Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Aug 5 2009, 08:50 PM
Please leave feedback here for my one-shot Purpose. Just so you know, this is actually the prologue of a story I wrote by hand, but I thought that it went quite nicely on it's own, so I decided to publish it. I hope you enjoyed it!
Ellie
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lisasnape
Aug 7 2009, 04:41 AM
Yay, I love being first! Ellie, your one-shot was great! I loved the way the three sisters had such distinct personalities, both Bella and Cissy being far less likable than Dromeda, but yet all had similarities as well. They knew early on what their place was in their family and knew what they wanted out of life. And all three of them got exactly what they wanted, although their lives are so completely different, but they found their purpose!
Great Job!
Lisa
Alastorlet_and_Proud!
Aug 7 2009, 09:40 AM
Thank you for your feedback lisa! I'm glad you like it.
I know what you mean about Andromeda being likable. I've always felt so sorry for her, because I always imagined her in Slytherin, so, unlike Sirius, she didn't fit in but she didn't have the courage to break away right from the very start. I definitely tried to make her the most human out of the three.
Ellie
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