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this be jasmine(:
So, if you're here, then I'm assuming you've read my story, Winging It. If you haven't, then you're in the wrong thread... Well, if you have, then post feedback! Whether you liked it, hated it, I accept all kinds of reviews. (:

-Jasmine
marauderxforever
ohohoh, a new fic!(:
it has a really good start, this is their 5th year, am i correct?
i can't wait to see how this fic turns out, keep on writing(:
this be jasmine(:
Yeah, their fifth. (:

Glad you like it! I have a few more chapters written, and I shall post them when I get the chance. Thanks for the review! biggrin.gif
marauderxforever
ah, this is good! it's getting a tad confusing with all the new characters, but i got it(:
i have a prediction from the first part you wrote, but i'm hoping i'm wrong!
and i'm wondering something for the next chapter, i wouldn't think lily would most likely run into the marauder's compartment, but hey, maybe she accidently ran in there, i guess i'll have to wait for teh next chapter!!
this be jasmine(:
Thanks! Sorry it's confusing, I'm kind of just trying to map everything out at the moment.
I'm really glad you like it. (:
And, well... I know what happens, but unfortunately I can't say. xD Sorry.

Thanks so much for the review! biggrin.gif
Death Eater
I really enjoyed it but switching from character to character to character and back again is pretty confuzzling. Correct me if im wrong but I like the mix of original characters and the characters that are actually in the HP series.
this be jasmine(:
Okay, sorry. I didn't mean for it to be confusing...

Er, yeahp. That's what it is, basically. (: So, no correction's needed! biggrin.gif

Thanks for reviewing. biggrin.gif
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