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honey~pie
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The fanfic's here...

The idea of this fic was stuck in my head for some time... I decided to post it up tongue.gif
Please leave feedback on whether it's good or not smile.gif I know it's not excellent but it's only my first fic! Sorry- the first bit is kinda short but i'll post more soon.

It's about Viktor and Hermione and their love affair. IPB Image
Feedback will be much appreciated tongue.gif

~Sarah
BRoyals
This was a pretty good start to a fic, and the idea is a good one. It was a little short, and you might want to consider getting a beta, but I like the plot you came up with. I can't wait to see what happens next.
cupcake
It's a relly good fanfic, Starii!! Please continue soon. I cant wait to find out what happens next- I hope Ron finds out! And it would be really exciting if Ron sees Viktor and Hermione together!!
honey~pie
Thanks BRoyals and Bath!

I know, the post was reeeally short, but I find it kinda difficult to post great big dollops at a time, as i kinda need time to develop my ideas properly... sorry sad.gif I'll try and make the next bit longer smile.gif...
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you might want to consider getting a beta


I just found out now what is and how i can get it... I want to get it to improve my writing... it's not to late now, is it?? I mean, i've already started my fic...

Thanks for the replies and thanx for reading it... happy.gif
BUURRRD
wooow! i adore it!
please right more asap!
i can wait to see what happens next..
when i read the short blurb to me the whole idea of hermione having an affair seemed soo un realistic (but hey in the world of fan fic, anything is possible (: )
and i just had to read this
and i loovvedd it (:
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honey~pie
QUOTE
wooow! i adore it!
please right more asap!
i can wait to see what happens next..
when i read the short blurb to me the whole idea of hermione having an affair seemed soo un realistic (but hey in the world of fan fic, anything is possible (: )
and i just had to read this
and i loovvedd it (:
X


Thanks smile.gif Hehe yeah i thought it seemed unlikely, too but ya know. cool.gif

I just remembered about this fic now. I totally forgot about it. I just read the starting and I was totally cringing. My grammar was sooo bad! It was like, nearly a year ago :/
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