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Ginny.Weasley
Hello again. Hopefully you've read my one-shot For You I Will and will leave me all your thoughts and critique. Like any author, I love feedback! If you haven't read it, you really ought to! Thank you in advance!

--x Lauren
firewhiskeyboy
Well I read a story that you wrote about Remus and I figure I'd check this one out since I hadn't seen anything by you in a while.

This was all around cute. I think there aren't enough stories about Remus out there and I'm glad that there's someone who takes the time to write about him. He is after all still human but no one really seems to remember that. I only wish you would have made his emotions clearer. I'm sure you could have added more depth to what you wrote but I liked it.

Good job

MK
fany_monkey
Darlin!!!

You're back to the writing scene!!!! I'm super happy that you're writing again! I hope you start a new fic while you're still on vacations!

Well I disagree with MK (big shocker there). I think it had enough depth because well Remus is a character that isn't big on emotions. He doesn't share with himself with anyone. Even the woman he loves. So it was enough depth. I do agree that you are amazing deary for writing about Remus. He's cool and well a bit abandoned.

I loved it dear and I hope you write some more!!!

-Stef
Gryffravenslytherpuff
very cute. remus is probably one of the most underrated characters, and it was nice to see him this way. also, it was nice to see a more 'grown up' side of tonks - even if she was in her childhood bedroom. happy.gif

gryff.
Ginny.Weasley
MK; First off, thank you very much for your feedback! I'm glad that you liked it, and I agree - there really aren't enough stories about Remus out there. That's okay for me though haha; it means people will read my stories about his adventures! I'm kidding about that though. I understand what you mean about Remus' emotions not being very clear, but as Stef pointed out Remus always hid his true emotions. At least until he couldn't take it anymore. I admit that when I was editing I thought that Remus had been too emotional. The second reason for why Remus' emotions weren't too clear is because in essence the story is about Tonks. I didn't want his character to overshadow hers. A difficult feat that would be anyway; Tonks can be rather outgoing! Nevertheless, I thank you very much for your comments. I appreciate it all!

Stef; Yes, I am back to writing. I didn't realize how much I missed it. And I have some news regarding that as well; I've decided that either I will continue with Apprehensive and Remus, or I will create a whole new story. I'm torn on what I should do. But now, regarding this story! Thank you for your feedback, and I'm glad that you can see where I was coming from with Remus haha. I do love him so. You know his quiet nature and the fact that he was always calm, cool, and collected makes him a rather difficult character to write. It's hard to get in his head!

Gryff; Thank you for your feedback! As I said above, I really love Remus, and I like loved his relationship with Tonks. I'm glad you liked it. I like how you put that, about a grown up Tonks in her childhood bedroom. I hadn't even thought about it like that, but I like it. smile.gif

Many hugs and thanks to the three of you, I really treasure your feedback! happy.gif

--x Lauren
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