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lisasnape
"How could you do that? You know I'm married!"
"I know can't you get a divorce?"


Hee, hee; I loved it! tongue.gif What a great idea for a fanfic. It was really funny. Poor Severus; he just doesn't have any social skills, does he? Maybe he'll learn?? I can't wait till the next chapter to see what happens. smile.gif

Lisa

p.s. Thanks for the feedback thread!
lisasnape
Hi there, I enjoyed chapter 2. Poor Severus. Everything that was said to him is true, but he's getting it with both barrels. Maybe he'll realize the error of his ways and have better luck in heaven than he had on Earth. smile.gif

Lisa
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