dark Materials and certainly if you haven't read it then I do recommend it. I can just see London trying to eat Hogwarts^^ and Stalkers teaching the death eaters about munciple Darwinism.

lol. I haven't heard of it....I need a book to read so I'll order it off amazon and have a read. oh! oh! oh!!!!!!! I'm writing Twilight into it!!!!! YAY! .....hehehe.......funny how all of these books have immortal or craving to be immortal beings in them.... e.g Riders in Inheritance and Elves.....you should so read Inheritance ..... they are a bit ..... iffie but really good. Especially Murtagh.....he is the cooliest!

.....Mortal Engines I'll hae a look for it. I'll update as soon as my ....er loyal?....beta has finished reading the next installment!

yay it has been updated for the first time in absolutely ages. Forgive me cause we have been busy and Fifth's e-mail went kind of spazzy so the update was delayed while she tried to get the checked version to me. anyway ITS UPDATED WOOT WOOT!


...thank you for your kind feedback. XD

Yay for fiery beepness! xD

Enjoy everyone! -stabs email-

- Fifth

Oh snap! Dude! In the words of the wise and articulate Roran, this fic is like totally like hilarious! So much funny packed in here. So, I just finished reading the first chappie and I got hooked. I am now totally gonna like read the rest of it and hopefully not have like an annuerism(sp?) from how loudly I am laughing. I luuuuuuuurves this fic! I wish I'd found it sooner. It's so random and weird that a person can't help but Roll On The Floor Laughing! Great job! Hope I'm caught up soon, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Like still totally laughing,
Karina (a.k.a VTM14)
Peace!

Awww! Thanks! Me and Fifth are truly honoured by your compliments. Hope that doesn't sound too cheesey or anything.

Anyway, its great that someone has finally discovered my fic because it has been....shall we say buried?....for quite a while and it is about time it resurfaced. I have infact got a good deal of the plot written out and what not and me and Fifth have had very erm....in depth discussions about the climax which is gonna rock but most unfortunatly Fifth cannot be bothered to beta it so I am seriously considering doing it myself. Fifth! if you are reading this that is a huge hint to get proof reading or I am gonna fire your sorry face! (She knows I love her really )

Its gonna be, in Roran's wise wise words, totally physcadelic and....I am writing Twilight AND the House of Night books into it so if you havent read them i serisously recommend them because they are both really good....HON probably better but whatever.


Right gotta go bug Fifth with PMs and emails now.

Byesies.

Em
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Like totally hahaha! Okay, I am like now caught up. This fic just keeps getting better and better. It's like the more you read it, the more you want to keep reading it. It has like two of my very favoritest things, randomness and weird funniness.

Yay for Fire Princess! Good for Hermione running away from all that stressfulness like that. I couldn't believe it when they were all like fighting for her, personally I would have smacked 'em all upside their silly little heads.

Me likeys it. Keep updating.
Can't wait to laugh some more,
Karina (VTM14)

So sorry it took so long to update but it is done now and so you may behold its freakish wonder. I had to proof read it and beta it myself instead of having my beta's amazing proof reading skills cause I think she might have died. So you can blame me if it isn't as good as what I hope it normally is.

We are getting to a good bit! yay! Rock on dudes and dudetts!

Wohoo!! It seems like ages since we've had an update!

Oh my gosh, the whole thing had me in stitches! I can't stop laughing just from thinking about it! It's so brilliantly random!! I can't wait for MOOORRREEE!!

Ellie
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Yay, update!

Are you kidding? Sure it had a few little mistakes here and there, but I, personally don't think they made it worse...if anything they added to the randomness of it all! Hahaha I loved it! This chappie was freakishly packed with beepness and other interesting crazy random moments. I luuuuuurved the lyrics to 'Here come the girls' by the way. I think I actually was laughing so hard at that, that I snorted and my sister looked at me like I was insane. WOOO! Yay for weird randomness! Update soon.
Can't wait to have another giggle-fest!
-Karina (VTM14)