I'm gonna take each character one by one, and I'll start with Fenrir.
Just the Droobles said it PERFECTLY:
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I think Fenrir Greyback should have gotten more screen time. I don't think the audience is going to be able to understand how truly horrible he is. I feel like we needed that contrast against Lupin to understand why people in the Wizarding world don't like werewolves.
In my opinion, that's exactly it. In the books, we were told why he was different than the other werewolves, and the description of him biting anyone that came within his range, even not during the time of the full moon, made us understand exactly how much he should be feared, even among the powerful wizards of the time. In the movie, if you weren't paying that much attention, you probably would have missed him, or mistaken him for a normal Death Eater. Also, if you hadn't read the book, you almost were guaranteed to mistake him for something or somebody else. I'm hoping that in both parts of Deathly Hallows, Yates takes the time to explain why we should be afraid of Fenrir, rather than just putting him in the fray of battle and leaving us to draw our own conclusions.
Lavender was amazing. I was expecting, based on how she acted in the books, her role to be completely overdone to the point of ridicule. However, I was pleasantly surprised that she was portrayed so well...just the right amount of annoying and clingy to be true to the role, but not enough to make the viewer cringe and want to walk away.
The two boys who played Tom Riddle were okay, in my mind. They served their purpose, but didn't stand out in my mind. I don't know what would have made me like them more, but all I can do is stand impartial in this situation.
Slughorn, also, was wonderful. I never really liked him in the books, and so I didn't like him here. However, it was the CHARACTER I didn't like. Because the actor that took on the role gave me the same feeling that the Slughorn in the book did, it's clear that Yates and the other casting directors picked a good person to fill the role. (He also looked exactly like I pictured him to in my head, so that's a total plus.)
One person that I thought was nice to add in (and that hasn't been mentioned so far) was Romilda Vane. I LOVED the tangent in the book about Ron eating the potion-filled candies meant for Harry and falling in love with her, and she was put in the movie just the right amount of times to make her presence noticable.
So, I guess, in all, the director's choice in people was a positive one. However, as mentioned above, I think they could have done some things a little better.