Hey guys! Yea, feedback for "Cookies For You"!
Basically it's a story about Draco and Jocelyn, but you should know that!
You know what to do, love you!
Here's my story!
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Yay! I get to be first! I absolutely LOVE DM/OC fics and I can't wait to see what happens next! I think you have a really good start here, and I'm looking forward to seeing what type of person Jocelyn is. 
Take care, sweetie,
~Dayna
Take care, sweetie,
~Dayna
I like it so far, I love reading fics when they first start. It seems like an interesting idea so far...cant think of much else to say other thatn im eagerly awaiting the next installment.
P.S. What year in school are they in during this fic?
P.S. What year in school are they in during this fic?
zwillo -- Why thank you! I love Draco too, ah the similarities! Haha well I'm pretty sure you should find out what Jocelyn's like before anyone else, but shh!
lancelot243 ---I'm planning to answer that question by chapter two, maybe three. I know that people will want to know why she went to Beaxbatons, so that shall be answered in chapter three!
lancelot243 ---I'm planning to answer that question by chapter two, maybe three. I know that people will want to know why she went to Beaxbatons, so that shall be answered in chapter three!
Bug, can you just tell me why? Why do you love the name Jocelyn so much!? I'm just kidding with you alright. Yea it's pretty good, so why didn't you tell me about this? I think I recognize someone here in your little story... hmm... is Jocelyn really an original character? No I'm not saying you ripped her off of some other book or movie... it just seems like she is modeled after someone we know... 
Yea so hurry up and get the next chapter you freak!
Yea so hurry up and get the next chapter you freak!
SlySnake *Calleigh* -- I am still amazed that you manage to tease me over the internet. And you have the nerve to call me Bug. I mean, didn't anyone tell you that it's Bugs? With an S!! Haven't seen you in awhile here though Cal? Yea I meant to tell you that I have a new story up... I like the name Jocelyn, no one is named that now! Instead mothers and fathers decide to call their kids names like Calleigh... what's up with that? Just kidding I LOVE YOU!! About the whole "modeled after someone we know"... no idea what you're talking about. 
None at all. 
None at all.
I love the Draco fanfics and I think this could be a really good one. Jocelyn seems like a funny character, and she jokes around with Draco, mocking him. And by the way, I think the name Jocelyn is pretty. I first heard the name in A Knight's Tale. I look forward to the next chapter!
~alyssa~
~alyssa~
hot-for-harry - A Knight's Tale! Yes that's what it was! I've just loved that name from when I heard it! Yes, Jocelyn is a funny/sarcastic person who goes her way! I'm really glad you said that this could be a really good one! I'm really hoping it will!!!
Chapter Three is up!
Chapter Three is up!
Hi There, I really like your fic. I'm enjoying all the different points of view and your original character. I wish I could go to Hogwarts! Jocelyn teasing Draco was very cute and so was the cuddling between Harry and Joss. I can't wait to see what develops!
Lisa
Jocelyn teasing Draco was very cute and so was the cuddling between Harry and Joss. I can't wait to see what develops!Lisa
Hey, I put this exact same post in my fanfiction, so I'll repeat this -
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HEY EVERYONE!! No, this is not a new installment or chapter - just an explanation. You see, I will not be able to continue the story for at least a month, because school is almost over and of course that requires study, finals, among other school stuff. I'm really also busy with helping on the ranch also. I know these sound like a bunch of petty excuses but it's pretty true. I will start over (same story, same title, same characters, no change) when I get off for summer break. The Mods will start to delete my story soon because I haven't added to it. I just wanted you to know what was going on! No worries though! Just a delay!
I'll keep a lookout for the story this summer. I need to know what happens between Joss and Draco, and the rest of the gang, as well. Good luck with school and your work on the ranch!
Lisa
Lisa
Thank you lisasnape, I'll need the luck! I'm glad someone is looking forward to it!
Ok, HUGE apologies to EVERYONE!!! Even though I've hardly been home this summer, I feel SO guilty that I haven't put up a new chapter, even though I said I would work on it over the summer! SO SO SO SO SORRY!!!!!! To top that, I was just re-reading the chapters again, and some parts it seemed like I read them for the first time. I thought, "I really wrote that? Huh..." Now how bad is that? I admit I was pretty shocked that the Mods kept the story up and everything, I thought they'd delete it! Working on Chapter Four RIGHT NOW, hopefully that will relieve some of my guilt...
HEY GUYS!!! So... guess what?! I have Chapter Four up!!!!! It's kind of short, so read it r-e-a-l-y s-l-o-w-l-y and it'll all be better! It's a very revealing chapter, hopefully to make up for the long absence....
Hi Megan!!!
Well, you already know that I love this story, but I just wanted to leave feedback in its proper place! I loved this chapter! I really liked how Draco got all defensive when he read the letter, and I can't wait to find out what happens with Andy.
By the way, I think you may get a bit more feedback response if you'd put a link at the bottom of each chapter... Just a suggestion.
Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
~Dayna
Well, you already know that I love this story, but I just wanted to leave feedback in its proper place!
I loved this chapter! I really liked how Draco got all defensive when he read the letter, and I can't wait to find out what happens with Andy. By the way, I think you may get a bit more feedback response if you'd put a link at the bottom of each chapter... Just a suggestion.
Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
~Dayna
Dayna - Thank you! I can't wait to see what happens to Andy either, after all, I'm making this up as I go along. Just to keep me and other people guessing! I'll leave the link at the bottom, why wouldn't I follow your advice?!
I really liked this chapter. I always enjoy reading all the different points of view that you write. I especially enjoyed the scene on the staircase. That was really charming, and I must admit that I'm wondering the same thing as Draco is: Did this Andy guy put the wrong name on his letter? I'm sure you'll let us in on the answer in due time!
Lisa
Lisa
lisasnape - Yes you will all find out in due time! Thank you for reading it! I think from the different points of veiw just gives the readers a better idea of what the heck is going on! Thank you again!
Here I am. leaving feedback as promised! I really enjoyed this chapter. Especially Joss and Draco's evening run-in. It was cute, funny, tense and romantic all at once. This was my favorite line:
I can't wait to find out if Andy is the person waiting in the Gryffindor common room!
Lisa
I really enjoyed this chapter. Especially Joss and Draco's evening run-in. It was cute, funny, tense and romantic all at once. This was my favorite line:QUOTE
"Muggle much?"
That cracked me up! I can't wait to find out if Andy is the person waiting in the Gryffindor common room!Lisa
Thank you lisasnape! I try to use sarcasm... sort of my sense of humor. By the way guys - I AM SO SORRY THAT I HAVEN'T ADDED A NEW CHAPTER UP YET!!! Season's getting tight here with the cattle and the hunters and all that - SORRY!!!!!! I am putting one up AS SOON AS I FREAKING CAN!!!!!!! I feel really bad... but I'm working on it so bear with me!
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