Hey guys! So, my old fics got deleted and I've decided to restart my favorite one. There will be slight differences, but only to improve (I hope)! Please leave any feedback here, even if you didn't like my fic, or just want to offer some constructive criticism.
Thanks!

How They Came To Be

hey im glad that you are restarted your fics...i really liked your other fic too "Love me lily" & would be glad if you restarted that too

I'm glad you finally re-started this one! I really liked it!

It was really good. Its the first time i read ur fic and it was really detailed and every thing. looking forward to ur other fics. Hope u'll post soon! loved it!

Awww I wasn't the first to leave feedback =[ I promised I'd your first feedbacker too... I'm sorry

But anyway, you know I love it! I'm so jealous of how good a writer you are and the amount of character depth you manage to get into just one chapter is brilliant. All I can really say is its amazing aj, haha I love it =]

You best post soon

Kelly
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I have to say I enjoy reading this very much. I was surprise to read the Lily and Snape agrument, because so many people just didn't get why she stop being his friend. I am glad you understood. I got tried of hearing people go she was a coward and gave-up to easily; like she wanted something more then friendship and could have stopped him from being who he chose to be. When that wasn't true. She couldn't take him disrespecting her friend and famliy the way he did and made her the exception. How he though dark pranks were funny and his plans to go join Voldy after school. She stood by him for 5 years of that and defending him every step of the way. Him calling her a mudblood, because he was angry and all she did was trying to do was help him. That was the last straw for her. Yes. He said sorry, but he never said sorry to any of the others and them being friend at the time didn't stop him for wanting to become a death eater. When he knows she hates dark magic. She was to good for that. So, they had no future. Even after she was dead and gone he still wanted that dark arts job. If dumberdore wasn't dying 6 year he never would have gotten that job.

I also love that you did write in the real reason why James stop and save Snape that night. He didn't want his friends to become murders. I got tried of people saying he did it because he fear being kicked out of school. He didn't fear being kicked out, because if he did he would have stop with the pranks and sneaking out along time of ago. Dumberdor and just about every teacher at Hogwarts loved him...and the rest of the Marauders.

I hope you write in what J.K. said about Snape Sectumsempra James. Although, I believe she said it happen fifth year. Your accuracy of the books makes me wonder if you read not only the books, but you watch and read some if not all of J.K. interviews.

I look forward to reading more. Nice Twight siggy picture of the one in only Mr. Edward Cullen.

thanks to everyone who left feedback

hp*lover: thank you I'm glad you're enjoying my writing
Kelly: It's okay, I forgive you for not being the first to lead feedback
agriggs6: about what you said about Lily and Snape, I get what you mean. JK Rowling gives us certain scenes with Harry's parents in the books, so I figure, why not use them? thanks for all the other compliments

Chapter Two is being written as we speak (type?)

Chapter Two is posted!
Read and leave feedback, please. Even if you hate it.

Wow!

Aj that was so good =]

I loved the first part with James and Lily, how they almost got closer (she called him James!) but then he had to go and ruin it all. He was doing so well too! I feel sorry for him 'cause he really does care about her and all but he doesn't know when to just stop! =[
I hope his ego deflates soon and they can get together

I also really liked the race between Sirius and James! Typical Marauders haha. Lily's such a cow! I know she's fed up of James and all but stamping on his foot? Come on haha

I love it though =] Can't wait for the next chapter!

Kelly
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Well despite the fact that I've only gotten one review for Chapter Two (thanks Kelly!), I've posted Chapter Three. I really liked writing this chapter, it's a bit long (though I find that's never a bad thing) but oh well
Please read and review!

CHAPTER 2.

I love the Lily/ James fights, it's like watching Ron and Hermione fight very entertaining.
I love James humor its funny, and sounds just like him or how J.K makes him picture him. I am glad she at least gave him a chance to talk to her before he ruin it by asking her out.

I enjoyed this one very much.

CHAPTER3

Okay. I love James devotion to his friends no doubt about it. I love how he calls Remus being a werewolve "his furry little problem".

I hope Remus and Mary can get together later on...maybe 6 or 7th year. I hate that he's always worried about hurting one of his girlfriends. He know James and Siruis wouldn't let him. They'll be with him. He also know that James will give his life to protect any of his friends, and don't mind the cuts and buries he gets every full moon.

I love the way he told Lily to shove off, and stopped her before she put her foot in her mouth about something she didn't know.

Why is Snape following them around school. He alright know Remus is a werewolve from Sirius prank early that year. He need a life.

I am looking forward to many more chapters. I have a few question or suggestion if you wern't going to do it before.

1. Are you going to write in Sirius leaving home or is he going to just go straight home with James after school?

2. Are we going to get a transformation or adventure of the boys in ther animal form during six year in the foribben forest?

3. Are you going to kill off James parents the way J.K. said they died (of old age)?

4. I would love to hear a Minnie ( McGonagall ) and James conversation 6 year or 7th in Transfiguration?

5. I 'll also love to hear a conversation between him and Dumbledore?

I know alot of freaking Questions.

6. Are you going to write in a scene of them picking there NEWTS classes?

7. Are you going to write a scene of them getting there QWLS? I'll love to see how James react to him have Prefect Owls?

Because that is another thing I hate. It's when people don't listen to what J.K. said about James being one of those few people that are born in the world that are perfect at everything they do without trying. That James was given headboy status not because Dumbledore felt the need to give him responsility, but becuase he deserved it. You become headboy and headgirl by having perfect or the highest level of OWLS & NEWST in all of your year.

Remus said that Dumbledore made him a prefect, because he believe he could keep James and Sirius out of trouble. Remus said this because he is a werewolve and as much as Albus done for him, he didn't believe he was made prefect because he was one of the most nice's/helpful student of there year. Plus, he is a werewolve and this keeps him from performing his duties right...because he definitely didn't keep them out of trouble. It was to also give Remus some confidence in himself when it came to him being a werewolve.

Headboy/girl don't work that way, and Albus wouldn't denied that chance to a more befitting student, because everyone know you become head by grades. He would have found another way to teach James responablity. Then there is the fact that J.K. said that James started changing in attitude and deflating his ego by the end of 6 year. Then he stop asking Lily out, and decide to be her friend so she can get to know him... all of him. Then asked her out and she accept because she got to know just what type of person he really was.

That he never stop pranking Snape, because Snape never stop trying to prank him when Lily wasn't around.

Plus, I believe the way he grow-up was losing his parent and seening the world around him becoming darker. He wanted to become an Amuor all his life, after his dad. So, he was going to have to deal with the thing he hated most dark magic.

I also love that fact that he took away Moony problem about finding a job. He paid him, and gave him a home. Then Dumbledore gave him even more to do, although the order is free and you don't get paid. James still paid him. So, I know he was lonely as hell when James and Lily died, then he lost Siruis; who could have also tooken care of him if he haven't gotten frame for killing his best mate.

Sorry for the eassy. You can e-mail me the question if you want...if you answer them. If you don't want to give anything away. You can just answer yes or no. I'll still read it, because the best part is reading the details and feeling like your there instead of at home on your computer.

Keep it coming. I have you on addition alert, it suppose to e-mail me everytime you post something new.

Those last two chapters were really, really good! I would have read them and left this comment sooner, but I had midterms and have been so busy with school work that I can barely get on the computer. I really love your story. Please, please,please post again soon!

THIS IS GREAT! i love it and your writing style please please post soon

Hey dude I just read it and I loved this last chapter

Honestly it shows a bond between the boys that is not common. It truly shows that it is "bros before hos". It's awesome that they care about each other but Lupin is an idiot! Hey am I still going to be in the story? Oh come on please *bats eyes* pretty please!

Anywho loving the story! Keep it going and post again soon

-Stef

A story written by a guy. This is something you don't see everyday.

I like your story over all. To be very honest I think it has some dull points that you can work on but your writing style if quite good, it's very clean. I think you need to spice it up a little more. It'd be good to see you write a huge action scene. But that's just my opinion. I like the Marauders in this story because no one can write male characters better than a male.

MK