Okay, Here's The Feedback For Catch Me (:
Negative and Positive Comments are Welcome... Positive Would be Nice Though (:
I'll Post the Link To The Fanfic If You've Never Read It Yet (:

-Emily(:

Okay, Here's The Link For The Fanfic...

Catch Me

hey! first off, i'd like to thank you for feedback-ing my story!(:
now for your review:
you're off at a really good start! i laughed out loud when james asked lily again, haha, but i have a feeling you've been called stubborn before? i have, and alot, and you got lily's reaction perfectly(: congrats, update soon
happy writing(:

I love it. it is amazing. you are a great writer. i really liked the part where you did the flashback it is so good and the part where lily and james fight in the flashback adds alot of drama.

~Isla

OMG, that story was amazing. It was really good-I loved how you described Lily's friends and how you showed everyone that James has feelings. All boys do! We just hide them...don't ask me why. Beautifully written and fantastic story idea, can't wait to read more!

Is Isla pronounced 'Iz-lah' or 'Eye-lah'

Awh! How Sweet! Thank you Joey Ravenclaw! (: I Thought So Too. I Have Tons of Guy Friends and A lot Of Girl Friends, and Trust Me, My Guy Friends Confuse Me The Most. It's Probably Because They're weird....
Maybe, I Don't Know (:
But Again, Thanx For The Comment (:
Oh, It's Pronounced 'Eye-luh.' Oh Wow, Isla...You Were Right, Lol! (x

-Emily(:

I told you. you see i have been asked how to pronouce my name for like forever. my doctor who has been seeing my since i was a baby still gets it wrong. I love that i am in the story. it is an amazing feeling to think that your friends care enough about you to put you in there amazing stories that you think are the best. you also think that your sister's stories are the best.

ah, sorry, i didn't have time to be on veritaserum since school started, so sorry!!
this is a great chapter, i love the descriptions of lily's friends, and i loved it from james' POV, but i did think that it was a bit extreme for him to cry (but that's just me, i don't usually cry), can't wait for the next chapter; happy writing(:

bridget(:

Woo,I was mentioned! This story was really amazing! I'm getting really addictive and really hope you write more! You're a really good writer and it puts my fanfic to shame! Keep writing fellow author!

~Joey

oh no! james, don't give up! and lily don't say that! ahh! this is a really good chapter though! i can't wait till the next one, and sorry i haven't updated in forever, school started last week, plus diving and band, i'll update soon!
this story's going great(:

hey it is still great. just like i said in my PM i am very glad i am falling in love with Sirius instead of somebody else. you are the best Emily.

~Isla

That was a really good chapter, keep writing:) Woo, I was in a dedication

Wait did me and Sirius kiss?

I am confused. Please report back. Soon! If we did and I know.
Falling in love is such an easy thing to do. Can't wait to read the next chapter. You have me dreaming about it. Yah! I am having such lovely dreams. oh emily check your PM's!!!!!!


~Isla (Swift)

ahh! more hate and hate! ahh!
but hey, they can't get together for awhile, so it's all good(:
this was yet another really chapter, the story is coming along great!!
i'm going to write my next chapter today, i swear, but
happy writing(:

Emily!!!!!!!! YOU HAVEN'T ANSWERED MY QUESTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING WACKO PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE POST!!!!!!!!!!!



Isla (Swift)

ahhhahha
i'm guessing james and sirius are coming over for the summer! haha, yesss!
and i also love that the description of james's stare, great job!
i love this fic(: & i can't wait for the next chapter;
happy writing!

Interesting. James and Lily. James. coming over. Nice plan. Lily better come to her senses soon and agree to date him or both of them are going to be plunged into a world of darkness.
~Isla (Swift)

Just wanted to say hey!! the kinds of posts we are getting on VTM are amazing. New threads, new storys.

Its nice.

Isla

New avvys new siggys.

Like me.


I am going to stop now.

lmao, first off....

THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!
haha, sorry, i've had god knows how many of those the past couple of days
i thought it was really sweet when james said
then it broke my heart when i read the description of james's heart breaking, but it made me laugh when james was like, i don't, and closed the door, lmao! so like james(:
can't wait for the next chapter; happy writing(:

Thank you guys(: I hope to post my next chapter soon. But then again, Isla needs to check her PMs Lol, but thank you XD

-Emily(:

I finished reading chapter 6, and i thought it was great!I really like your idea for the whole story, and cannot wait to read the next chapter, hope you post it up soon!
-Cassie

(I know I posted feedback not long ago, but since I read the new chapter you posted up I thought I'd leave some more.)
So, Great Chapter!!!
One of my favorite parts was when Lily found the Note and Locket. That was soo cute!
I am now addicted to your fanfic!
Happy Writing!
-Cassie

first off, i am incredibly sorry that i didn't review the last chapter! school, diving and homework get in the way too much for my liking!

hehehe, that made me laugh; i absolutely love that!
yessyessyessyess! you made me do the internal happy dance when lily had the epiphany (that's spelled funny). anyways, i can't wait till your next chapter; happy writing!

Your story just keeps getting better, I loved the ending!
haha that was an awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one!
-Cassie
(P.S. I love how you use Lily and James' point of view too.)

hahaha, i absolutely love that(: i agree with Harry.Potter.Geek
they almost kissed! yes!!
love this story; happy writing(:

Emily, I can't wait to find out who they saw! I've been trying to guess but haven't really come up with anything yet, maybe its Snape? But anyway Keep writing and Post more soon!!
-Cassie