Hey!

Please leave feedback, criticism and potential ideas for my story Of Weird Conversations and Strange Lists here. Be honest, thanks!

- Vicki

Wuuhuu you put it up as promised! (that cake really helped then:P). You know I enjoy your humour, I always think you're funny and you really exploid your potential here. Unfortunately I don't have a list right here and now, but if I think of something, I'll be sure to let you know And I'm sorry that I can't be your beta, but since English is not my mother tongue, and my English is approximately as good as yours, it probably wouldn't make any difference.

Anyway, I like it, and I just hope you will get a lot of feedback, so your story might be even better in the future (with the help from others)

Great story so far and I am looking foreward to see what happens next!

Vicky,
Your new story is awesome, you continue to amaze me with your new ideas. I love how you show kind of a new side to Lilly and how James is just himself. For another chapter you could maybe have James and Sirs have a cnvorsation about a muggle movie like Shrek or something totally of the wall.


Best of luck,
Aly


P.S. I would be pleased if you would let me beta for you, I'm also betaing for Lisa right now but her chapters come every so often and she's a good enough author it's a breeze checking over her story. Let me know!

Hey Vicki,

I want apologize here that I haven't been the best beta in the world... and I'm really, truly, deeply sorry. I promise I'll get back on top like I used too. I've just been totally out of it and just letting you know, this is not a way of asking to beta another story, unless you'd like me too. You probably don't because of my poor work, but I promise, I'll get back!

As for your story. It's different and I really like it. It's entertaining, her list. And the things they talked about. Conversation was smooth and I loved his attitude. You can tell he cares about her but not as affected by her as she would like.

Jessica

Vicki,

I truly love this story! I always love your work, but I'm not truly faithful in writing my opinion in Feedback. This story is quite funny and I love the whole list idea.
I really like the fact in the beginning that there is an argument that ends up James getting slapped. It seems like almost every story I read has James ending up getting slapped. But I was relieved and happy when this story ended up happy...In a way.
I would love to beta you. But my english vocabulary is a bit sketchy. Anyway...

lagoria

Lulu-lolo: Don't I always keep my promises. I only promise things I can keep Well, I have a crazy humour, so I'm not surprised people can laugh of me anymore. It's okay with the list, I've found a few myself. I hop eI can keep improving, and with this story, my readers help me. Thanks for the review!
Alonnet: Thanks a lot! I'm glad I can keep amazing people, it wouldn't be fun if I couldn't! Haha. Well, Lily is very vicious, and I like to write her like that. I would love to write something about that, but there is one problem. I love canon, and I don't ever (I'm serious here), ever write something in my stories which couldn't have happened, like, um, using Brad Pitt in a story, because of the time. It could be fun to send them into the future though! Haha. Besides, I think this will be mostly Lily/James time. But what a great suggestion! Did you put that beta request up later? I didn't see it at first... I'll send you a PM. Thanks for the review!
JSB 073: Oh, you've been busy and I don't blame you. Don't I owe you a mail responding to you? Hm, I'll get to it afterwards. I hope you're satisfied with The Best is Yet to Come. Well, you know by now I like different I hop ethe future lists can be just as fun and entertaining. Conversation was just what came to my mind, and well, who doesn't love James? Thanks for the review!
lagoria: Thanks a lot! Well, I'm not perfect with feedback either, and only writes when I feel I have something to say. Ha. Lily is only waiting for a chance to slap James, and I promise it won't be the last time James will get hurt in this story Well, we can't always be perfect, can we? Thanks for the review!

Next chapter up in a few seconds!

- Vicki

I just found another person who is bad at taking compliments (or is that just you:P)
Your humour just keeps getting better - D4 is just funny, sorry, but there is a girl in Struer I think who is called Ditte with double D.
I really like how Lily is funny and a little weird, a lot like you actually. And James is just very sweet

I'd like to see the next list, and thanks a lot for updateing so fast

//Louise

I find this all so interesting. They're such a cute pair with their bantering.
And of course, gotta love the lists and weird conversations.

Lulu-lolo: yeah, that's pretty much me, shinning through there, I'm worse than Lily with the compliments. haven't heard of Ditte. Lily is just... me when I'm the most weird, and she's just that constantly James is... he's my dream guy I think. haha, him and Sirius!.. Thanks for the review!
JSB 073: I think the bantering is a key word here, and you truly caught that! They are sweet, yes Thanks for the review!

- Vicki

I love this pair. They're still the same Lily and James but somehow presented in a way that makes them appear different.
I love their conversations, they're funny. And I have them all the time and then the ones with hidden innuendos are just hilarious because it's all a joke...
Love it. Post soon.

Hahaha.... Was actually supposed to do something serious at the moment, instead I end up struggleing not to laugh. So people around me just think I am in a really happy mood today, cause I have a big smile on my face. You are (and I know I am repeating myself here) incredibly funny!
I really liked this list. Maybe you should e-mail a copy of it to the people in charge at our school. But I have to say that James is right. She has a weird logic. James is also right on another point. In my head, Lily was totally flirting with him!

Please post soon, I can't wait to see what happens next

Oh, and by the way, James and Sirius (at least the versions you present) are also guys of my dreams.

JSB 073: I think the difference you see is the non bickering part between them! Well, most of the conversations have something hidden or a double meaning in them. Hah. Thanks for the review!
Lulu-lolo: Who wants to do serious stuff? Laughing is so much more fun! In reality, I think Lily's logic is mine. But that's not completely sane either. Well, either way, we're going to have half a million classes. I guess morning classes can't go away. Yeah, I too think Lily was flirting with him Thanks!

- Vicki

Hey Vicki.

You shouldn't say your logic isn't sane. It is just a little... different.
Anyways.... Good chapter. Especially the part with Sirius being the "counceller" (spelling, sorry ). He is just a very funny guy.
Oh, and those words, are they for real, and where did you find them? They were just... out there. Really! I didn't know that such a word existed for kissing with the tongue (maybe it doesn't, but it does know in my mind)!. Weird!

Good job

//Louise

You know Vicki I hadn't read any fanfic in a very long time and I see you started a new one so I go hmmm I have some time to kill before going to work so I read and honestly woman you never stop amazing me! This fanfic is really good! It's hilarious! You know funny enough I have several ideas of list because I'm a huge fan of lists! I have a book full and hahaha it's hilarious that I have one that is called "101 way to brutally torture a jerk"!

I have a suggestion for a list, 50 random things that can happen during class. That list is always amusing to make

Honestly Vicki keep it up1 You really do rock! I love it!

-Stef

Lulu-lolo, well you know me and my logic Haha, I always imagined Sirius to be james' wingman, protecting him from hurting himself etc etc. Look up strange words on google. I'm sure you'll fund a gazillion pages Of course they are real! Thanks for the review!

fany_monkey. STEF! So nice to see you around again! I think most people are busy at this time of the year. But.. well, most of my stories isn't on VTM anymore, so you probably haven't seen me as much as everyone else I'm so very glad you like it. It's supposed to be silly and funny (like most things I'm writing). That is so strange! I've written a list called "140 ways I hope you die in"... it's a little the same? I'll think about the list, but seeing I've planned the rest of the story out I don't think there's room for it. I'll see if I can mention it though Thanks for the review!

- Vicki

Well I read the chapter and I loved it. I would have liked it to be longer but I guess a post is a post right?

See I disagree with the whole banana and homework, if you eat the banana by holding it in the peel its not that bad and then you have an excuse to get up and wash your hands which gives you a break

I'm liking this story a lot and I'm glad you at least get on here once in a while to post on this fic! I missed the good ol' days when we had awesome J/L fic now the best writers are gone! Don't go ditching us Vicki!

Keep it up!

-Stef

Hey Vicki.

I think you should redo that link, it is not taking anyone to the feedback thread, just so you know. Anywho, it was really great!. The period-excuse is just the greatest one in front of guys, they are just STUNNED! Hilarious to read about James' reaction. I just love those lists. You are right about crisps and popcorn, but if you eat popcorn first, then it is okay! Gotta love those popcorn.

Keep it going, love this one
- Louise

fany_monkey: This story was never meant to be long. It was meant to prove that plots can be overrated and that silly things are funny to read about - and its hard to make a long, silly chapter Ohhhh, I hadn't thought of the banana in that way! Great! haha. Yea, I miss them too. Unfortunately, I'm one of those authors who have moved on.. a little. But I find it too sad to keep updating a story and get one review each time, when I can get ten and more on HPFF. Are you on HPFF?

Lulu: Period, or gynaecologist are great things to use haha. Yes, I'm not the only one in the world with the crisps/popcorn problem

Thanks for the reviews!

- Vicki

Ahha. That made me laugh. I just read the whole thing, and it's cute. (:

You're on HPFF? So am i! What's your name?

And, by the way, this part made me laugh.

“Listen, you can’t write lists and have a life,” he said and waved with his hand. “It’s very ‘I-have-no-life’-ish.”

Anyway, good job. (:

this be jasmine(: Thanks very much! I love that line too! haha. The link is in my sig, just like yours, I'm Groundswell Thanks for the review!

- Vicki

aww, that was a really adorable chapter(: i absolutely loved the ending of it, and i'm kind of sad of it having only one chapter, but hey, what can a girl do? anyways, i'm pysched for the last chapter; happy writing(: