Thanks BRoyals and Bath!
I know, the post was reeeally short, but I find it kinda difficult to post great big dollops at a time, as i kinda need time to develop my ideas properly... sorry

I'll try and make the next bit longer

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QUOTE(BRoyals @ Jan 6 2009, 10:00 PM) [snapback]553995[/snapback]
you might want to consider getting a beta
I just found out
now what is and how i can get it... I want to get it to improve my writing... it's not to late now, is it?? I mean, i've already started my fic...
Thanks for the replies and thanx for reading it...