MK; First off, thank you very much for your feedback! I'm glad that you liked it, and I agree - there really aren't enough stories about Remus out there. That's okay for me though haha; it means people will read my stories about his adventures! I'm kidding about that though. I understand what you mean about Remus' emotions not being very clear, but as Stef pointed out Remus always hid his true emotions. At least until he couldn't take it anymore. I admit that when I was editing I thought that Remus had been
too emotional. The second reason for why Remus' emotions weren't too clear is because in essence the story is about Tonks. I didn't want his character to overshadow hers. A difficult feat that would be anyway; Tonks can be rather outgoing! Nevertheless, I thank you very much for your comments. I appreciate it all!
Stef; Yes, I am back to writing. I didn't realize how much I missed it. And I have some news regarding that as well; I've decided that either I will continue with Apprehensive and Remus, or I will create a whole new story. I'm torn on what I should do. But now, regarding this story! Thank you for your feedback, and I'm glad that you can see where I was coming from with Remus haha. I do love him so. You know his quiet nature and the fact that he was always calm, cool, and collected makes him a rather difficult character to write. It's hard to get in his head!
Gryff; Thank you for your feedback! As I said above, I really love Remus, and I like loved his relationship with Tonks. I'm glad you liked it. I like how you put that, about a grown up Tonks in her childhood bedroom. I hadn't even thought about it like that, but I like it.
Many hugs and thanks to the three of you, I really treasure your feedback!
--x Lauren