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Hello!!

I was searching my microsoft word saved items thing and i looked at something i found odd. So i asked my brother and said oh yeah! my old fanfiction from last year! I forgot about that.

So Here I am Coming to redo my brothers work!

Note: I do not own any of the scenes or any of the characters that relate to Harry Potter. All rights go to JKR

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There's Someone Out-there

Chapter 1
"Hurry before you miss the train dear!"
"Mom, please, I am getting on now." answers Nicole Walders coldly.
"Well I would hate for you to miss your third year at Hogwarts! I remember my third year.."
"Bye mom, love you," says Nicole trying to avoid her mother making a scene. She leans out the window and gives her a kiss, "see you at Christmas."

Leaning back and siting down just as the train begins to depart, she begins to wonder where some friends may be. The door slides open and in steps Allison, one of the few friends Nicole does have. Nicole gives a soft smile and beckons the tall, blonde headed girl to sit.
"Oh, hi Nicole..er.. I was looking for..er.. Roger.. have u seen him?" questions Allison trying not to sound rude.
”Oh, did you two end up together again over the summer" whispers Nicole taken aback.
"Err..yes"
" Well i haven't seen him." snaps Nicole angrily
" Well..err..I guess i'd be going then.." Answers Allison trying to think of what she said to have made her friend so hasty. Nicole replies with a stiff nod as she turns and leaves. Tearing up she leans towards the window to view the scenerey quickly passing by.

About fifteen minutes pass and Nicole hears the faint laughter of boys coming down the train.
" Wow I can't believe it is our sixth year guys."
" I know it is amazing only two more years and we will be out of school!"
" im excited about these next years though arent you?" As one of the boys say this they pass in front of the compartment. Nicole flushes when she sees who it is.

Outside the compartment stood probably the most popular boy in school. His name was Anthony Porter. A gryffindor who has outstanding marks in all classes, and is the seeker for the Gryffindor Quidditch team. His Brown hair and Brown eyes reflect off the light and make Nicole melt whenever she sees him. No one knew that Nicole had fallen for him the first day she saw him. She knew that he saw right through her and probably didn’t even knew she existed.

Matt you dork." jokes the tall red head named Zach. Nicole, trying to hold herself from not getting up and chasing Anthony down the corridor, stands up and rummages through her trunk looking for her diary. After minutes of looking she comes across it. Grabbing a quill and opening to the next page she begins to write:

Dear Diary,
Today while I was sitting in my compartment alone, I saw Anthony Porter. His eyes just make me want to die in front of him. I would give anything in the world to go out with him and be with him forever. The way he treats his friends and the way he even treats his enemies just shows me the kind of loving person he is. I wish he just knew how I feel about him. Here comes the candy cart. I am going to grab a bite to eat, ill write tomorrow

Nicole



Throwing her diary in her trunk she stands up and stretches a bit and walks out for a second to grab some every flavored beans. Her mind racing of thoughts of one day her and Anthony, she forgot to watch where she was walking and she walks right into the door frame and spills all of her beans. Blushing she bends down slowly and starts to pick them up saying sorry to the candy cart lady for her accident.

"Oh,its ok dear, here let me help," pulling her to the side she whips out her wand and waves it and all the beans are gone. "Take some more its perfectly fine." Grabbing the second box of candy Nicole runs back into her compartment with tears streaming down her face. She slams the door and all the laughter that was once there stops at once. Sliding onto the floor, Nicole buries her head into her hands and begins to sob loudly.
Why does this always happen to me? What did I ever do to deserve this misery?

After a while she begins to calm down and stands up. Glancing out the window at the darkening sky she decides to begin putting her robes on.
Slowing down the Hogwarts express beings to prepare to reach Hogsmeade and the excitement of Hogwarts fills the train. Thankful that the ride is finally over Nicole starts to walk towards the carriages very slowly, trying not to bring much attention to herself. Hearing a few chuckles she ignores them and finds a seat in a carriage. Staring out of the window she sees Anthony walk by with all of his friends. Hmm I wonder if he has a girlfriend she thinks. She leans back and closes her eyes. Let me have a good year this year that’s all I ask




Well the first few are going to be a little slow and a little short.. ill get back tomorrow to make the second chapter thanks guys! hope you all enjoyed

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Hello all!

I have found and adjusted my brothers second chapter! So here it is a brand new chapter for Theres Someone Out There!

Enjoy!!

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Chapter 2:

Walking rather quickly up the solid stone steps, Anthony could not wait to join all of his friends for the feast. Starving, he countinues his in depth conversation about who may win the Quidditch season.

"I’m telling you like i have been for the past 5 years we have been on the quidditch team," explains Zach “It’s going to be Gryffindor and Slytherin for the cup!"

"I agree but I think Ravenclaw may give us a run for our money if we aren't careful." points out Anthony rather modestly. "Ravenclaw had some good talent last year and their seeker, Dalton Davis, can be extremely good if he actually knew what he was doing" Laughs Anthony remembering back to last year when Gryffindor defeated Ravenclaw rather quickly. The snitch was seen about five minutes into the match by Davis. Not having much experience he quickly lost sight of it. Anthony, being on the team since his second year, saw the snitch due to Davis’s careless mistake of chasing it immediately and caught it within the first ten minutes.

"Yea, he needs some good teaching from the best of the best. Anthont Porter!" Zach announces with arms outspread. Nodding at everyone that looked at him Anthony then shook his head at Zach and walked into the Great Hall.

"Hey Anthony!" yells several students who he haven’t even met. Not trying to be rude he raises a hand in hello and takes a seat at the Gryffindor table. Stomach growling and eyes drooping he turns his head as he hears the headmistress stand to greet the students. Rather than listening, like Matt insisted, Anthony chose to talk to this girl who seemed to have a bit too much make-up on.

What seemed like hours later, after the sorting and rule setting, the usual who-ha as Zach likes to call it, the greatest moments in Anthonys life become true for the sixth time. The feast went rather smooth and rather tasty. Throughout it he could not help but notice this one girl at the end of the table all by herself. Never has he laid eyes on such a beautiful girl. He immediatly began asking himself Who is this girl? Why havent i met her before? Whats her name? How old is she?

"uhh..Anthony are you ok?" asks Phillip Gastof.

"Wha..huh.. yea im fine just had my mind somewhere else for a minute or so." he replies

"A few minutes? I have been trying to talk to you for the past twenty minutes!"

"Oh, sorry. Really I am I was just wondering who that girl was down alone at the end of the table." says Anthony, finally prying his eyes away from the prettiest girl he has seen in a long time. Talking but not thinking he begins to think of that girls brown hair with the slight touch of blonde in it. Her sparkling blue eyes that were perfectly visible from the other side of the table.

"Ohh.. Are you talking about Nicole? My sister is in her year. She says that she doesnt have many friends. She is just extremely shy, so no one comes up and talks to her that often. She seems like a nice girl and all, but really, dude, you could get someone way better." Turning his head, Anthony looks back at the beautiful brunet and thinks, how could you get someone more amazing then what I have seen so far

After the feast, Anthony tries to keep his eyes on the girl who is named Nicole, But is forced to walk with his friends up to the Gryffindor common room.

Sitting alone for a little while Anthony begins to think of this sunning girl and why she would be that way.

“Is she smart? Is she talkative once you get to know her? Is she dating anyone at the moment? Is she not good enough for me..no..no she is I can’t think negatively. Is she funny?” wonders Anthony. “I never see her in the common room, I know she is a Gryffindor I saw her at the end of our table. So where does she go?

“Hey Anothony!” Calls a fifth year girl named Brittany.
“Hello.” Answers Anthony not even thinking to what he was saying or too whom. Smiling at this reply, Brittany walks away with her popular group of friends in their year.

Anthony Continuing to think to himself concludes, “If I ever see anyone picking on Nicole or making fun of her in any way I will have a little….chat…. with this person. And we will see if they ever feel like messing with an extremely innocent person. Just let them try.”

Satisfied, Anthony leans forward and stands up slowly, Legs popping as he stands. He turns and makes his way up to his dormitory.
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Well here we are again for the third Chapter. I hope I can make this one a little more interesting for you guys! smile.gif
Shall we begin?

Chapter 3:

Walking slowly to her next class, Nicole could not stop thinking of the night before. At the feast she could not help but notice Anthony staring at her. The situation made her feel rather awkward, but in a good way. I wonder why he kept staring at me, I know he didnt stare at anyone else because I was the only one around. Thought Nicole Did I have something on my face? Did someone crack another joke on me? Asking herself all these questions Nicole shuffles in and grabs a seat in the front of the class all alone.

"Tomorrow, Miss Walders I will expect you to be more attentive in my class" scolds Professor Longbottom as class is dismissed.

"Sorry Professer I just dont have my mind in it today." Says Nicole rather cheerfully. why am I so happy? i havent done well in all my classes today?

"Well I expect you to be ready for class tomorrow!" Calls Professor Longbottom from the entrance of the greenhouses. Turning and waving Nicole continues to walk. Walking alone as usual she begins to think about the night before. Not paying any attention she runs right into one of the great pillars that hold up the castle. Turning red in the face Nicole looks around at everyone laughing at her. Taking in the scene from a distance is no other than Rachel Glasser. With an evil smirk on her face she turns on her heels and goes to find Maddie. The laughter echoes off the walls of the castle and get louder as other students come and try to find out what is so funny. Eyes watering and face bright red, Nicole turns and runs for any room that she is able to get to without getting followed. Finally finding an empty room Nicole gently slides the door shut trying not to draw attention to herself. She glances around the dark room and begins to cry. Holding her head in her hands she mutters.

I hate my life

There is a slight commotion outside between a couple of boys.

"Go ahead ill catch up with you guys at lunch I have to go and do something." Says Anthony right outside her room. All the others bid there farewells until lunch and begin to march away, Nicole could tell by there voices getting softer and softer. A few seconds pass and Nicole begins wondering what Anthony had to do. Just then a soft knock came from the door. Nicole froze. Could it be that what ever Anthony had to do was be with her? Slowly rising from the floor Nicole gingerly makes her way to the door. Another knock. Grasping the handle Nicole turns the handle slowly and pulls the door open. Her heart racing she peeks out from behind the door. Standing there with a smile on his face is Anthony. Her heart beating faster then what feels comfortable, she beckons him inside. "Wow, Nice place you have here." Jokes Anthony apparently trying to make her feel better. Nicole is able to suppress a slight giggle and that is all. "I saw what happened by the entrance." says Anthony turning, his smile gone. "I thought it was quite rude how people started to laugh at you for just running into something! Every one has done something embarrassing in their lifetime and have been laughed at it im sure. So why would you want someone else to have to suffer how you felt when you didnt want to be laughed at."

"I have a question for you." says Nicole slowly and not really thinking. " Why did you come here, I’m just a third year and I have no friends that actually talk to me. And you are Mr. Popular and all talking to Miss No-body. It just doesn’t make sense.” Taking all what Nicole says slowly Anthony turns his head down and takes a deep breath.

"Nicole look, Yes I only found out who you where just at the feast,but in my eyes you are wonderfull, amazing, and misunderstood. Im sorry that you think that you dont have many friends--"

"I dont! ok I just dont i dont know why but i dont!" Shrieks Nicole as tears start pooling in her eyes. Eyes wide from the sudden outburst Anthony shakes his head.

"Why do you say that? I’m your friend! And I will always be a friend!" Looking right into her eyes Anthony sees a glimmer of happiness and love within them. "If something ever happens to you come find me. I don’t care if its a first year or a seventh year I will take care of them. Do you understand?" Chocking back her tears Nicole nods her head. "Good, I’m glad that we are friends." Stepping closer Anthony reaches around Nicole and gives her a hug. Heart Pounding Nicole slowly wraps her arms around him and smiles. "Hey I need to get going so Zach doesn’t come looking for me. I’m glad we got to talk and I’m glad I have you as a friend.

"You aren’t joking with me saying that we are friends and all? are you?" whispers Nicole just loud enough for Anthony to hear. Turning around Anthonys eyes show friendship all throughout them.

"Nicole, do I seem like the kind of guy that would come and say all that and then just leave you for yourself? No, I meant what I said and I will always be your friend." Smiling slightly, Anthony opens the door and leaves Nicole standing in the room alone.

Five minutes later Nicole is running as fast as she could up towards the girls dormitories.
Throwing the door shut as she enters and rushing towards her trunk. "where is it, where is- Aha!" Shouts Nicole as she finds her diary. Looking for a quill she finds one with a jar of ink on Susy Ranker's table. Not thinking that she will mind she picks up the quill and begins to write:

Dear Diary,

You will never guessed to what happened to me today! Well it started as I was walking back from Herbology when I ran into one of those large pillars at the front of the school. Well, everyone started laughing at me and I began to get upset. I ran as fast as I could shielding my face so no passing students could see me crying. I found an empty classroom and took refuge there as I sat crying. But guess who walked in. Anthony Porter! I felt so amazed that I almost fell over. But he told me that if anything like this or something happens that makes me upset then I should come and find him and he would help me take care of it! He told me that we were friends and that I was amazing and wonderfull! I couldnt help but notice in his eyes, it seemed like he had a glimmer of love and friendship. But it may just be a stupid feeling that I was getting. Well I’m off to lunch I will write back soon!

Nicole


Laying the book down on her bed and putting the quill and ink back where it belonged Nicole stood, and skipped down to the Great Hall alone but feeling that someone really special was with her. In her heart.
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There we go! Another one bites the dust!! I hope everything is going good in your opinion! Oh! And did i mention you can leave Feedback Here??!!

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