Hello everyone! Just wondering what you thought of chapter one, thanks so much for the feedback!

I think that this opening chapter is a very promising start! I'm fairly new to the James/Lily fics, but I can figure out when I've read a good one and this is definitely going to be good. James and Lily at her house for a month. Can't wait for another chapter!

~alyssa~

Another two chapters well done! So now that they're friends they will inevitably spend more time together instead of avoiding each other and hiding out in their own rooms. More time spent together also means that they will get to know each other, become comfortable with each other, and eventually go out with each other.

Can't wait till the next chapter!

~alyssa~

Sorry I didn't leave any feedback sooner. I'll try harder next time! But, as usual, you produced another good chapter. I thought them shopping together was extremely cute and sweet. James was a good sport, considering how guys usually are. He even picked out a gorgeous dress for her, and she liked it. I feel kinda bad for James, because he loves Lily so much, but she won't really give him the time of day. In time she will come to love him though and that is what I'm looking forward to.

~alyssa~

write more! write more!write more! write more!(:
i love it, lily is exactly how i imagined her, same with james, i'm excited to see how they start to go out, and their first kiss and everything(:
but, there was this one grammar mistake that i saw, for dialogues, it goes,
"blah blah blah," said(or exclaimed/whispered/shouted/ect) james.
or like this:
"What is your favorite color?" asked Lily
there's only supposed to be one puncutation, not .", or the other way around, but that's only grammar, i loved the story to death though(:

Hi! Wow! Great story! I loved the part about the necklace. It's always fun to describe things like that. Anyway... you've done a great job already! You do a good job describing things. I can picture them clearly. I always look for that in a story. The only thing I recommend is to re-read the story and look for misspelled words. Use ABC spell check if you don't think that is the right spelling. I'm going to rate your story. 1- best, 10- terrible. Your rating is... 3! Good Job!!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! If you have time then please read and comment on my story 'Never Leave'.
~Squish

ah! great new chapter, i loved it!
i can't wait for the next chapter though, till they actaully see each other, so pretty pretty please update!
btw, your grammar was pretty good on this one(:

Hi guys! Sorry it took me so long to put up that chapter, but I hope you enjoyed it. If you don't, tell me what I can do to make it better! If you do like it, positive feedback is alwasy appreciated. Thanks a bunch!

WackoJacko

wackojacko- another great chapter! i loved it(:
hahaah, lily and james playing the 'game', it cracked me up, it was great, ahhh
but what's the scream? who is it from? is it lily having a nightmare? deatheaters? or maybe it's something stupid like a spider on the wall? (haha, i always get frightened by those little buggers)
anyways, i can't wait till the next chapter; happy writing!(:

marauderxforever...you just made my life! I seriously think I'm going to change the next chapter haha you've inspired me :] Spiders freak me out so bad! They're really scary for some reason, and I don't even know why. But I freak out too haha Thanks...the game makes me chuckle too! I shall update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter of Love and Reason Are Sworn Enemies!

Hope you all like Chapter Eight!

wackojacko!
ahh! i changed the outcome of the chapter(:
hahaha, i loved it; i just finished writing my next chapter and it sort of is like yours, but james slips something out.
i can't wait till the next chapter; happy writing(: