Welcome to the feedback thread for Taken. I would VERY much appreciate your honest and hopefully helpful opinions, so if you feel like being nice go to the top and click Add Reply.

Loves,
Aly

Alykat,

It's so great to see this posted! It's a wonderful first chapter, filled with suspense, mystery and just enough information to make me want to find out more. I've already said it, but I'll say it again; I love that you have woven known characters, like Lily and Remus, into the story. It gives us an idea of the time line as well as some back-story. Great Job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter (and being able to read it first )!

Lisa Lee

You already know that I love this chapter, Aly, but I thought I'd leave some proper feedback. I really enjoyed the added suspense of Draco being Raven's captor. I am wondering what on Earth he is doing back in her time. Why is he there? Who sent him? The suspense is killing me!

I'm looking forward to finding out if Raven will tell Sev, Lily and her other friends about Draco, or if she'll keep him her little secret.

Please keep writing, Alykat. It's a great story. I hope others will start leaving feedback for you. I understand how difficult it is to keep momentum going when you're not sure how readers are interpreting your work because of lack of feedback. *hint, hint readers*

Love Ya,
Lisa

*sigh* Thanks Lisa, I'm really glad you like it, but if I don't get anymore feedback then I won't be posting anymore. Although I will keep writing and sending the chapter directly to you. Honestly, I don't know how I got such an awesome beta!


Aly

Hey Aly!

I wish I would have found this story sooner. I'm very intrigued!!! I can't wait to find out what happened. I hope you will continue, it's great! I absolutely love time travel fics, and this one is very promising!

Take care, sweetie!
~Dayna

Weeee, I finally read some of it! It's very interesting. Its too bad you haven't posted in a while... I think you should try to continue. Give it time to gain popularity; not writing isn't going to help! I don't know what exactly is happening with the time travelling or whatever, and it would be very nice to know... you're very brave to mess with time! Anyway I like the introduction thingy at the beginning of the story. Looots of suspense.

It reminds me a bit of my fic... I had a DM/OC story about a girl who turned into a raven, I don't remember what her name was though. That's bad, haha.

Hope you keep writing!