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gamma
Hello, it's me Gamma! I haven't been to Veritaserum in a long time, and my fan fic writing skills have gotten rusty. So I decided to write a completely original fiction, set in Jo's magical world. The story revolves around Mike Grambridge, and ordinary (or so it seems) muggle cop in england, who discovers the world of witchcraft and wizardry in the times of the first war with voldemort.

Chapter one will be up shortly! Please comment and tell me what you like and dislike.

-Gamma

gamma
Chapter two will be up shortly. I would like to convey my interest in an editor. If anyone would like to help, please PM me. It would be greatly appreciated.

Anyways, I'd like to thank you guys for reading. It's a little tough getting back into the HP world after a two year writing absence but I believe chapter three will really kick things off.

Thanks

-Gamma
snape_rox_my_socks
That's so good! I can't wait to read more. I love Lucius' clever, but cowardly way of getting out of the fight. please update soon

Lottie
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gamma
I would like to let you know that chapter three will be up soon. I am almost finished with the chapter. Chapter four will be an important one. I hope you all enjoy it. Please leave feedback! smile.gif

-Gamma
snape_rox_my_socks
loved it! thought the way that Arthur enjoys the gun so much was so funny, and so Arthur. cant wait to see what happens with Mike. i like the way you use James' phrase to describe Lupin's werewolf problem. keep up the good work!

Lottie
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zwillo
I really like this story so far, I find it really interesting!! I can't wait to find out where you go with it all, and exactly what kind of powers Mike has. I think it's great that Mike is from Utah (that's where I'm from) happy.gif !

If you still need a beta, I'd be happy to help!

Anyways, great job! I can't wait to read more!!!

~Dayna
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