All of the characters belong to J.K. Rowling!

I just thought I'd write in my spare time and this is what came into
my head!! Hope you like it! my wonderfel beta is zwillo. a.k.a. Dayna
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Thanks for reading Please leave feedback!!
~Emery

I loved the first chapter it was a great start of the story i will check to see any or your updates.

Keep writing and you will get better.
~Isla

Thanks Isla you are my only reader right now That's really sad.

I'm going to write the next chapter now!!
~Emery

I don't think she is your only read. She is probably the only one to post her thoughts. I hope that don't discourage you from continuing your story.

You are doing a great job so far. I hope you keep it up.

Thanks you guys I am hoping to get more readers! I am still working on Ch. 2! Thanks for all your support!!
~Emery

I can't wait for chapter two to come out it is going to be a very interesting story i can't wait. Keep writing and you will become a very good, hard-working writer and people will admire your hard work and you will get more readers.

~Isla

I take it that this is the feedback thread as well?

Anyways, the start of the story is very good i liked it. I liked how it left me guessing wondering if there was a next time or a next time after that. Will they do it again? Will Lily Tell the head of House? Could something worse happen to the marauders? I liked it. left me guessing!

Cant wait for chapter 2 keep up the good work!

Andrew

yeah it is um I'm still working on that I should have it fixed by this weekend and ch. 2 will be up then for sure then too! Thanks for all of your support!!!

~Emery

i have been anxious waiting for chapter two you will probaly have like ten readers before you know it keep up the good work.

~Isla

it is the weekend i can't wait to read chapter two it is going to be great. What will happen next is what i am always thinking. Oh and last night i had a dream about the rose and the thorn so i want to know what happens.

I have finally fixed the link! I am still working on chapter 2. you all will love it!!! thank you for supporting me and my fic. you all are the best!
~Emery

Sorry ch.2 is not up yet. Dayna (zwillo) still hasn't edited it yet I'm not rushing her, but she needs to take her time. and she's also moving so I'm sure this is hard for her. Thanks you all for being so patient!!!!!
~Emery

i love chapter two it was funny in a way and wonderful in a way. Now i'm asking myself who's eyes are those? Will James be successful? i want to know so bad but i can't. That can make me mad some times ,but not this time it makes me want to wait.


~Isla

Darn! I need to send Dayna ch. 3 so she can edit it! I am say ahead on chapters actually I'm working on ch. 18 or 19 right now, but I need some ideas for threat notes to Lily! If they are good they will be in ch. 18 or 19!
~Emery

I Really Liked Yr Story. It's Really Good. It's Like What Insanity Said. It Left Me Totally Guessing What Was Gonna Happen Next. Post Some More Soon!

-Emily:)

Thanks Emily. welcome to my feedback page. I'm still working on some stuff, but other wise I really love my story. we don't have many readers now, but I'm sure they will slowly start coming in! I will try to post more soon!!!
~Emery

OMG., I Was So Excited When I Saw You Posted Something Up!:) I Really Liked It. I Thought That Was Cool On How Normal Their Conversation Sounded. Ooh., Peter Is Being Bad.XD What Were They Doing Talking About His Trousers?!

They were talking about Snape's trousers there at the end. I hope Snape is okay. He was kind of suspicious. Thanks for being so supportive you two!!
~Emery

yeah now i know that it was snape's eyes following james. now i'm wondering why was wormtail hanging out with slytherins and is he hanging out with slytherins? can't wait for the next chapter.

~Isla

Hey Emery!

Your fanfic's great!! I've just finished reading chapter 3. I really can't wait for the next bit. I love the way you build up the suspense and make me wonder what's going to happen next.
I wonder why Peter's with the Slytherins...

Please post some more soon!!

~Sarah--x

I am so sorry for not posting in a while! I have to go to my uncle's wedding. Therefore Ch. 4 won't be up until the 2 or 3 of may. Sorry! I feel terrible I should have posted it sooner!!! Thanks for being so supportive!!

You guys have no idea how bad I feel for not posting in a while! I should have 4 up by tomorrow!

I feel like I owe everyone a hudge apology! I am so sorry! I have been up to my neck in homework, social life, love life, and exams! I will for sure post chapter 4 next weekend! by the way. I will have more time this summer, so will will be on a roll! and if this makes you feel any better, I have been writing way ahead of my typing. I have finished writing the story. So I can just get them edited and post away!!
~Emery

I will post next weekend. I have been really busy. And i am really sorry for not posting. I don't even know if anyone's reading this. whatever! I'll post

i just wanted to let you know that you have a couple mistakes in your story and you should make sure you read it after you post so you don't make this slight mistake again.



~Isla

I should be posting later this week I am sending Chapter 5 to my beta now!!! Sorry the last bit had a few mistakes I forgot to send that one. and I just typed it so, that's how it came out. So sorry!!

Chapter 5 is up. I just got it from my beta. So if you want to read it just go read it there's a link on my sig. Hope you like!!!!

~Emery

Hey, anyone who's reading this. which is not many whcih makes me sad. I'm sending chapter 6 to my beta now. I hope you like it I should have it up by this weekend or next week. I can't promise anything she's really busy.

~Emery

i am sorry you are sad. it is kind of tue that you don't have many people reading your story but you probably will. just wanted to say loved chapter five. it's a great story.

~Your sis , Isla

Hello, anyone who reads this. I just sent chapter 6 to my beta. It should be here by the middle or end of this coming week. I think.
~Emery

Hey guys,

I mean well....... I have no idea who I'm talking to. I feel so right now. I just don't think anyone is reading this. Sarah (a.k.a. honey~pie) isn't responding to my pms not that it's your fault, Sarah. My life is going down the pot. I"m only 12 how is it possible.

Back to the subject. I posted chapter 6 on Saturday or something to the people that saw and read it thanks. Ploease pm me or something I feel terrible.

M, just hold up. when you are playing a game like the true and false game just say the next person loves my story the Rose and the thorne. that is what i did to help Emily with Catch Me. just mention it whenever you can. It works magic.

~Your loving sis, Isla

Thanks Redheadfan , that's a good idea. I don't know if that's allowed, though. I asked passerby and I'm waiting for a response.

Aww sorry Emery Your fic is awesome, don't worry I'm sure loads of people are reading it!! Soo sorry i wasn't replying at the time

I just finished reading chapter 7! I'm so glad Lily and James are together- they soo fit. Aww at James getting all romantic

Can' wait till the next chapter =]

Hey,
Sarah thanks soooo much for the comment. I love it. Sorry about that comment that was a little rude. I need to send the next chapter to my beta. I'll go do that now. I love you all. Thanks for all your support. Ask any questions I'll answer.

Hugs, Em

Hey, M i was counting your readers and you have more than a lot of people. Some people only have had like to two dedicated readers you have had five readers while only four of them have posted twice that isn't bad. Have you seen the nomintation thing? Well you should just hope that people will read your story and nominate it. I nominated it Love Ya. Loved the chapter too the way that lily is trying to figure out Remus's secert is really interesting. It gives it a little mystery. I love your story it has a really nice plot but i must say that there is a lot of dialogue. so don't get mad you asked me to comment.


Your sis,

Isla

Thanks,

I should have 9 by next week. I really think that the fact that lily is so smart helps her with his secret. Thanks for all your support o sarah and isla. Love you all.

`M

Hey britishemmafan,
I just started reading your fic, and just thought I tell you that I think its a great story. I just finished through chapter 8 and I can't wait for the next few chapters! =D
Happy Writing!
~Cassie

Hey,
Cassie - I was really amazed when I saw that someone had posted on here! Like no one comes here. I'm soooo glad you found it. Keep reading. The next chapter will be up on hmmmmm... I'm sending the next chapter to my beta on Tuesday. She could have it back to me that day or Wednesday or Thursday, but I'm hoping that it's before Saturday.

Thanks again for posting and reading. you guys rock!!

Emery

Hey, M and CONGRAULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sis you got ANOTHER reader. thank you thank you thank you so much cassie me and my sis really appreciate it. britishemmafan is my sis and she has been really down about having no readers. i kept telling her she would get some and you are an answer to her prayers. thanks you. great chapter by the way. the conflict, love, suspene, all has a good level to it. it is a really good story.


IsLa

Hey,

Gosh a lot of comments, ( that's a good thing).
Isla yeah I really enjoy writing the suspense.

Cassie, I hope you keep reading it gets really good.

no problem redheadfan.

And britishemmafan, I'll keep reading as long as you keep going with your story, like I said before I think its really good!
still waiting for those next few chapters
oh and Happy Writing!!
~Cassie

Hi,

Guys, I'm sending the next chapter to beta now. Hope you keep reading it gets really really good. Gotta go send!!

~Emery

britishemmafan-

Pretty good fanfic you've started here. I like your storyline, in the sense, that I like what you've decided to include and how you've included it. However, I do feel like you could add a little more meat to your story by adopting a more detailed style of writing. It just felt a little rushed for me; especially when looking at Lily hating James one day and 24 hours later, she loves him. Take your time and I really think you'll do fantastic. Actually, when I'm writing my fanfic, I always write the chapter super quick...but then I have to remind myself to take a couple days and fill it in so that the timeline makes more sense. Just food for thought.


I'll keep following your fanfic so keep writing.


-Nick
HJP

Hi guys! Happy Halloween!! And with that I give you the next chapter and This!! I hope you like it. I thought it was cute.

Nick,
Thanks soooooooooo much for your comment. I really appreciate it. I was a bit mad at first, but then I realized, WOW he's so right. That first part was just a little retarded. Thanks for the comment.

I'm glad I'm getting more readers! Thanks you guys, I hope you like the new chapter.

Sorry if my post made you mad, it was simply to express constructive criticism. But as I'm writing this I'm also reading your new chapter.

It's always a nice read when Lily and James get along. I particularly enjoy thinking about James and the Marauders with Lily around. It's also very intriguing how you brought Severus in at the end. I would have liked to see a bit more expansion on that idea before you ended the chapter.

All-in-all, pretty good chapter.


-Nick
HJP

I thought it was good, but short. I wish your would have made the chapter a bit longer, but over all I thought it was good.
Happy Writing
-Cassie

Hi,

I'm sorry I didn't mean to make it so short. Now I feel bad I keep on getting way to over excited just about posting and getting comments. This whole thing is quite new to me. I'm gonna continue this story and hopefully it will get better. I'm writing another one just on the side. It's really really good. It's not about J/L though. I'll ponder it.

Thanks! Emery

oh, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to upset you, I just wanted to tell you what I thought, other than being short it was great!
Oh, and if you decide to put up your other story, tell me. I'd love to read that fanfic too.
Happy Writing =D
-Cassie

I just finished reading Chapter 9. I really like it! Especially the way you ended it.. I wonder if Snape will show up, and I can't wait until the ball

Sarah.x