Hi,

Cassie, you didn't make me feel bad. I'm just really excited about this whole thing and I'm being cranky and waaayyy too sensitive. I'm sorry if I made youfeel bad. I didn't mean to.

Sarah, I'm really glad you like it. I couldn't wait for the ball when I was writing it. It's really fun to write. I've already written the whole thing and know I'm going back and editing and all of that fun stuff that I never have time for. Maybe Snape'll show, maybe he won't !

I really appreciate your patience and my busy schedule and stuff. You guys are amazing. I hope I get more readers, but you guys will always be first just for coming here to check out this story.

eMeRY

haha, no worries Emery!
If I were you, I would be excited too. Oh, and don't worry you will get more readers soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Cassie

Hey,


Cassie,
Thanks for understanding. You have no idea what that means to me.

The next chapter probably won't be here until sometime next week. I'll send it to my beta on Saturday. My schedule and homework are heck-tic. I don't even do a sport right now, I'm just along for the ride.

Thanks for all of your support. Especially those of you who comforted me when I needed it. I <3 you.

Emery

Emery, I know what you mean about the homework thing! I have a lot right now too, but luckily I have tomorrow off *phew* so I can catch up on my homework and relax some over the weekend. Anyway, I'm glad I could help
-Cassie

i am so sorry that i have not been feedbacking you M but i have not been able to get on at all in november. now critque. the way that the dialogue is sculptured is extremely professional. the descriptions of lily's dress are amazing. five stars on both of those. now here is your down point. really everything is running smoothly and you have the regular romance made for each other but there is one little problem.typical plot line. think about maybe giving it an unexpected obstacle something that throws the whole plot off balance something like death or tragedy or sickness something to give a big wow she is a good writer she really knows how to surprise us. you are a good writer already just a little push to make you an excellent writer. good luck and i will not be offended if you don't take my advice. your excited waiting eager sis, Isla

Hey guys,

Sorry for not writing. I feel bad about that. I really don't want your sympathy on my feeling bad right now. So, to the point. Right after I finish typing this I'm going to send my beta the next chapter! You guys'll love it! There's Snape, James, and Lily. So just so you know, Isla I think I've thrown in what you're looking for. Maybe not. When I got your reply I already wrote it so. I hope i got it for you.

Thanks!!

x Emery