If you have read Love and Reason Are Sworn Enemies, then this is the feedback thread for you. (:
I take positive and negative comments, so feel free to leave either; this is my first fic.

I absolutely loved it! It's a perfect way to show how Lily and James got together. And I loved when James was all Lilykins and Sirius was all like Lilyflower! Ah, it made me laugh (: Please post more soon!

-Emily(:

thank you so much emily/lagoria, as i'm not sure which one you prefer me to call you, you're the ONLY one to leave feedback, the little buggers >:O but hey, i'm not gonna vent to you, chapter two is up now, and i'll have chapter three by friday? saturday the latest.

Ah, Emily is fine (: Ah, You Make Me Laugh It's fine, I understand... I love it yet again! I love that in the beginning Dumbledore was all like 'this long, painful speech', It totally cracked me up! (: And I thought that was creative how Dumbledore made them hand-cuffed to each other. And what James said was pretty true, Lily does that all the time! Post Some more soon!

Oh, and thanks for the feedback on my story! (:

-Emily(:

I really enjoyed your story! I totally feel you on people not leaving feedback It's sort of saddening at times. But your grammar looked good ;] Can't wait for the next chapter!

WackoJacko

all right, i'm sorry i haven't posted in forever, but thanks so much for the feedback(:
i have the chapter written, so i'll post it in a few(:

AWH! They Had A Moment! That's So Cute! Lol, I Loved The Chapter though! Keep writing/posting soon! (:

-Emily(:

Ok so I give up... how do you do that?
you tell a story where everyone is perfectly clear on how it's going to end but still make the plot intersting and surprising and enjoyable to read.
I love it... its great!!!

I can't wait for more.

keep going, your story is awesome

I loved the chapter! That moment was so adorable when she was like, 'I think I'm starting to.' I thought that was so adorable I actually squealed. And I don't squeal. Ever. Until just then! Keep on writing! Post soon! Oh, and chapter 6 is up if you wanna read it(:

-Emily(:

I've been reading a lot of fanfics about James and Lily trying to find ones I like and I recently I've been finding really good ones, I think yours is great and I can't wait to read more!
Happy Writing,
-Cassie